Open Mic: Sucker For Love

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    Posted: 25 November 2008 at 5:35am
the swagger's back.....
 
 
 
Sucker for love uhmm uhmm...
 
          
Naked in Jacuzzi water mating with a bougie broad 
Cranium was truly awesome, taped her like a movie star 
Preparing for fellatio while taking all my jewelry off 
Anally unstable, she mased me with her fuel’s exhausts 
Crazier than Luda’s bars, the lady isn’t mucus soft 
Played it like she knew it all but gave in to the bootie calls 
Saving it for marriage, I bait her with a boob message 
The pussy half cougar, I taste her as I chew her bra  
Spraying on her coochi’s walls, placed it where her truth’s installed 
Slaying her for days, YOU take ‘em to amusement parks 
Hating ‘cause your boo is a waitress that will screw her boss 
Lazy and not caked up and too heinous for the beauty spa 
But back to my angel, naval with the beauty mark 
Loves what I does and the shape of my bazooka arms 
Testing my gangsta by saying shit like: ‘who’s in charge?’ 
Grab her by the hair like: ‘take it as a Coup d’état’ 
Behaving like apes like Sayans when the moon is large 
Been dating my baby since Lakey had this feud with Nas
Relationship’s so fruitful a break up would be too bizarre 
Beyonce Knowles fan so an apron or a broom’s a “naw” 
Shakes it and displays it, her bacon is my new Allah 
Erased what I presumed and changed what my medulla thought 
Laced her with the Gucci drawers, a mania of Louie scarves 
Generous but not the one who gave her that Suzuki car  
I’m far more flavorful like bracelets made of puma claws 
Kentucky Fried replaced by grade A from the rooster farms 
From Vegas to Bermuda I’ll race ya to subdue her heart    
I will pay the price when paper can’t reduce the cost
 
 
…I’ll do it all                                           
 
  
Sucker for love uhmm uhmm , smh  
 
 
 
 
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Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuckin' fiiiiiiiire, fam!

Daaaaaaaaaammmmn!

Swagger and then some, Ain't no one touchin' that!
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Remember that bar we was talking bout? Well it just got raised. And it aint getting reached for a while. So many quotables but you know that Vegas to Bermuda line is easily my favourite. Glad you dropped this, now I have something to try and top.
 
Real dope man. Stop being so modest!
 
EDIT: Maybe on that line it should be "I will" instead of "I'll"... seems to flow better for me!


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Been dating my baby since Lakey had this feud with Nas
 
This was dope..this whole fucking thing was dope..the opening bars just set the tempo and you never looked back..you never lacked content and this just showed how tight you're writtens can really be..imo this was above you're other shit even though I thought that in itself would be a struggle to do..dope shit Chain and yes I actually mean DOPE
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yeah, pssh...fuck that...shit was too sick...even though it ain't my type of content, pssh, you delivered that verse real nice...metaphors were crazy throughout...still continue to display your unique way of saying things...very clever and intelligent...good shit man...
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Very cool piece...Liked the content and some lines were pretty funny...These were my favorite lines..Ain't much else to say that you don't already know or have been told...

I’m far more flavorful like bracelets made of puma claws
Kentucky Fried replaced by grade A from the rooster farms 
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