FInal) McWoods vs. Dressed2Kill
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Tournament Boards
Forum Name: The 10th Plague
Forum Description: 10th Text Tournament by Bolo. Winner: mcwoods
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=16429
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 2:53am
Topic: FInal) McWoods vs. Dressed2Kill
Posted By: Bolo
Subject: FInal) McWoods vs. Dressed2Kill
Date Posted: 25 October 2008 at 12:04pm
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30 lines First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided If you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show (IMPORTANT: If you don't think you will be able to make it, the sooner you make me aware of it, the better, as a reserve will be selected to take your place.) All verses must be in by: Monday, 3rd of November 2008 at 12:00 AM EST (that's Midnight on Sunday) There's no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so don't wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'ing it to me, my email address is in my profile. NO EXCUSES. Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. If you finish your verse ahead of the deadline, send it to me as soon as possible. Verses will be posted and the battles opened for votes as soon as both verses are received. ------------- I am the one that knocks... |
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Posted By: Bolo
Date Posted: 01 November 2008 at 1:56am
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DTK: *Waynes daughter was in a car accident and died apparently?
*Aviators are a pair of sunglasses that he was wearing in the pic..also pilots wear em..pilots fly..should be self explanitory
*He used to write his text in green..green is the colour for envy
*Woods went to Italy and visited the tower
*A pistil is a part of a plant..also sounds like pistol..in his frees he writes about guns and shit
*On another site his Alias is MagicMark
*30 lines is the line amount..
Marks Finished!,We Know Ya Soft..Ya Your Styles Gay
I Didnt Have To Watch Toy Story To Know Woody's Childs Play!
Ya Lyrical Status Is Freezing Temperatures..Waay Below Zero!
Il Have Woods Crashin And Burning..Like The Daughter Of His Hero!*
Damn Mark, You Couldnt Hand Me A L If You Gave Me Papers
And The Only Time Woods Is Associated With Fly Is Sportin Aviators!*
I Land Punches Every Bar..Hell Its Not Hard To See That Hes Hurt
The Only Time Mark Is Looking Tight Is In A Fucking forum_posts.asp?TID=16309&PN=1" rel="nofollow - T-Shirt!
Well Call This Bitch A Door..Cuz Well Everybody's Knockin Him
Ya Battle Scores Negative!How Do You Expect This Outcome To Be Positive!?
Dude Ive Served You Three Times!Thats Almost Career Ending!
forum_posts.asp?TID=12167" rel="nofollow - He Aint Writin Like This Cuz Hes Irish ..This Fuckers Green With Envy!*
He Claims His The Greatest,Seriously?Man Please..
You're Fucking Ranked 75th..JUST ABOVE RAMEEZ!
The Past Is Catchin Up!Its The Fourth Time That Im Absuin Ya Rookie
Mark A Tranny?YUP!Cuz It Aint Hard To Get 'Wood Confused With A Pussy'
Dude Dress Is Keepin XFade On Top..Perfecto Dont Even Need Ya
You Enjoy Italy Huh?Ironically Im Gonna Be Leavin Ya Leanin Like http://www.weeks-family.net/assets/images/pissa.jpg" rel="nofollow - Pissa! *
We Aint Lyrically On The Same Level..You Need Luck Rhyming
Cuz Im The King Of This Jungle..You, You're Just Lion(Lyin)
You've Taken Shots On The Net..Its No Suprised You've Rimmed Out
forum_posts.asp?TID=15618" rel="nofollow - Woods Is A Gangsta ?He Couldnt 'Own A Pistil' If He http://www.agen.ufl.edu/%7Echyn/age2062/lect/lect_15/22_62.GIF" rel="nofollow - Bought A Greenhouse! *
Ya Writtens Are A Sewer Pipeline..Call All Ur Flowin Is Shit
Il Show MagicMark Is A Fake..Like I Was Exposing His Tricks!*
Ya Styles Mainstream And Played..Ya Game Is Gone And Its Killed
Woods Couldnt Be 'Associated With A Hot 30'..If His Mom Was A Milf!*
This Irish Kids Never Seen A Buck..Ya Whole Life Is A Misery
So Woods Making Paper?Hrmm..NOT EVEN LITERALLY!
After His Title Loss..This Kids Been Desperately Looking For Fame
An The Only People That Are Ridin Pine Are Kids That Arent Put In The Game!
