LA MMX Rd 2 - mc woods v Junior Shade
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Forum Name: LA MMX
Forum Description: Tournament by Nepenthez
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:53am
Topic: LA MMX Rd 2 - mc woods v Junior Shade
Posted By: NepentheZ
Subject: LA MMX Rd 2 - mc woods v Junior Shade
Date Posted: 31 January 2010 at 11:23pm
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Rules
3 Day time limit http://wwp.greenwichmeantime.com/" rel="nofollow - [Due by 12.01am GMT, Thurs 4th Feb] 6 Bars per emcee First to 5 vote, 3-0 KO... -------------  I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 02 February 2010 at 2:51am
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Expos: Check the links, should be elf explanatory, (vets and senior members can skip this) but theres a few new heads here so i'll write it out too, in our last battle i KO'd him, schindler (schindlers list), was a famous german who saved many Jews from being killed by the nazis, when kay battled him he had a personal saying he made him cry over msn?, its been proven he's a biter, check cal's post in the second link, said he didnt even realise he dropped, theres been different leagues and other competitions etc (most feared list) etc to see who the 'best/top' people on the site are, junior's number 6 on the 'official ranking', yet has been beating by lower ranked members, me for example, at a lowly 40 somethingth lol, so that ranking isnt very reliable.....
....ummmm yeah... This is how its done.... Our http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/title-battle-mcwoods-vs-junior_topic16849.html?KW" rel="nofollow - now ya struggling with ya verses, prayin’ ‘will THIS one do okay?’ |
Posted By: Junior Shade
Date Posted: 02 February 2010 at 5:15pm
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If Woods is dangerous i'm a motherfucking Rainforest.. Round 1, you battled a noob an' dropped one dope line, but wow.. Now ya actin' all elitist, as if you above people like Simon Cowell..! (Get a grip!) You ain't staying the length kid, Mark'll never be rated, an' yet.. http://blogs.telegraph.co.uk/finance/ambroseevans-pritchard/5757867/Bretton_Woods_is_a_dangerous_trap/" rel="nofollow - Here's some proof that Brettons the only Woods that is stated a threat..! Couldn't "Guard" the title! MVP? Nah, ya standard has gone down truley.. Nowadays the only mcwoods that we rate, plays for http://www.jbu.edu/athletics/basketball/roster/players" rel="nofollow - John Brown Uni ..! (oops..) You're a looney comin' at Era with punchlines that couldn't hit a barn door.. I guess the only way you're seeing a " http://blog.kir.com/archives/images/3wood.jpg" rel="nofollow - Round 3 Wood " is off the Tee on a Par 4..! (true) How you dropping those links whore?.. Straight grasping at played jokes.. Not confident in the "material he's using" so he's asking for "Suede votes..!" (Swayed) I'm comin' with great quotes, hard hitting, relevant, you drop less dope battle raps.. Cause I can explain the punch within the bar, no need for Expo paragraphs..! (Real MC, bitch) .. Wooops.. |
Posted By: mcwoods
Date Posted: 02 February 2010 at 6:33pm
| lulz... vote up... |
Posted By: Kay B
Date Posted: 03 February 2010 at 1:20am
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Nice battle though both could of done better imo and made this battle alot better, both had decent punches but was only one winner in the end, on first read (skimmed read) i thought woods had taken this, but after reading properly i just think shade edged it....Woods best punch was the biting one though it's been used a million and one times so it didnt have the effect it would of it was first time used....wasnt feeling ur opener woods u seemed to concentrate more on a play than an actual punch, it was ok i guess but not amazingly hard hitting, the msn addy punch was abit hit and miss again it landed but not as hard as it could of....Seen better from both of u tbh but it come down to who i thought landed more punches and who's verse i enjoyed more and that come down to Shade Vote - Jr Woods....remember what i said on msn haha -------------  |
Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 03 February 2010 at 2:03am
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Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 03 February 2010 at 5:00am
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Ok, let me not be an ass, lol. Woods had an ok verse, but the only outstanding couplet was the first. It seems like some punches were reaching but didn't actually hit. The ballet line was weak, and disparages the artistry and craft of male ballet dancers. The "they don't like you" line would be more effective if someone had said something actually bad against him, or if I wasn't one of his biggest defenders when people said he bit. Jr, your opener was kinda weak and choppy in the flow. Suede votes are weak. Everything else was on point, especially the closer. The plays on his name were good, and the flow and rhymes were better and smoother than Woods. Now, here's the hard part both of you... and the rest of LA: Shorten them fucking lines. Say less with more. Don't forget flow and shit. Anyone can write a good punch with 97 fucking syllables. Vote: Junior Shade. ------------- Insert something rappy here |
Posted By: Plat
Date Posted: 03 February 2010 at 9:40am
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Not confident in the "material he's using" so he's asking for "Suede votes" dope ------------- 
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Posted By: iCeZ
Date Posted: 03 February 2010 at 9:43am
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nice battle guys, i liked both verses.... thought the way your set up and worded the 2nd last bar was nice, ballet i thought was kinda funny,
Jr had some nice plays too thought your round 3 wood line was clever And your closer was nice too,
Overall in a close one i vote Jr.
------------- Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 04 February 2010 at 12:33am
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Junior Advances.
------------- I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |