How To Write A Bar...
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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Rap Tutorials
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 5:05am
Topic: How To Write A Bar...
Posted By: Point Blank
Subject: How To Write A Bar...
Date Posted: 22 February 2008 at 11:16am
Something I Wrote Time Ago To Help The Noobs In My Crew, Thought It Might Come In Useful For People Who Wanna Develop Their Skills
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 22 February 2008 at 12:18pm
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You have no idea how many times ive tried to explain matching up and rhyming syllables...you, however, explained it well with good examples. Maybe the newbs will stop buggin me for help now lol...Props on this P... -------------  |
Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 2:19am
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Why would noobs bug you for help?????
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Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 11:20am
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or other easy way to make multis is using perfect rhyme or similar sound 1's read your lines bleed four times ^ pick the easiest words that rhymes with each other.. read/bleed your/four lines/times ... ------------- 
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Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 12:11pm
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Rameez... if you follow Point Blank's tutorial... you will see that in your example... "read", "your" and "lines" are all emphasised... This means that in order to make multies... you will have to rhyme all three words... as you have done... Restricting your rhymes to perfect rhymes severely limits the amount and variety of multies which you can come up with... A much easier way is to use assonance rhymes which have the same vowel sounds but different consonants...
Now... if you take the same words but only emphasise "read" and "lines"... you will have the same phrase and same meaning... but to make multies you have to rhyme both emphasised words... but remember to keep a spacing of one syllable between them...
Some of these examples sound more forced than others... Experiment with your own rhymes to create fluid multies... However... multies which sound good are useless without meaning... This is just one element of lyricism... Adios...  -------------  |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 12:25pm
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thanks for collaborating... assonance rhymes are hard to think of.. -------------
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 1:21pm
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No their not^
its easier cuz your not restricted to forced rhymes...like the ones you usually have in your verses ------------- |
Posted By: Cee-Jay Outlaw
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 3:00pm
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^ I speak for ram here Flash BITCH!! -------------  |
Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 9:09pm
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Word. Good tutorial Peanut Butter. Ram, it's only obvious that it's easier to use assonance rhymes because there is a broader variety of words to choose from and switch it up with. I noticed that almost all new emcees tend to rhyme words that are spelled the same at the end, or usually share the same suffix. GRanted, these words do rhyme, but by thinking of the sound of the word, rather than the spelling, you are opening a much broader lexicon for your spits. One of the things you should really focus on, so that you can get that ever-so-sick flow that uncle sage has. Church.
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 10:19pm
Who the fuck are you? Oh yea, i remember! The one with the garbage ass verses...Fuck outta here
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Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 11:34pm
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thanks sage n fatal.. I' dig into rhyming and I found all types of rhyming used in hiphop.. hope this helps every1... the one that is yellow is the one we usually use the most *The basic scheme in each & every verse, the heart of the flow. Perfect rhyme: Term refers to the immediately recognizable norm: true/blue, mountain/fountain. Imperfect rhyme: Term referring to rhymes that are close but not exact: lap/shape, glorious/nefarious. Eye rhyme: Based on similarity of spelling rather than sound. Often these are highly conventional, and reflect historical changes in pronunciation: love/move/prove, why/envy. Rich rhyme: A word rhymes with its homonym: blue/blew, guessed/guest. Assonant rhyme: Rhyming with similar vowels, different consonants: dip/limp, man/prank. Consonant rhyme: Rhyming with similar consonants, different vowels: limp/lump, bit/bet. Scarce rhyme: Rhyming on words with limited rhyming alternatives: whisp/lisp, motionless/oceanless. Macaronic rhyme: Macaronic verse uses more than one language, as in medieval lyrics with Latin refrains. Macaronic rhyme is also bilingual: glory/pro patria mori, sure/kreatur, queasy/civilisé. -------------
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Posted By: Swift Styles
Date Posted: 24 February 2008 at 11:51pm
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if thats a copy paste jobby y did u edit it? -------------  |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 25 February 2008 at 12:09am
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I edit only the sentences I wrote.. I try to write my post with less grammar mistakes :) cuz English is my third language so bla bla bla.. therefore I got tendency to edit, can't help it -------------
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Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 25 February 2008 at 11:45pm
| Good find Ram...I guess. But if a cat on here ever used "limp" with "lump " or "bit" with "bet"....I'd still call em wack. |
Posted By: dalinquent
Date Posted: 26 February 2008 at 12:07am
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lmao^ true tho
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 26 February 2008 at 6:05pm
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Yea, alot of that shit was horrible...i suggest NOT following that guide lol... ------------- |
Posted By: concieted
Date Posted: 02 April 2008 at 3:13am
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ur wak ur self.... ------------- hi |
Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 02 April 2008 at 5:52am
| You're the one reading the tutorials holmes. |
Posted By: Mikey Dinero
Date Posted: 06 May 2008 at 8:44pm
Making Multi's Isnt That Hard..
