Rd 1 - Jay Hom & rapdisup vs Kiki Spirez & stuck
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Topic: Rd 1 - Jay Hom & rapdisup vs Kiki Spirez & stuck
Posted By: Stalin
Subject: Rd 1 - Jay Hom & rapdisup vs Kiki Spirez & stuck
Date Posted: 28 August 2010 at 9:40pm
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12 lines each due in 5 days from this post by PM to me. Do not post in here. first to 3 or whoever is winning by 5 days wins. Any explained vote counts No shows will not be tolerated. |
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Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 1:50pm
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Jay Homicide
My words’ll be chrunin’ at your surface, as I put the burner to ya dermis
Murder these pussies perfect, an’ leave ‘em both with a herniated cervix Take turns at playin’ wordsmiths, but its common knowledge that’s an act Shockin fags, here’s a fact - I’ve been absent, this is just my practice Against some actress cat, an’ a kid who still hasn’t grasped the basics of rap Bastards face it you’re whack! An’ its fact that dancin in drag makes you a fag See to us you’re just that cat who’s stuck in the closet, now I’ll Kick In The Door It’s no Biggie, you’re a bitch I’m sure, so by law suckin’ dick is what you’re for An’ to that other prick in my thoughts, you’re not gonna be a possible threat So I’ll send you on a horrible quest, an’ have you fail at every obstacle set We’re the probable bet, ‘cos honestly these Now watch as Raps finish’s ‘em off… Rapdisup
I remind tha crowd tha last time 'kiks' got 'stuck'
aylums now a ghost of what'll happen when ya push ya Luck! ya fucked!!!!shuda ducked boy,but ya tried to hold ya postion ya memories visions,have ya seeing LI,-ON,deaths doors definition! sooooo........ now its a questin of who lost,or rather jus stuckinthepost didnt make tha cut with MOD,so ya snuck-in-as-a-host!* an ya battle score?...now that aint nuttin-to-boast ya flows like stuttering goats,ya only 'capture'd'...hoaxed jokes?* im what'll happen if ya mind,has reason for over-imagination Kikis what happens,if ya 'act' has call for...other desperations! congrats to tha actor..an well dun to tha geek with tha grades..and when i say ya both confused....i dont only mean wheres gravesend! now say thankyou! ;) *Lucky D an Lyricist Inc got Kiki 'stuck' for words *LI(lyricist inc)-'On' kiki had a pic of him in wizard of oz(shown by Lucky D) i.e LION get it? also nearly had him wanting to leave the site *stuck did a title saying let me in,an Big games got his own site where stuck obviously wants to be let in... *he beat capture,but with shyt that he 'made an opion for' *sorry kiks wack line probs,had to add an acting line ps all this is from la nuttin i say aint on here sumwhere :( *gravesend borders northwest kent and tilbury essex and confussion i 'uno..... Kiki
So these dudes think they're in a place or position to sock it to me? When one of the newbs replaced a composition worse than a silent movie, So sue me.. But Rap is thinkin' pennies and pounds, not grand thoughts, School me? This twat is just merry that he finally found public transport, He thought he was ahead of me, gratefully his attack wasn't planned, Cos when we boasted about our Pedigree, his bravery soon got canned, I understand, you don't want dog stuff, but i don't get milder i get thicker, You're only good for bringing back fond nostalgia of when you were shitter, So don't be bitter when we're straight with you- No criss and fuckin' cross, These quitters disappeared.. Now one we didn't miss and one we just forgot, And you're NOT the GOAT, it's official that Cuba's slogan went and died, I grab your throat when i call you GOAT.. Cos buddy here's the sacrifice.. Stuck In the post
What we got? Jason and the Arrogants, and oh look! His homicidal friend But no one remakes a pair of fakes, these wankster rappers have to end What will you do? I stick like tar, viscous/vicious rhymes are smartly baiting So gather your crew, Rap, I'll drop iron bars to leave this lyricist inc.arcerating 'Look into my eyes' son, you can't battle for shit, you're a lover not a fighter (I'm a shogun) Homo, he ain't your friend bro, you got picked second to a biter! (he's a no one!) you're the real Jay-who; fuck, the king is the dead, when I flick and turn on regicide Punching you and I break your head, killing it, I'm Hay Jenocide! Much lyrical massacre, while you concentrate gassy rhymes to put these cats to sleep Come up cold when you mine for rhyming gold, leave this chile/chilly fucker trapped for weeks You stupid pricks, got much to fear when I flood your brains like Pakistan, Cos you're two pussies from Cambridgeshire, but do you know who the fuck I am? Expo- Jason and the Argonauts is an old stop motion film currently being remade for hollywood
Jay has had only 67 posts in nearly a year, hence Jay-who/King Jehu etc 'Look into my eyes' is Raps mixtape/album whatever Rap was originally gonna pair with the Composition before he got done for 'biting' (jury still out?) Jay Homicide/Hay Jenocide etc etc (i feel like a dick for explaining this) There's been in the news about some Chilean miners possible stuck underground for a long time Floods in Pakistan recently. They're both from Cambridge. Votes please
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Posted By: stuckinthepost
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 1:55pm
