Final) Sparta vs 2smooth
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Category: Tournament Boards
Forum Name: Textual Torture
Forum Description: The 8th Text Tournament, winner: 2smooth
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13214
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:55am
Topic: Final) Sparta vs 2smooth
Posted By: Scotty32
Subject: Final) Sparta vs 2smooth
Date Posted: 02 October 2007 at 4:59pm
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24 lines First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 9th October 2007 at 23:59 GMT (thats UK Time, so don't try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'in it to me, my email address is in my profile, so Server Errors are not a valid excuse Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. This battle is for the Text Champion title -------------  |
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 02 October 2007 at 5:49pm
No offense scotty, but thats kinda bullshit to strip Kon of the title...how bout the winner gets a title shot or somethin... -------------  |
Scotty32 wrote:Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 02 October 2007 at 6:03pm
In all fairness, Game kinda agreed in the bullshit thread...He jokingly said something about how scott couldn't give him the title he already has...
Should be a dope battle tho ------------- 
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Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 03 October 2007 at 11:05am
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Amazing... the title was drawn on a couple of no-shows... haaaaahahaha
Anyone got a moral of the story? Anyone? ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 03 October 2007 at 11:21am
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for the record, i never 'stripped' kon of the title, it was ALWAYS on the line. and its a bit pointless the title holder is in the tourny then the winner faces the title holder if the title holder is out of the tourny. this is how its always been done. and O, it aint my fault people no-show ------------- |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 03 October 2007 at 11:22am
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So what if Ikon hadn't of been in the tournament? that woulda of fucked things up.... -------------  |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 03 October 2007 at 11:56am
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no it wouldnt, as it would THEN be how flash said, winner gets title shot, which again is how its always been. ------------- |
Posted By: Mackie
Date Posted: 03 October 2007 at 12:21pm
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lol if sparta wins n has every title apart from the audio...
(sparta u shud do audio) |
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 03 October 2007 at 6:41pm
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Kon didnt no show tho...he was ONE FUCKIN day late...this is bullshit (no offense to my boys smoothy and spart) ------------- |
Posted By: Swift Styles
Date Posted: 03 October 2007 at 7:02pm
ay watch your moouth ir youll be banned by scotty for annoying him  -------------  |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 04 October 2007 at 11:34am
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Yea but way back when you were Mr. "let's postpone so the title isn't decided on no-shows"... I dunno, makes no difference to me... I don't know all the ins, outs and minor details of this situation to be able to speak on it in any detail... just the irony was amusing ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 04 October 2007 at 3:08pm
never stopped you before ------------- |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 04 October 2007 at 4:42pm
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Ohh, good one! Look everyone... Scotty tryin' to one up me again... I don't get involved in arguments in detail unless I know what happened...when have I? Yeeaaa exactly, don't speak just to speak...and I love how you selected that part and not the first part of the post...not that I want to hear whatever excuse you can come up with anyway, 'cuz I'm sure it'd just be laughable, as is all too often the case...ja digg? ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: G-Pfeif
Date Posted: 04 October 2007 at 6:31pm
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im not sayin i shouldnt have been no showed per say.... nor am i sayin kon should or shouldnt have... but this is a little rediculous having the final bracket made up of guys advancing from no-shows... i mean i personally would wanna say that i beat everyone i faced, not just advanced on a technicality.... yea.. i shoulda gotten my verse in... but we have lives (as is clear in both mine and Kon's cases)... i just think some more leniency should have been offered... especially in kon's case as he is 1. the title holder... and 2. wasnt physically able to get to a computer... ------------- <img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" /> "I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 04 October 2007 at 6:35pm
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Yea, scotty was wrong, but what can u do, its already done wit...besides big deal if theyre both from no shows, it could be worse, it could be 2 noobs that just got lucky wit no shows and advanced. Atleast theres 2 pro guys goin at it |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 10 October 2007 at 2:04pm