Woods:
Expos:
*He no showed Nep in the first round, but was allowed back in, and 2smooth no showed him in the semi final *Smooth
has told me he's givin' him plays (Dal a Star - in his quarter battle)
and has helped him with wordin' - (Kay also has referred to this)... he
also told me he's beaten him 3 times easily and couldnt be bothered
puttin' up a verse.. lol, people saying he aint deserve his place here
as smooth would have beaten him if he showed.
*posted a new photo of himself in the PYP thread, with short hair, he used to have long, curly hair
*Josh Brolin, lead actor in "no country for old men"/ Josh Hertnett plays a guy who gives up sex for "40 days and 40 nights"
*His girl cheated on him, rumour is he cried over it, but he took her back / she's called lindsay.
*In his recent battles he always has a football play, usually referring to the quarterback or defence.
* Big L - Was shot being mistaken for his brother, who was in trouble with gangs. Murder... Talking bout’ kay’s lines? Now that hearse is for two
Since Smooth’s told me.. he’s practically written verses for you…(Yup..) We all thought you’d improved, with those “smooth” lines You thinkin’ he scared? It’s a Joke for you to equal smooth Truth is.. He told me after 3 times, he was just sick of beating you! (true…) And peep’s know you aint deserve this title... n’ that was before those no shows.. (haha) See.. plays on ya name usually ass, but I got one to wreck ya face with So… Im gonna leave “holes in dress”.. somethin’ like ya girl’s reputation..(oh fuck!) My rippin shit’s ridiculous, so ya blood’s spilled fairly Look.. This.. “No country for old men”.. so ‘josh’ getting’ killed early.. He knows I’ve come harder than him, so he be cryin’ then he fights My shots put ‘Dress, white on the ground’.. like a bride’s weddin’ night!! Yano all girls are the same.. that’s what I’ve witnessed, dude.. Decapitatin’ this loser.. so it’ll be a cannibals victory You may ‘act’ you better ‘josh’, but I stay rippin’ sluts.. And This aint ‘40 days and 40 nights’.. so you DEFINITELY getting’ fucked!.. You aint been givin’ luck.. so imma stay crashin’ his jaw So why you battlin’ for? You’ve lost ya way in this world Me winnin’s as predictable as you havin’ a wack football play in ya verse!! Scotty prayin’ for me to win’, he’s hopin’ and pleadin’.. Cause if people hear Dress won the tourney, then all the dope people leavin!!.. Ha... I smash ya skull in, tear out ya heart.. stay rupturin’ vitalsNo accident, but now “you dead cause of me, bro”.. so you jus’ like ya Idol!... ***THIS IS FOR THE L.A. TEXT TITLE*** ------------- I am the one that knocks... |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 01 November 2008 at 11:28am
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Good battle Woods..lets get the votes rollin ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Swift Styles
Date Posted: 02 November 2008 at 12:57pm
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Man..... close and dope as shit DRESS: Marks Finished!,We Know Ya Soft..Ya Your Styles Gay
I Didnt Have To Watch Toy Story To Know Woody's Childs Play!
Ya Lyrical Status Is Freezing Temperatures..Waay Below Zero!
Il Have Woods Crashin And Burning..Like The Daughter Of His Hero!*
^opener was sick, but lovin the next line yo. cool shit Damn Mark, You Couldnt Hand Me A L If You Gave Me Papers
And The Only Time Woods Is Associated With Fly Is Sportin Aviators!*
I Land Punches Every Bar..Hell Its Not Hard To See That Hes Hurt
The Only Time Mark Is Looking Tight Is In A Fucking forum_posts.asp?TID=16309&PN=1" rel="nofollow - T-Shirt!
^ solid punches, good personal but not so stick out Well Call This Bitch A Door..Cuz Well Everybody's Knockin Him
Ya Battle Scores Negative!How Do You Expect This Outcome To Be Positive!?
^ gooood shit, i liked the play Dude Ive Served You Three Times!Thats Almost Career Ending!
forum_posts.asp?TID=12167" rel="nofollow - He Aint Writin Like This Cuz Hes Irish ..This Fuckers Green With Envy!*
He Claims His The Greatest,Seriously?Man Please..