Spitten Is Written In The Book
Grippin The Scripten's In The Hook
^Bam....Shouldnt Be That Hard For Fuck Sake! ------------- Mikey Da Prince. |
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 08 May 2008 at 12:41am
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I never said it was hard...wtf you talkin about? ------------- |
Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 09 May 2008 at 8:10am
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I wouldn't worry too much flash, this kid seems to have difficulty finding his own house...i mean, "Earth" is a pretty general idea of where you come from, na'mean? ------------- https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 09 May 2008 at 3:08pm
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Lol... ------------- |
Posted By: SageOne
Date Posted: 10 May 2008 at 3:14am
| Erm...what's a scripten? |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 10 May 2008 at 9:30am
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is there any easier punch tutorial than this..
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Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 10 May 2008 at 10:29am
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Rameez, u aint really need a tutorial for punches, best way is to see how other people do it and then practise it yourself. If you really need help maybe checkout jumpoff.tv and look at the battles on there, u can see from crowd reaction on there what a good punch is ;) ------------- https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 10 May 2008 at 11:01am
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aight thx fo da advise.. I'll check it ou
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Posted By: Fatal
Date Posted: 10 May 2008 at 1:49pm
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Rameez you need a english tutorial... ------------- |
Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 10 May 2008 at 2:34pm
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If I don't know English I wouldn't be here..
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Posted By: Matt The Ripper
Date Posted: 10 May 2008 at 5:09pm
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LOL @ even THAT being worded poorly and making little sense! ------------- Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
Posted By: Silber
Date Posted: 09 January 2009 at 11:35pm
still dosent make much sense though. ------------- NIGGAS TALKIN BOUT ALAH THIS AND ALLAH THAT, IF ALLAH LOVES YALL WHY THE FUCK YOU LIVE IN A SANDBOX, AND GOTTA DRINK MUD, AND EAT GOATSHIT FOR DINNER B? LOOKS LIKE ALLAH LOVES ME CUS IM EATIN STEAK |
Posted By: Speed Ice
Date Posted: 26 May 2009 at 6:38pm
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LMAO - English isn't my 1st language,but still I can drop dope lines like cocaine. ------------- If you're trying to be *Worthington Labs* intending to supress the *X-gene* Still I'll be the One who "Last Stands",Leave you all *eX-Men*,off the scene. |
Posted By: LyriKiller
Date Posted: 21 July 2013 at 7:39pm
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Woww! Thanks point blank It really helped me....!
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Posted By: Et Cetra
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 7:18pm
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THANX ------------- For the love of god please shut this site down |
Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 07 January 2014 at 7:50pm
| I wrote this when I was like 14/15 so my bad for Starting Every Word With A Capital Letter |
Posted By: Et Cetra
Date Posted: 13 January 2014 at 9:33pm
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Helpfull ------------- For the love of god please shut this site down |
Posted By: fuckoff
Date Posted: 13 January 2014 at 9:34pm
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[QUOTE=Point Blank]I wrote this when I was like 14/15 so my bad for Starting Every Word With A Capital Letter[/QUOTE lmao at the effort it must take to do that -------------  |