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Jay's links don't work Stal, I don't believe ------------- you come at the king, you best not miss. |
Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 2:13pm
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Ok... Jay kicked things off with a really decent verse, some cool rhyming in ya opening bars. The Kick in the Door/Biggie stuff was cool, really liked the obstacle bar, just seemed vicious. Good verse. Rap, you had some good concepts and you're definitely imroving as a battler, I just feel like you stuggled to get some of your ideas across. Good to see you dropping some multis in there, really liked the snuck in as host line. Think you could have done something better with the Gravesend idea. Kiki, some good concepts and well worded punches, at times I feel like your ideas could hit harder with a bit more though put into them, Pedigree stuff is kinda played but made it relevant with what Rap was talking about. Really liked your closer, your best bar. Stuckm, you i,pressed me here, wasn't sure what to expect from you, only really read ya Open Mics, had some good topical concepts like the Chile bar, I liked you Lyricist Inc.arcerated line, Jenocide line was cool too. Good job. Overall this was a close battle, everyone came better than I expected but I think Kiki and Stuck just edged it out but it was very hard for me to judge. Good battle guys and good luck to whoever advances. Vote: Kiki Spirez & stuckinthepost |
Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 3:51pm
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appreciate the honesty Cali wanna add nice verses from Kiki an Stuck coolio thets get this rollin' uppin ------------- The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'! It aint over till I Rapdisup |
Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 3:54pm
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Same to you guys. You were always maybe against it, jay being away so long, and you not doing this for a bit. But your bits were fun to read. Thanks Cal. 1-0 then. ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow"> 
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Posted By: BIG GAME
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 6:30pm
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I think that this battle broke down to Raps and Stucks verse.
Jay and Kiki just weren't landing anything effective hee.
No hate..I just wasn't seeing the impact of any of their punches.
Thought Raps was landing a few hits, I thought that Stuck landed more and more effective hits
My fav bar:
Stuck
What will you do? I stick like tar, viscous/vicious rhymes are smartly baiting
So gather your crew, Rap, I'll drop iron bars to leave this lyricist inc.arcerating I thought that was clever crew 'nameplay'
Stuck and Raps also kept this battle personal and aggressive.
MVGT: Kiki & Stuck
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Posted By: Kiki Spirez
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 6:57pm
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Whatever. 2-0 ------------- http://media.photobucket.com/user/Seinamies/media/Big-Dilla-Cover-web.jpg.html" rel="nofollow">
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Posted By: rapdisup
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 6:58pm
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fair vote Game thats tha sorta member ya needer be all tha time dude uppin for the KO or a saviour lol ------------- The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'! It aint over till I Rapdisup |
Posted By: stuckinthepost
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 7:40pm
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Cheers for the vote Game. Well done Rap and Jay btw, I thought both your verses were good. 2-0 Upp------------- you come at the king, you best not miss. |
Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 8:55pm
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Jay- tha opener wasn't too bad...not tha greatest...Next bar was a nice line..but more of an OM line to me....Tha dancin' in drag line was a decent shot at Keeks..tha last 6 lines were barely decent IMO. Raps..Loved tha opener...Next bar was another good shot. Next lines were eehh! But I did like tha Hoaxed jokes shot. Last four were week IMO... Kiki..Opener wasn't all that..decent but not great...Of tha next four lines only tha pedigree was decent..funny..Closer was decent. Stuck- Opener weak..next lines hot..shoulda been reversed...Next bar was hot...second to a biter good. Next bar was good also...next bar was good also chilie trapped..second time I've seenin' tha play in tha tourny...Weak closer. Overall..Jay's verse was great..I've seen him do better TBH. And Kiki same thing..rust maybe I don't know but I know he can do better for sure. Raps verse was one of his better ones actually, some nice hits in there....too bad stuck had tha best and there for... Stuck and Kiki GMV
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Posted By: stuckinthepost
Date Posted: 03 September 2010 at 8:58pm
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Thanks Lucky D. I believe thats a KO?------------- you come at the king, you best not miss. |
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 04 September 2010 at 5:54pm
| Stuck and Kiki advance.. good shit |