Text Battle Archive: Point Blank Vs. Se�or Perfecto

And it goes like this...

You're the Craziest Kid On LA because you dared to battle me,
Except for feeding... I'll have you beaten in every category,
I know you're cheatin'...  You've got more riders than a cavalry,
But they'll admit you can't match the accuracy of my faculty,
Without ID... you'd be lost in LA like missing infants,
When you're not biting orion's rhymes... you diss delinquents,
You heard TheTruth: what realness? does dude own a shotty?
You're a thirteen year old going through puberty... so you're spotty,
You even lost a topical to SdoubleC,
So I'd be surprised to find any of your text trouble me,
You've no sense...  I'll push you off the top of a large building,
Or kill him with the instilling lyricism that he's unskilled in,
Every thread becomes a joke... even when you pay respects,
Y'all is fucked up now...  You know you shouldn't play with Vets,
He should retrace his steps so he sees the big picture,
That Kid's a dick-licker...  That's why your clique picked ya,
But I don't like your style...  You try too much to be Eminem,
You'll lose your friends on MSN and won't get a PM again,
You'll be like the Members you complain about when you beg for votes,
And Dean will leave LA with egg on his face... with extra yolk...

Adios...

Good battle, kinda...

Perfecto... Good drop, enjoyed the personals barring the Dalinquent and large buildings lines, they didn't come through with enough relevance, the Dalinquent personal could've been scrapped altogether if you were to use the "biting Orion" thing to its full capacity... That aside though it's a fairly weak personal as it obviously wasn't a bite... Your usual slow start sets you back a bit as well, with your opening 4 lines really doing nothing more than building up an offense, which is fine, but not with such a short amount of bars to work with... The S Double C personal was put very simple but was effective, same goes for the closer... The Big Picture and PM again lines flowed Perfectoly but both, and in particular the PM again line, lacked real relevance or impact... Very enjoyable verse, excellent flow and rhyme scheme, sparse punching...

Point... Your opening 6 lines were by far the best in the verse and arguably the best in the battle... Brilliantly worked personals with everything on-point... some of the best shit I've ever read against Perfecto... but I don't know what happened after that... The rhyme scheme was present but flat... lacking the drive and fluency that Perfecto's had, barring the chemicals squirt line, but then that was all filler, so you struggle to rhyme in full effect whilst landing punches which is something you need to work on but are constantly improving at... Spanish/Asian shit is a played personal, and Jacko lines with regards to him raping boys, his skin, whatever, played punchline... That aside it was fairly original but ineffective... SP could have been worked a looot better, Eiffel 65 was poor, the posse punch was funny tho, the sort of thing I'd do... Enjoyable verse, good flow and rhyme scheme, inconsistent punching...

This is very tight... but it'll go to Point for me, he had three absolute killer blows while Perfecto had none, granted along with this Point had three throwaway bars but though Senor's offense was continual, his punching was not, and he also had throwaway material...

Very close, unfair one to call...

VOTE: Point Blank

2-0 Point Blank

Point - Nice flow. I'll agree with Orion that the first half was pretty decent, but seemed to fall off abit towards the last half. Not bad, but compared to the first several lines, it just seemed lacking. "Change That Hall Of Fame Shit To The Last Battle Loser" was pretty good, and got a laugh. As long as you keep the same consistency throughout your entire verse, this would be hard to beat by almost anyone...

Senor - Simple punches, and good flow, though sometimes at the expense of a more venomous verse. Could do for a bit more continuity or focus on the punching end, as they were there, but nothing too killer to note. All in all, another pretty good SP verse, flow-wise, but I think Point had you with his opening few bars.

Good battle both...

Vote: Point