You're Fucking Ranked 75th..JUST ABOVE RAMEEZ!
^ envy play was solid, Ram play was Ill. The Past Is Catchin Up!Its The Fourth Time That Im Absuin Ya Rookie
Mark A Tranny?YUP!Cuz It Aint Hard To Get 'Wood Confused With A Pussy'
Dude Dress Is Keepin XFade On Top..Perfecto Dont Even Need Ya You Enjoy Italy Huh?Ironically Im Gonna Be Leavin Ya Leanin Like http://www.weeks-family.net/assets/images/pissa.jpg" rel="nofollow - Pissa! *
^ loved the 1st play here, but wasnt feelin the pisa, it coulda been worded better or somethin. leanin doesnt sound very mean. We Aint Lyrically On The Same Level..You Need Luck Rhyming
Cuz Im The King Of This Jungle..You, You're Just Lion(Lyin)
^ ight wayne...  You've Taken Shots On The Net..Its No Suprised You've Rimmed Out
forum_posts.asp?TID=15618" rel="nofollow - Woods Is A Gangsta ?He Couldnt 'Own A Pistil' If He http://www.agen.ufl.edu/%7Echyn/age2062/lect/lect_15/22_62.GIF" rel="nofollow - Bought A Greenhouse! *
^ ahaa...i get this play, some others might not. cool shit Ya Writtens Are A Sewer Pipeline..Call All Ur Flowin Is Shit
Il Show MagicMark Is A Fake..Like I Was Exposing His Tricks!*
Ya Styles Mainstream And Played..Ya Game Is Gone And Its Killed
Woods Couldnt Be 'Associated With A Hot 30'..If His Mom Was A Milf!*
^ both solid plays, milf was killer ahaa This Irish Kids Never Seen A Buck..Ya Whole Life Is A Misery
So Woods Making Paper?Hrmm..NOT EVEN LITERALLY!
^ solid, good play After His Title Loss..This Kids Been Desperately Looking For Fame
An The Only People That Are Ridin Pine Are Kids That Arent Put In The Game!^ coulda came a bit stronger on the opener. but shit, this was pretty dope. punches were consistant and you did ya homework. good shit man! with the exception of a few plays i think coulda been reworded just a tad bit to better the understanding. Woods: Talking bout’ kay’s lines? Now that hearse is for two
Since Smooth’s told me.. he’s practically written verses for you…(Yup..) ^ could of come harder with the opener, tho disciminating We all thought you’d improved, with those “smooth” lines ^ wasnt feelin so much.. You thinkin’ he scared? It’s a Joke for you to equal smooth Truth is.. He told me after 3 times, he was just sick of beating you! (true…) So he a slow foe, like his girl we know this hoe blows And peep’s know you aint deserve this title... n’ that was before those no shows.. (haha) ^ 1st play, not hard enough as i think intended, 2nd average I was thinkin’ you like Samson.. but that’s as wrong as it’s getting’ See.. plays on ya name usually ass, but I got one to wreck ya face with So… Im gonna leave “holes in dress”.. somethin’ like ya girl’s reputation..(oh fuck!) 1st was meh.... but shit holes in dress play was fire! OUCH My rippin shit’s ridiculous, so ya blood’s spilled fairly Look.. This.. “No country for old men”.. so ‘josh’ getting’ killed early.. He knows I’ve come harder than him, so he be cryin’ then he fights My shots put ‘Dress, white on the ground’.. like a bride’s weddin’ night!! ^ nice refrence in the 1st play, solid, 2nd was dope. Yano all girls are the same.. that’s what I’ve witnessed, dude.. Yeeeeeaaaaaaa Decapitatin’ this loser.. so it’ll be a cannibals victory You may ‘act’ you better ‘josh’, but I stay rippin’ sluts.. And This aint ‘40 days and 40 nights’.. so you DEFINITELY getting’ fucked!.. ^ dopest set yet. good shit!You aint been givin’ luck.. so imma stay crashin’ his jaw So why you battlin’ for? You’ve lost ya way in this world Me winnin’s as predictable as you havin’ a wack football play in ya verse!! ^ first was cool, not so stand out. 2nd would of hit HAARD if he would have used one. but cant give you a point for almosts. Scotty prayin’ for me to win’, he’s hopin’ and pleadin’.. Cause if people hear Dress won the tourney, then all the dope people leavin!!.. ^ Ahhahhaahaaa DOPE
Ha... I smash ya skull in, tear out ya heart.. stay rupturin’ vitalsNo accident, but now “you dead cause of me, bro”.. so you jus’ like ya Idol!... ^ouch...hard closer yo. very nice. Dope no question you shoulda switched the closer with the play above it, i like that one better. Its an up and down verse, you had some plays that were just dope as fuck. some of them punches were the most hard in this battle, which makes this a very hard desicion..... MY VOTE GOES TO... and its no easy decision, DTK. mostly for being consistant with it. both verses hard and creative as it came to punches, but woods had some that just left a feeling of sting. a few more and you may have not gotton my vote. Good shit with it to both yall. -------------  |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 02 November 2008 at 1:02pm
