R1) D. King vs. Dalinquent
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Category: Tournament Boards
Forum Name: The 10th Plague
Forum Description: 10th Text Tournament by Bolo. Winner: mcwoods
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=16177
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 5:05am
Topic: R1) D. King vs. Dalinquent
Posted By: Bolo
Subject: R1) D. King vs. Dalinquent
Date Posted: 12 September 2008 at 11:00pm
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10 lines First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided If you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show (IMPORTANT: If you don't think you will be able to make it, the sooner you make me aware of it, the better, as a reserve will be selected to take your place.) All verses must be in by: Saturday, 20th of September 2008 at 12:00 AM EST (that's Midnight on Friday) Theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'ing it to me, my email address is in my profile. If you have to e-mail your verse, make sure you title of the e-mail reads: "(your username) - Round 1 verse vs. (your opponent)". NO EXCUSES. Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. If you finish your verse ahead of the deadline, send it to me as soon as possible. Verses will be posted and the battles opened for votes as soon as both verses are received. ------------- I am the one that knocks... |
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Posted By: Bolo
Date Posted: 20 September 2008 at 1:02am
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Dal: Are you fuckin' kidding me bo? I shouldn't even have to bother My punches 'lands-a-lot sir' so fuck king, Watch me beat upon this arthur Got that? haha You the weakest fucker, It's fact... So in this tourney, You're coming in last King's close to ill?? Please i'mma prove this http://cm1.dotspotter.com/media/0/65/97/Stacey_Dash_King_Magazine_Cover.0.0.0x0.353x469.jpeg" rel="nofollow - bitch is nothing but ass Try fucking with that? ...Stupid you can get broken and bruised quick... When it comes to ' http://kicentral.com/" rel="nofollow - King I Land ' - Jus fa the voters amusement I'm too sick, And you shit, So I'm breaking ya jaw Taking the crown? BITCH THE ONLY THING YOU TAKE IS A LOSS Time to finish him off, You gotta be retarded to this bitch is great Cuz the last king worth respected was shot and killed in 68 D. King: FYI- dal's myspace http://www.myspace.com/activistproductionz" rel="nofollow - www.myspace.com/activistproductionz dal produces beats..... the quality of them not that professinal.. little or no feed back when he post majorty of his beats. http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=16197&KW=&PID=174405#174405" rel="nofollow - CLICK HERE the rest is explanatory... just ask if u don't get any thing enjoy....... Yo, King is the master, and your a dalinquentcuz this kid's a disaster, 10th plgue disfigurement there no sense in trying to be belligerent i mean u claim to produce? but bearly on the internet* ( little feed back) dal's substnace needs drama and beef, the merry and groovy i'll smoke dal like a marijuana leaf, in http://images.google.com/images?gbv=2&hl=en&safe=off&q=scary+movie+&btnG=Search+Images" rel="nofollow - Scary Movie you could be 6ft, no matter http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=www.thezreview.co.uk/posters/posterimages/h/howhigh.jpg&imgrefurl=www.thezreview.co.uk/posters/h/howhigh.htm&h=755&w=509&sz=100&hl=en&start=2&usg=__5S1HRc7mA-qHFlQ6HxnRrvPpyQs=&tbnid=D7guuTfKLWU6rM:&tbnh=142&tbnw=96&prev=/images%3Fq%3DHow%2Bhigh%2Bmovie%26gbv%3D2%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26sa%3DG" rel="nofollow - "How high" in the air, cuz about as far as u'll go, is as high as a http://littlepeopletoo.com/asccustompages/HTMLCatalogA/Chenille-Chair-Blue/214.html" rel="nofollow - kids chair , you got mediocore beats, and lyrics that are shallow too cuz even if "DAl" had a "LAMA", no one would follow you (Dalai Lama) ------------- I am the one that knocks... |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 20 September 2008 at 7:56am
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dal - nothing spectacualr - seems to be a theme for people assuming they will win lol, opener was okay - maybe needs rewording.. next on average too, not a brilliant hit, next one was very good, next one solid, and closer pretty hot - overall - solid verse - nothing crazy .. 7/10
d.king - came correct - but a problem with well crafted punches and personals, opener is just a random bit of drivel, which has no place in a battle - indirect too.. next bar was a decent idea, but it didnt come off.. coulda been a better punchline...with rewording.. next two bars where indirect - the chair was funny for wrong reasons lol, could use those punches on anybody and they wertn hard hitting.. closer had potential and was a good hit.. pretty good..
overall vote dalinquent - better more creative punches |
Posted By: Viper
Date Posted: 20 September 2008 at 11:47am
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Dal - Great open and close. The middle was just that...middle level. D.King - Your last line was hot. The rest, not so much. Had you put in some more lines like your closer, you'd be moving on. My vote - Dal. More hard hitting punches than King. Props to both, at least you guys were punching each other. |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 20 September 2008 at 12:05pm
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Preety much agree with viper, dal had two hot bars the opener and closer rest was just standard level really not great but not terrible, King seemed to have attempts at punches but nothing great apart from the last line Vote - Dal Had better overall verse and landed more punches 3-0 Ko -------------  |
Posted By: Bolo
Date Posted: 20 September 2008 at 12:12pm
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Dal's through...props king
------------- I am the one that knocks... |