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Sparta: ~i'm sure youve all seen james bond (007), the doule 0 prefix is the licence to kill....hes from california (the OC)...email addy- toosmoothweezer, weezing=coughing, struggling to breathe...hes recently become a mod...he led asassins about the time they died...if you dont get the rest plz dont vote Yo, I'm surprised your fuckin' bitch ass even went this far But now I'm sure to handle Smooth like an expensive car When I dent your bars, it's clear that this fool is a fake Like how he's been forum_posts.asp?TID=12227" rel="nofollow - yappin' for forum_posts.asp?TID=12477&PN=2" rel="nofollow - time and still ain't made a move to the plate I mean, I don't know why this fucker thinks his rep's all that When the level of his spits just stayin' in the middle, like his text format There's no way you're topping this, you should be duckin' me, bitch Good job Scotty's let you edit shit...your verses fuckin' need it How you think you gon' survive now you matched up with death Check his addy, my bars already got him gasping for breath It'll be no surprise when LA sees this ho getting hammered When his bitchass only got here through two no-shows and an ama Yeah, now he's actually got an opponent, I'll ensure he stays in the dirt Had to rely on Ikon to save him like people prayin' in church He'll try begging me for mercy, but I'll just punch him all the same It's clear he's coming runner-up in this, just check the number in his name COme on, this battle's so one-sided, it's like I'm spitting soliloquys Funny how this kid's got his double-0 (smOOth) and he still won't be killing me You think you comin' with sickness but Im'a diss you harder I ain't seen nothing hot come outta the O.C since Mischa Barton Only way your bars would hit is if I was droppin' them for ya And don't think cos this tourney's over for you that I'll be stopping your Torture Assassins died in his tenure, and everyone's blaming this gay So I'll just finish off by sending him the same fuckin' way... 2Smooth: Expo's... yo, my art's blessed... so any thoughts of you winnin' are far-fetched... no-one can fuck wit' Smooth, plus, this punk is a sissy! you're over-rated! it's easy to see that this herb is a fake... i'm just bein' honest... everything i'm rappin' is true... i'm not sorry that you're gettin' destroyed an' ya' worthless... ...Boom!... ------------- |
Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 10 October 2007 at 2:44pm
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DO NOT READ THIS PRIOR TO VOTING ----------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------- FYI: 1 bar=2 lines for the sake of making this vote shorter... Sparta Opener-Nice, good original wordplay Bar 2-Wasn't really feeling...Couldn't find relevance in 1st link Bar 3-Concept was there...wasn't feeling the wording tho, decent bar Bar 4-Again, good concept...Poor wording, Still a decent hit Bar 5-Wasn't feeling...Could have use the personal much more effective Bar 6-Dope concept, Wording issues for me...Still a pretty good hit Bar 7-Nice IMO Bar 8-Pretty good as well...Could have been more effective Bar 9-Nice...Good land Bar 10-Decent punch...Could have been much better but not bad Bar 11-Wasn't feeling...Felt fillerish to me... Closer-Wasn't feeling either...Concept could have been used much better...something about the last line was off too... Overall...Pretty good verse...Fairly subpar to the rest of your shit and honestly a disappointment for a tourney final verse...Regular text battle would have been cool but I felt you didn't really bring what you could have here...Something I noticed too, Was that the majority of your lines were indirect...Not in the sense that they were general or not dissing him, But in the sense that you weren't actually adressing him, Like you was telling me what you goin do to him...FUCK THAT SHIT...Tell him you goin murder his ass...It lands much harder...Good shit tho Sparta Smooth Opener-Dope wordplay...Kinda made something outta nothing...Feeling it Bar 2-Nice personal...Was executed fairly well...good job Bar 3-Dope, Can't believe your the first to use it... Bar 4-Wasn't feeling this bar...Just too indirect for me Bar 5-Good rebound from previous bar...nice wordplay Bar 6-Decent punch...Sparta shit getting kinda old but this was okay Bar 7-Nice...Nothing else to say... Bar 8-Good bar...Could have been used better but not bad Bar 9-Pretty good bar again...Like the concept Bar 10-Good concept...Could have been used more effectively, decent Bar 11-Nice use of personal...Figured Sparta would have use something like this instead you you Closer-haha, didn't get at first, but with the expo found this funny...good shit Overall...Pretty dope verse, One bar I just wasn't feeling at all and some others that could have been better but overall, it was nice...Had some real stingers in ya verse...Was overly attacking and direct the majority of the time...Lot of clever shit with a lil not so clever but hey, not like your me... This was a nice battle, Not the typical final but still good...I enjoyed reading both verses...I felt like sparta started with a nice opener, fell off and picked it up towards the end whereas smooth was consistent throughout his verse... Nice battle, Smooth Get my vote for having the harder punches in my opinion... Best of luck to you both... -------------
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 10 October 2007 at 3:05pm
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Sparta I'm surprised your fuckin' bitch ass even went this far But now I'm sure to handle Smooth like an expensive car Nice not a really hard hitting punch but was a nice opener set the scene and it did hit nice personal When I dent your bars, it's clear that this fool is a fake Like how he's been yappin' for time and still ain't made a move to the plate Meh this was iight, like dal said i didnt really see the relevance i guess it was a personal but not a real hard hitting one I mean, I don't know why this fucker thinks his rep's all that When the level of his spits just stayin' in the middle, like his text format Nice punch coulda been better but it hit There's no way you're topping this, you should be duckin' me, bitch Good job Scotty's let you edit shit...your verses fuckin' need it Nice hit How you think you gon' survive now you matched up with death Check his addy, my bars already got him gasping for breath Don't personally like punches about addys n shit they on par with msnnames