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Thanks for startin it off Swifty..1-0 me ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Point Blank
Date Posted: 02 November 2008 at 1:03pm
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Lol...Nobody predicted this to be the final...at least the title's comin' to X Fade! DTK...Some good punches, some let downs. Opener was mad played.Weezys daughter punch was dope. Next 4 bars were pretty average. The Rameez punch was pretty funny haha. Tranny bar was also dope. Weren't feelin the italy punch. The Lion bar was extremely random, pretty much filler.Pistil and magicmark bars were ok. Milf thing was dope lmao. Weren't feelin the next 2 bars. Overall I think this was a pretty strong verse. You had some average shit but some really strong punches too. Woods...Opener was weak, next bar was ok, and the 3rd bar was also weak. To use plays concerning smooth in the first 3 bars was pretty lame IMO.No show thing was meh. Samson punch was dope tho lmao.Next 2 bars were weak. I CAN NOT believe you used that wedding dress punch. SMH. Next 2 bars were weak. LMFAO @ the lil kim picture haa. Next bar was weak since he didnt use a football punch. Last 2 bars were pretty good too. Before I read this battle my money was on Woods tbh...but I was wrong. Woods seemed to struggle for ideas, and although he had a couple of dope punches (Samson & Lil Kim), he didnt come as strong as we know he can. The was 15 bars and to only have 2 dope bars (IMO) is pretty lame. DTK, not much better than Woods, but, it was better, with more witty punches and some strong ones too. DTK GMV |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 02 November 2008 at 1:19pm
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2-0 uppin for the KO or the next vote ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 03 November 2008 at 3:31pm
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I'ma do this bar-by-bar...purely 'cuz I know if I just tell it like it is, people will claim I'm hatin' and whatever else... here goes: DTK: Marks Finished!,We Know Ya Soft..Ya Your Styles Gay I Didnt Have To Watch Toy Story To Know Woody's Childs Play! Good punch... flow and rhymes lackin' tho Ya Lyrical Status Is Freezing Temperatures..Waay Below Zero! Il Have Woods Crashin And Burning..Like The Daughter Of His Hero!* There was a good idea there but execution was poor, rhymes way too basic and flow poor Damn Mark, You Couldnt Hand Me A L If You Gave Me Papers And The Only Time Woods Is Associated With Fly Is Sportin Aviators!* Another good idea, better rhyme, but the punchline was worded poorly again...needs to be smooth I Land Punches Every Bar..Hell Its Not Hard To See That Hes Hurt The Only Time Mark Is Looking Tight Is In A Fucking T-Shirt! Good good... Again a lack of rhymes but I can tell you just don't use them much, so I'll stop mentioning that now... flow better and punch simple but effective Well Call This Bitch A Door..Cuz Well Everybody's Knockin Him Ya Battle Scores Negative!How Do You Expect This Outcome To Be Positive!? Flow ehh but a nice punch... Dude Ive Served You Three Times!Thats Almost Career Ending! He Aint Writin Like This Cuz Hes Irish..This Fuckers Green With Envy!* Good idea, but he doesn't type green anymore as you said in your explanations, so you should have figured out a more relevant way to flip it He Claims His The Greatest,Seriously?Man Please.. You're Fucking Ranked 75th..JUST ABOVE RAMEEZ! Just stating a fact...needs more to it... you don't make up for it with some gangsta delivery or rhyming either...it's just... "yeah, hey, you're only a rank above Rameez"... The Past Is Catchin Up!Its The Fourth Time That Im Absuin Ya Rookie Mark A Tranny?YUP!Cuz It Aint Hard To Get 'Wood Confused With A Pussy' Nah...don't think the punch hits and the flow is offfffffffffffffff Dude Dress Is Keepin XFade On Top..Perfecto Dont Even Need Ya You Enjoy Italy Huh?Ironically Im Gonna Be Leavin Ya Leanin Like Pissa!