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rapdisup 
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 Topic: wow realyPosted: 14 January 2010 at 6:48pm |
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a lyricists born,ona biggamists door, showing my floors,no remorse...of course jus a steady pace of writtens,avioding tha wars why they deploying wats yours,an troops be dying in fours its kinda crazy an shady,wat goes on in our lifes kids carry knifes,an smoking nines,like its fine can i explain all this pain,as i continue to flow cos we aint winnin it ya'll,..I mean life ya know? it might sound like my story is kinda farfectched lyrics a lil stretched,but lemme confess i quess im kinda to blame for sum mistakes on this earth cos i been a devil since birth,but i did my research brought out alla tha worlds faults,an put em onto this beat i didnt even need to tlk bout gunz an the streets every single line i sed,frisbied round an was real an i prove lyrical skill,why kids be sound but on pills! so tha point of wat im saying is.. jus relax sick of al you multi jacks..have that shit back! i aint keystlye nuttin for a while ya get my point tho yall! was jus messing bout no topic jus flowing sum shyt seein as everyone a multi king lol |
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
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Stalin
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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 6:52pm |
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Not a bad peice, but unfortunately those arent multis.. Get at me on MSN ill help u
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rapdisup
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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 6:55pm |
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lol was jus a key literaly i logged on an saw a post an thought ill key sumthing straight in tha box lol dunno if it even makes sense tbh lol ill be on later tho Fam thanks
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
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CHAIN
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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 8:51pm |
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a lyricists born,ona biggamists door,
showing my floors,no remorse...of course jus a steady pace of writtens,avioding tha wars why they deploying wats yours,an troops be dying in fours this is the best i've seen from u, and fuck a multi, they're not essential just make sure you word ya shit right to get your point across...and u did just that, so props
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rapdisup
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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 8:56pm |
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Thanks Chain i get both ya points tho its cool Stal' was pointing out that i may be confused on as to wat a multi is an you jus kept it real so Thanks man ima try keep this up an add some multis!
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 3:30am |
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so tha point of wat im saying is.. jus relax
sick of al you multi jacks..have that shit back! Nice to see you're workin' on endin' pieces right rather than just when you run out of lines Keep up, you're deffo elevatin' |
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 11:37am |
This. Keep elevating rap, up your spelling/presentation game to make shit look neater and more readable. I have faith in you dude lol! |
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 11:57am |
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WTF. Is this a New Era wank off, over rap? Ok, ok... Yeah, content was some of the best I've seen from you, rap. Some nice lines in there, delivery and flow could have been better to make this piece a lot better, that being said, this is A grade from you. You may say this was just a "key in the box" - but it seems like more thought, and effort, went into this piece, over any other I've read from you. Props. |
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Calibra
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 12:00pm |
Yes, welcome. Aim away from the eyes. |
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rapdisup
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 2:11pm |
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lol @ alla ya'll damn this remind me of wen New Era was formed lol i alwayz been a secret member haha but thanks for tha feed everyone Ill try keep uppin my game thanks again
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 2:54pm |
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Now you Was a Secret Member....Damn tha Betrayal Continues
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rapdisup
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 3:28pm |
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I aint never gunna live down this betrayal shit am i? haha i know yu think im sum sorta spy or sum shyt haha
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 6:13pm |
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lol to the convo...
but the piece was nice but i didnt catch some of the flow
havent really read anything from you lately so i cant compare it or say your gettin better but its was good bro :D
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