imo....wasnt too hard It'll be no surprise when LA sees this ho getting hammered When his bitchass only got here through two no-shows and an ama Lol nice personal Yeah, now he's actually got an opponent, I'll ensure he stays in the dirt Had to rely on Ikon to save him like people prayin' in church Nice He'll try begging me for mercy, but I'll just punch him all the same It's clear he's coming runner-up in this, just check the number in his name Nice COme on, this battle's so one-sided, it's like I'm spitting soliloquys Funny how this kid's got his double-0 (smOOth) and he still won't be killing me Nice personal You think you comin' with sickness but Im'a diss you harder I ain't seen nothing hot come outta the O.C since Mischa Barton Decent punch, could of been better though Only way your bars would hit is if I was droppin' them for ya And don't think cos this tourney's over for you that I'll be stopping your Torture Nice,not a really hard hitting punch though Assassins died in his tenure, and everyone's blaming this gay So I'll just finish off by sending him the same fuckin' way... Wasnt really feeling this as a closer tbh punch was there but meh... Overall - This was a nice verse, but iv seen ALOT better from you kinda seems rushed tbh and i know you can do ALOT better wasnt what id expect from you in a final your other verse's have KILLED people but this was....it just didnt seem like you. Punches lacked real venom and it was a real inconsistent verse. Smooth my art's blessed... so any thoughts of you winnin' are far-fetched... 'cuz it has nothin' to do wit' wordplay when i'm takin' APART S! Dope, nice play and it hit decent opener ...an' ya' heart's next... you're fuckin' wit' the angel of death... plus you're a shitty leader... that's why kon chose Fatal instead!* Nice personal, good punch and it landed this lame'll get wrecked... fuck ya' blueprints, i'll stomp ya' best plans it's your first year at Uni... how come you still ain't droppin' 'Fresh, man??'* Lol nice give it a rest, fam... for reals, that crap's weak... 'cuz i'm doin' laps around ya' track while you're takin' a back seat... This was iight not a direct personal hit towards sparta seemed more of a 'enter name' punch now you're gettin' your ass beat 'cuz i'm breakin' ya' raps, geek... plus my verse'll leave 'S at the bottom' like 'makin' a map key!!'* Dope an' if you ask me, you're gonna be ashamed when i'm winnin' this... because i'm puttin' an' end to Sparta like my name was Flamininus!* Nice no-one can fuck wit' Smooth, plus, this punk is a sissy! now it's S-turn... but it ain't rainin', so i'll be done wit' him quickly!!* Dope you're over-rated! it's easy to see that this herb is a fake... 'cuz he ain't a charmer... but always stays workin' wit' snakes!!* Cool punch...it hit ya' verse? a disgrace... it shows 'cuz ya' drops suck! might as well call me AKON the way i got SP "locked up"!!!* Seen the akon locked up concept before but this time it was personal so it added extra...nice bar an' no, you're not tough... but I'M unstoppable, kid... so keep on sellin' them wolf-tickets an' stick to topicals, bitch!* Nice i'm just bein' honest... everything i'm rappin' is true... i only voted you to win so you wouldn't feel as bad when you lose!!! Nice i'm not sorry that you're gettin' destroyed an' ya' worthless... 'cuz in THIS battle? i'm takin' the piss, yet missin' the toilet on purpose!!* Lol nice Overall - preety nice verse had some dope hits and flowed perfect throughout couple bars i liked but the majority was real nice, good use of personals -------------------------------------------------------- Overall vote - Pretty disappointed with sparta's verse for the reason i know he can do alot better not that his was bad but it lacked real venom that his verse's are usually full of, and he paid for it here...Smooth was a clear winner imo had the doper punches and i enjoyed the read more and was more consistent throughout. Smooth gmv ------------- |
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 10 October 2007 at 7:38pm
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Aite...
Sparta:
openeer was a nice play....second bar was ehhh...not feeling too much...text format lines was good...nice hit...edit punch was nice...msn punch was ok...nothing special, maybe if reworded it coulda been a tighter punch...no show way to the final was a dope personal....kon savin him was nice...007 was tight....OC line was dope...best bar of ya verse so far...stoppin ya torture was tight..no OH SHIT...but still nice....closer coulda been dope with rewording/more aggressive wording... Smoothy:
opener was tight...lmao @ next bar...ill say nothing...fresh man bar was good, nothing special, but was a nice play...back seat was a nice bar...map key was dope...flimininus was tight...i think his name is pronounced differently tho so ya flow is off...i think its Flamin-I-nes (stress the I) ....s turn was tight...pb is startin to get old...but this was a nice hit...locked up was ok...lol topicals was good...voted for you was funny...good hit...closer was dope...the wording was original and funny
overall this was a nice battle, but smooth jus killed it wit a dope verse...
Vote: 2s ------------- |
Posted By: sparta
Date Posted: 11 October 2007 at 2:32am
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Not gooing to argue with that...congrats smooth
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Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 11 October 2007 at 3:56am
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vote sparta for sportsmanship award...
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Posted By: 2smooth
Date Posted: 11 October 2007 at 9:36am
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thanks Spart, good battle homie... an' thanks to the voters as well... |
Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 11 October 2007 at 2:16pm
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well done smooth.
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