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mcwoods 
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 Topic: I Believe Im Destined for Great Things..Posted: 20 November 2008 at 7:42pm |
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Picture this, tha crystal envisions me gettin' awards
and people appreciate the shit that im gettin' em for signature so valuable, in the end.. i wish i'd written some more
if you can't see what i see then your vision is poor i got quality qualities, that set me apart from the rest an unnerving belief in myself, try and put my heart to the test like a monk through enlightenment, acheived by merely thinkin' its true an historical sense of legendary legacies linked with a new updated time scale and a present disposition of thought you can call this arrogance or a depiction thats wrong
but i know what im capable of.. you aint gotta doubt, yet
jus' cause some characteristics of my brilliance dont come shinin' thru the outset you give me half a chance, and the jobs done twice as well as the next man a mindset so solid, theres not a thing it can't withstand imma be a big fuckin' shiny star.. that's true to this date confused with arrogance and stupidity, because few can relate born with something different, call it, "it" of some capacity got wit, charm, intelligence, mixed with determintion and tenacity
got a go gettem attitude, soon to be i've got em' even people that dont know me, know my names one not to be forgotten though the sand of time may sift through my brothers i know i will be remembered far apart from any other no one on earth can comprehend the greatness of my potential it's like immovibility meetin' somethin' unstoppable, the consequences are exponential when bruce talked on longevity
he said to become immortal, you must first leave a life worth rememberin'
my words can become gigantic, just let me demonstrate
i have the power to finally put the bible in second place think back to this day.. and you'll say now i've made it
i'll say i made it long ago in my mind.. just the thought's never faded whether you think you can or you cant.. your definately right i seek out impowerment in every action to gain immeasurable might a thought from the master should explain what i havent'
a victorious army... is victorius first and then seeks out battle think about it.. Edited by mcwoods - 20 November 2008 at 7:43pm |
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CHAIN
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Posted: 21 November 2008 at 8:34am |
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damn homie, what the fuck happened to you?? lol
this nigga went from lil' wayne to Rakim,
 wow...u really stepped it up like crazy, especially your flow
i see u....
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Freeda5thDawg
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Posted: 23 November 2008 at 4:15pm |
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^^^lmao...
but foreal, this is one of your greater pieces of all time, woods...only thing i see that lacked was the multis and a more steady flow...there were stretched lines in many parts due to too many words being crammed up to complete the thought...but what you were saying made up for that...the lyricism shows great improvement because this time, you're actually approaching something more creative and deeper than just a usual "punchline" here and there...i liked it very much...and can't believe it's being slept on... "confused with arrogance and stupidity, because few can relate" "i have the power to finally put the bible in second place" ^gems... |
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 23 November 2008 at 8:58pm |
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no one on earth can comprehend the greatness of my potential
Yeah, definately agree with Freeda on approaching something more creative and deeper then just the usual "punchline" piece. Good work, Woods. This was definately an enjoyable read. |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Kay B
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Posted: 25 November 2008 at 9:52am |
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Woody....empty ur pm box
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 25 November 2008 at 10:05am |
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And only then will he feed this! :P
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Posted: 03 December 2008 at 3:39pm |
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¡Woods... get me a lighter...!
Just messin'... Impeccable flow... Complex multies are not your style... so do not be forced to use them... You had lots of short, internal assonance rhymes with a good choice of vocabulary... whether it was intentional or not... A simple but effective technique to improve flow without using multies... The content was deep... Lines were creative and thought-provoking... reminded me of Immortal Technique... Good shit, dude... Adios...  |
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Kay B
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Posted: 03 December 2008 at 3:57pm |
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There's a pt II to this ft yours truly, if woods ever gets his lazy ass writing....
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Senor Perfecto
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Posted: 03 December 2008 at 4:35pm |
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Cool...
Can't wait to read Woods' shit and quickly glance over your's... Adios... |
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Posted: 03 December 2008 at 4:51pm |
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Hey a quick glance is better than nothing at all :-)
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Posted: 03 December 2008 at 4:51pm |
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Lol
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