Officially back
Printed From: Lyrical Assault
Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=16658
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:22am
Topic: Officially back
Posted By: King Jehu
Subject: Officially back
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 6:07am
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Allow me to...
fuck it. I don't need you to allow shit <--Highest percentage than any whole crew in classic verses Maybe because you all are counterfeit like plastic purses Massive hearses I got to take you all to your graves Most of you fail at rap but cheat and try to alter your grades Dudes think they nice, but I got doubts Your verse puts me to sleep, you think you got me knocked out So I hit back when chit chat needs to be silenced Then these bitches talk about me like "he's really violent" It feels nice to know my words cause the pain of a steel pipe Though I've been robbed in battles like some of you do in real life And I don't have to be ranked first to command respect Already got way more than I had planned to get That's why I haven't even had to demand it yet Because they see that among boys, I'm a man, a vet 8-syllable rhymes oh so fucking effortless, Count how many times slow flow struck and hurt ya chest Try to have my style, see how hard it's bout to get Because I got a way with words like I just stole the alphabet I choose my words so you get what I mean in verse creation I'm not Freeda, I don't trust your interpretation That's why I make sure my words are explicitly stated Nothing is gimmicky/dated, thats why I'm lyrically rated Insane, Mimic me, fated to get physically bladed I spit flames only to leave the bitter critics cremated Literally hated, and loved, made me cynically jaded So much wackness all around me, I'm sick of these stray kids Used to run this open mic till I wed me to rock Now my guitars are the only ones that can get me to stop. I'm dishing these raps, opponents only wish I was wack So I give meaner criticism when I'm dissin your crap I got verses for days, I spit prolifically, fags Guess you can ALL just take offense since I'm officially back Say something... ------------- Insert something rappy here |
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Posted By: Matt The Ripper
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 6:29am
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Dopest read since... well... your last drop. lmao. " Maybe because you all are counterfeit like plastic purses Massive hearses I got to take you all to your graves Most of you fail at rap but cheat and try to alter your grades Dudes think they nice, but I got doubts Your verse puts me to sleep, you think you got me knocked out So I hit back when chit chat needs to be silenced Then these bitches talk about me like "he's really violent" " And so many more quoteables! lol. Insane! ------------- Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 7:00am
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I choose my words so you get what I mean in verse creation ......
 lol, that line was cold blooded shhhiittttttt, piece is stacked with quotable lines
....lol, u failed at delivering that 8 syllable rhyme, don't ever do it like that again haha
anyway welcome back
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Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 1:06pm
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Thanks for the feedback.
Chain, it's not a diss to Freeda, just saying I won't leave my stuff open to interpretation while he would. The 8 Syllable rhyme was about as good as you expect it to be. If anyone can rhyme that many syllables and have it read any smoother, I'd love to see someone do it. ------------- Insert something rappy here |
Posted By: Freeda5thDawg
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 1:13pm
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'So I give meaner criticism when I'm dissin your crap" lol...great flow, and a lot of the lines were so strong, it's not even funny...the rhyme schemes were as accurately matched as they can be...great read je...the only part that didn't do it for me was the 8-syllable rhyme thing...erase it now!!! lol...keep 'em coming... -------------  |
Posted By: I-SEE-GRIPS
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 5:38pm
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First time I seen your work man and it's so easy to read the flow is ace nothing makes you stop and wonder what does he mean.....BANG BANG it's all solid punching I like this style of writing...........Frankly I dont wanna spend time pondering over other peoples random thoughts! That's just I Man I got no idea as to where you reside or what age you are! But the way I'm reading and feeling your work I'd guess you're living on my block an wont ever get another 35th birthday either.
Right or wrong you on some good shit bro for sure
PS
I'm on the 5th block in from the front, ground floor corner, Hazy green flavour on the pungent side...........Ya know it..............Come an burn one down anytime
Easy
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If anyone can rhyme that many syllables and have it read any smoother, I'd love to see someone do it.
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All the time bro but sure there aint many of us
Peace ------------- 
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Posted By: Matt The Ripper
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 7:28pm
LOL Are YOU dissing Freeda now??? WTF? lol
 ------------- Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
I-SEE-GRIPS wrote:Posted By: SwordedStylez
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 7:32pm
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I can do it, I just don't care to :P ------------- https://soundcloud.com/lostblueeyes" rel="nofollow - Music Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 7:37pm
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Hot verse Jehu, for sure. As usual, your flow is just...... poetic. Madness.
-------------  I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 27 November 2008 at 8:56pm
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nice,
flow was solid, punches where cool.. nothing to hate on really..
Because I got a way with words like I just stole the alphabet ^^^ thats simple and awesomly worded..
wasnt feeling some pucnhes i.e. the knock out one.. seen it done before.. and the ending seemed to lose some of the initial force of the first 2/3's of the piece..
overall a nice drop |
Posted By: I-SEE-GRIPS
Date Posted: 29 November 2008 at 5:05am
????????????????
Nah man I aint dissing Hound number five
If I do say he's missing sound! Wonder why ?
I dont dig the dog though that much it's true
I do respect his work bro I just prefer Jehu's
Now what the fuck's with you? -------------
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Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 29 November 2008 at 12:57pm
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never seen you consistantly drop as i wasn't around when you was active in this section, so im not gonna compare it to your old stuff, cause that band wagon already seems to be full. This was dope though, flow was dope from start to finish and collab and general content made for a nice read, don't know if this is above or below ur normal level since as i say iv not read enough of your older shit to decide so im just judging on what iv read here, and it was pretty darn dopeizzle fo'shizzle (I'll NEVER say that again btw) -------------  |
Posted By: AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 22 December 2013 at 9:31pm
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ill shit. good shit..... would quote something specific but there are so many i cant pick one... i vote OMOTM to get started up or pherhaps add this to the classics section..... ill af ! ------------- NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME |
Posted By: AshleyKaos
Date Posted: 22 December 2013 at 9:32pm
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o dam this ish is from days ago just noticed tht lmao whoops ------------- NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME |
Posted By: wreckless
Date Posted: 22 December 2013 at 10:47pm
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^ quit necroing shit ho
-------------  Lex Star the Outlaw |
Posted By: BIG GAME
Date Posted: 22 December 2013 at 10:54pm
| Yea, this is dope. |
Posted By: wreckless
Date Posted: 22 December 2013 at 10:57pm
------------- Lex Star the Outlaw |