* More poor delivery...way too stretched, Pissa idea is decent but again could have been flipped much better We Aint Lyrically On The Same Level..You Need Luck Rhyming Cuz Im The King Of This Jungle..You, You're Just Lion(Lyin) Bit played out, but you deliver it well enough You've Taken Shots On The Net..Its No Suprised You've Rimmed Out Woods Is A Gangsta?He Couldnt 'Own A Pistil' If He Bought A Greenhouse!* Pistil idea is decent but this wasn't well worded at all... Ya Writtens Are A Sewer Pipeline..Call All Ur Flowin Is Shit Il Show MagicMark Is A Fake..Like I Was Exposing His Tricks!* A genuine mutliple-word, multiple-syllable rhyme... good, gives the bar much more flow, punch was decent I guess Ya Styles Mainstream And Played..Ya Game Is Gone And Its Killed Woods Couldnt Be 'Associated With A Hot 30'..If His Mom Was A Milf!* First of all, no one spits 'a 30'...ever, 32 maybe... the whole idea was badly executed This Irish Kids Never Seen A Buck..Ya Whole Life Is A Misery So Woods Making Paper?Hrmm..NOT EVEN LITERALLY! Good idea... I dunno if people have flipped this sorta thing on him before... I know I didn't when I battled him, wish I had...hot shit After His Title Loss..This Kids Been Desperately Looking For Fame An The Only People That Are Ridin Pine Are Kids That Arent Put In The Game! Not the best closer...again the rhyme aids the flow tho Overall... severe lack of rhyming ability and good lyricism... ideas for punchlines were there but the lyricism to put it into a bar was severely lacking... A handful of good punches tho Woods: Talking bout’ kay’s lines? Now that hearse is for two Since Smooth’s told me.. he’s practically written verses for you…(Yup..) Haha, good flow, nice set-up and rhyme and the punch is a good'un We all thought you’d improved, with those “smooth” lines cause you winnin’ battles now…but it didn’t take much to beat every newbs’ rhymes Nice continuation from the last punch with the set-up here, punchline is stretched but a decent punch You thinkin’ he scared? It’s a Joke for you to equal smooth Truth is.. He told me after 3 times, he was just sick of beating you! (true…) Already did a Smooth one and this doesn't really stand well enough on its own as a punch to be honest... Would have made a better set-up and then punching hard with the fact he shouldn't even be here and only is 'cuz of no-shows...which you detail below... So he a slow foe, like his girl we know this hoe blows And peep’s know you aint deserve this title... n’ that was before those no shows.. (haha) As I say...this almost seems like filler now, this punch and the one above should have been merged I was thinkin’ you like Samson.. but that’s as wrong as it’s getting’ Cause he’s been weak since he lost his hair.. but shit, he wernt strong to begin wit’ Decent personal but it doesn't hit too hard See.. plays on ya name usually ass, but I got one to wreck ya face with So… Im gonna leave “holes in dress”.. somethin’ like ya girl’s reputation..(oh fuck!) Hahahaha... a VERY good idea, but like dress the execution wasn't all there...rhyme forced My rippin shit’s ridiculous, so ya blood’s spilled fairly Look.. This.. “No country for old men”.. so ‘josh’ getting’ killed early.. Yup... I like it, smooth wordplay He knows I’ve come harder than him, so he be cryin’ then he fights My shots put ‘Dress, white on the ground’.. like a bride’s weddin’ night!! Yeah...nice idea, better execution than the last nameplay Yano all girls are the same.. that’s what I’ve witnessed, dude.. See I checked MTV.. and that Lindsay only likes bitches too… (murdered) Yeah that is murder... that's all that need be said Decapitatin’ this loser.. so it’ll be a cannibals victory Cause if “josh, loses his 'head'”.. then 40 other guys get it for free...(oh!..) Ehhh...rhyme I'm not sure and the punch ain't great either... other Josh line was good You may ‘act’ you better ‘josh’, but I stay rippin’ sluts.. And This aint ‘40 days and 40 nights’.. so you DEFINITELY getting’ fucked!.. This is better...much better You aint been givin’ luck.. so imma stay crashin’ his jaw Dress getting’ a votes a joke.. like lil kim at the fashion awards.. (lol..) Yeah, decent, crashin' his jaw is forced tho So why you battlin’ for? You’ve lost ya way in this world Me winnin’s as predictable as you havin’ a wack football play in ya verse!! This would have murdered if he had one, but he didn't...swing and a miss Scotty prayin’ for me to win’, he’s hopin’ and pleadin’.. Cause if people hear Dress won the tourney, then all the dope people leavin!!.. Fillerish but it's not that bad, has a bit of humour value Ha... I smash ya skull in, tear out ya heart.. stay rupturin’ vitals No accident, but now “you dead cause of me, bro”.. so you jus’ like ya Idol!... A good concept for a punch but it doesn't quite come together that well... You need to make it clearer with your words that the "me bro" bit is speech, as it is you just stoke quotation marks in the middle of the sentence and ehh... You can pull that sorta shit off on a track, but when it's just written it needs more concrete structure to it Overall, better rhymes and better flow, made for better reading because of that... More good punches, fewer poor ones... I honestly don't know how Dress is two up... To me his verse was like a four or five, this is a solid six leaning towards a seven. VOTE: Woods ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 03 November 2008 at 7:09pm
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Appreciate the vote and the breakdown O..2-1 me I thought this derserved to go to at least also ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 03 November 2008 at 8:07pm
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I just realised my critique of DTK's 30 line was off point because this battle is actually 30 lines... may I congratulate whoever set that on being a giant homo and apologise to DTK for cursin' out his line...that being said it still coulda been delivered a little better but that very fact changed the line from like a 3/10 to a 6 or so... so that'll be that
------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 04 November 2008 at 3:03pm
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2-1 bump ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Senor Perfecto
Date Posted: 04 November 2008 at 7:05pm
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Nice battle, dudes... DTK... a very inconsistent battle verse... There were too many filler set-ups with basic rhymes... A lot of good punchline concepts were wasted with poor delivery... though personals were decent... This was an average but competent battle verse which lacked killer punches and the lyricism usually seen in your Open Mic verses... Woods... again... a very inconsistent battle verse... The smooth plays would have been better spaced out... A lot of personals were worded badly... especially in the first half... Elsewhere... good wordplay combined with personals to form stronger punches... but with some filler set-ups... Vote: MC Woods... Adios...  -------------  |
Posted By: DOPE NAME
Date Posted: 05 November 2008 at 2:20pm
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both were cool but d2k came harder, take it or leave it
vote d2k |
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 05 November 2008 at 3:36pm
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I think we'll leave it. Cheers.
-------------  I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: iCeZ
Date Posted: 05 November 2008 at 6:12pm
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ima be real honest... i only came in here at first to read woods verse, after his hot verse against kay....
but i thought i may as well vote while im here...
dress
Well Call This Bitch A Door..Cuz Well Everybody's Knockin Him
Ya Battle Scores Negative!How Do You Expect This Outcome To Be Positive!?
hot punch i liked it
He Claims His The Greatest,Seriously?Man Please..
You're Fucking Ranked 75th..JUST ABOVE RAMEEZ!
i thought this was funny
Ya Styles Mainstream And Played..Ya Game Is Gone And Its Killed
Woods Couldnt Be 'Associated With A Hot 30'..If His Mom Was A Milf!*
ouch!
confused woods for a pussy, and green with envy line was nice aswell
woods
So he a slow foe, like his girl we know this hoe blows
And peep’s know you aint deserve this title... n’ that was before those no shows nice lol
See I checked MTV.. and that http://www.mtv.co.uk/channel/mtvuk/news/440779-lindsay-lohan-s-secret-lesbian-affair" rel="nofollow - Lindsay only likes bitches too
lol made me laugh
Dress getting’ a votes a joke.. like http://blog.racetotheright.com/post/lilkim.jpg" rel="nofollow - lil kim at the fashion awards..
this was cool as well
this was a close battle,both had filler such as wood's wedding dress line and dress'es toy story woody play however my vote goes to DRESS because..... woods first 6 lines were all about smooth, needed to mis it up a bit...and i thought dresses good punches were better/cleverer/harder hittin than wood's good punches
tight battle guys. ------------- Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 05 November 2008 at 6:15pm
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3-2 me thanks Icez..appreciate you takin the time to vote man ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 08 November 2008 at 7:21am
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Dress - Not a bad verse but as senor said it was basically up and down you had some nice punches and than you had lines that come across as filler to me, maybe thats because of the length of the verse...Overall an ok verse lacked the killer edge though imo punches could of landed harder had they been worded differently Woods - Also an up and down verse didn't like the fact the smooth punches were all together kinda took the edge of them when they could of landed harder being spaced out, wordplay seemed forced in certain area's but the personals were nice and majority of your other punches landed hard but could of done with better set ups..Overall an ok verse with a few real nice punchlines Vote - woods -------------  |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 08 November 2008 at 7:32am
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thanks, all...
3-3... lets keep em' rollin'... |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 09 November 2008 at 8:25am
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3-3
more votes please... |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 6:57am
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Come on.. its the Final...
it'll take 5 - 10 minutes to vote...
it will be appreciated.... |
Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 8:49am
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Ok, first I wanna congratulate both of you for making the final.
DTK - Your verse was nice. I really like the Hot 30 line and for some reason the Woods making paper line had me laughing more than expected. You dropped some solid lines but at times the rhyming was basic. Some bars flopped like that Jungle/Lion thing. Good verse overall.
Woods - Unfortunatly Woods your success was your greatest downfall. After the Semi I, and I know alot of other people, were expecting very big things from you. You dropped a good verse but it wasn't touching the viciousness of last round. You went in so hard this verse just felt abit tame, even though you had some good lines about the girlfriend thing I think you could have maybe flipped them into soul destroying shit. With that said I still think your improving and gettng to the final is a massive achievement in itself, will be looking out for more from you.
Vote - DTK
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 9:54am
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Closest final ever, shame it's for all the wrong reasons haha
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Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 10:00am
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Hahaha... man...na I won't even say it, it would be seen as swaying ------------- They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 12:31pm
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This wasn't exactly the greatest battle I've ever seen and there were positives and negatives on both sides...
DTK - You brought an average verse, you had a couple of decent punches in there but they weren't exactly the most intricate, lines like "hot 30", "green with envy", "confused with a pussy", and to an extent "exposing his tricks", "childs play", and "outcome positive" were the best punchlines you had in there...your problem with this lines is that they all had a fault that held them back. For instance, green with envy would have been a dope punch...if he still wrote in green...hot 30 was a decent wordplay but not the greatest diss ever, exposing his tricks had the same problem only it wasn't as sharp...child's play was a nice idea but couldn't been worded better to hit harder...
Apart from that you verse didn't have a lot...I've picked out 6punchlines where you basically have 15attempts, and you didn't produce a "ohhhhhhhhh" line or two that would have made up for the consistancy of your punches...I think you had more than 6punchlines in there obviously, I'm just talking about the lack of stand-out ones...
Style-wise it was run of the mill really, nothing about your wordplay, imagery, rhyme scheme, multi-syllabics that amazed me...at absolutely no point did I think to myself "the flow there was savage", I don't generally rate verses but I'd probably have this at like 5/10...verging on lower because this is a tourny final verse and you should step your game up for that...
Woods - In my opinion you also brought an average verse...I think you had a classic example where you relied on the explanations before your verse to add further credance to your hardest punchlines...in my humble opinion if you aren't able to get across the explanation in a well-worded punchline that in itself should tell the whole story...if you feel the need to make an explanation (unless it is concept related on a wordplay/metaphor) because it enhances your punchline...then you should reword the line to enhance the punchline ...for instance you referenced that his girl cheated on him and he cried, is there any need to do that? If you are going to diss him for that then make it more clear in your verse...I personally think both punchlines you made out of that were wack, you should have dissed him for acting like a bitch rather than having a personal problem...That said, you had a lot more polished punchline concepts than DTK and you managed to connect a lot more directly with your attacks...though I also though a lot of the information you used to back your punches up with was old news, films your referenced were old, lil kim shit is old, lohan shit is old (though Lohan was the best punch of the battle)...so you lost points for me there, though I guess you were doing nameplays so you got a couple points back for that spin on it...you demonstrated you knew how to punch better than DTK but you were kind of sloppy to the extent that you didn't put this beyond doubt but you had enough solid hits in there to take it
Soooooooooooooooo in conclusion, Woods edged it coz of his more solid punches...I would give Woods a low to middlin 6/10 whilst DTK got a low to middling 5/10, I think Woods could have easily made his verse a 7/10 with a bit more focus but nevertheless he still did enough to win this...
Vote = Woods ------------- 
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 2:39pm
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4-4 *yawn* ------------- |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 4:48pm
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Not my fault that someone decided to make it first to five...ludicrous -------------
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Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 6:16pm
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Can the final vote be by an experienced member and be a good breakdown?hopefully that isnt asking for to much ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: U.N.L.M.
Date Posted: 11 November 2008 at 12:43pm
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Dress- I was thinking that the opener was maaaad played but you used a played concept that me and point both have used and did something different with it and it ended up being a pretty nice opener...Daughter of his hero was cool but I think you could've reworded it to be more aggressive...3rd bar should've been reworked more..the punchline is awkward but it was a great idea..4th bar was a good punch..Negative/positive punch was nice, The green with envy punch was a miss and probably should've been either taken out or reworked considering he doesn't post in green...The Rameez punch could've been killer but you did nothing with it...Wood confused with a pussy was cool..Pissa was a very nice idea but i don't know, doesn't seem like it was worked the best way....Lyin bar was terribly played...Woods is a gangsta could've been a lot better and really tight but it was still a nice bar...lol @ MagicMark, was cool...Milf was pretty tight..Woods making paper was dope too, my fav. bar...Closer could've been really tight but i think you should've reworded it...Overall- You had lots of dope ideas but you really only had a couple of dope punches...The "woods making paper" and the "milf" bar are the only dope punches that come to mind after reading it...Pissa, Woods is a gangsta, magicmark, rameez, sporting aviators, and the daughter of his hero could've been tight but they were either worded awkwardly or just didn't come off hard enough...This verse was dope in terms of ideas but only came out average as most of them didn't come out hard enough and left the verse with a couple of tight and rememberable lines...Plus, out of you two i would expect you to have the better multis and flow but they were surprisingly lacking IMO...Props tho, on making it this far, just a executed idea or two from winning... Woods- Opener was nice, 2nd bar was solid again too...the 3rd bar was meh, 4th bar was meh again and really you should've either spread these bars out elsewhere or used some of them as a set up instead of having your first 3 out of 4 bars about one concept...Samson bar was very cool...Holes in dress was very tight...Country for old men was dope too...Bride play was pretty bad but it was a great idea, you just needed to reword it...Lindsay bar killed it...40 days and 40 nights play was alright, i liked it but it wasn't as hard as the country for old men...Lil' Kim was tight as hell but the setup didn't rhyme to well to me...Football play bar was a good risk that ended up being a terrible crash lol..."dope people leavin" was alright, not that great tho...Closer could've been dope but needed to be reworked/reworded..Funny both of you used a play using each other's "idol" lmao...Anyway, your verse was very down and up...You started off pretty slow as it was repetitive and not too hard..But you had some killer bars in the middle with "holes in dress" and "lindsay" and even Country for old men...Lil kim was dope too...Then you fell off a bit with the football play and the last two bars...I thought your verse ended up being average like Dress' considering you had a couple hot bars but a majority of them weren't used to their potential... Overall- Both had misses and bars that needed to be reworded or reworked more aggressively...Both also had only a couple of tight bars, with dress it was Milf, and making paper while for woods it was Lindsay, Holes in Dress...But i think Woods hits were much harder and got him this win...Woods had the bar of the battle(MTV, Lindsay) and had the harder hits when he landed...It was very close but Woods nicked it cause he connected more/and more strongly with his personals...Nice battle tho...Good job Dress, and Congrats to Woods V/Woods |
Posted By: DressToKill
Date Posted: 11 November 2008 at 6:19pm
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Appreciated UNLM..Grats Woods ------------- The original comeback kid |
Posted By: Bolo
Date Posted: 11 November 2008 at 11:49pm
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5-4, that's a wrap Woods is the winner of the tourny and LA's new text title holder ------------- I am the one that knocks... |