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*FINAL* Manc & Lucky D vs Nep & Calibra

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Topic: *FINAL* Manc & Lucky D vs Nep & Calibra
Posted By: Stalin
Subject: *FINAL* Manc & Lucky D vs Nep & Calibra
Date Posted: 20 September 2010 at 5:15pm
20 lines each
due in 5 days from this post by PM to me.  Do not post in here.
first to 3 or whoever is winning by 5 days wins.
Any explained vote counts
No shows will not be tolerated.
 
 
 
Goodluck



Replies:
Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 07 October 2010 at 6:01pm

Manc

Expos : First line, roll through moats = castle ref. The whole Newcastle refs = black and white, Rauol Moate, Magpies, North Shields, Toon, people from Newcastle are known as Geordies and people from London are known as Cockneys.
Nep = Craig, Cal = Mark. Nep got a high loss count hence taking hits like Craig List does. Nep plays a lot of COD hence fish refs like cod fillet, Neptune, haddock blah blah. BG banned then Cal took over LA Mag. "the peNneZ" is a NepentheZ name-flip. Car-toon = "Calibra" is the name of a car, and they call the city where he's from "The Toon". Last line, "N e pen the Z comes last", another Nep name flip.



My appologies for the initial delay as I was laid up http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/pm_message.asp?ID=18916#" rel="nofollow - in hospital
Good luck to all and Enjoy Smile 


When I Raoul through Moates and Nuke-castles, who's tackled?
this Magpie and his chick who barely flew through 2 battles
yet there in Black & White OUR evaders were scared to fight US
default or BG's fault, were faced with a pair of biters
utilizing Jedi Mod tricks, but I'll bust up ya force-field
with hits Cal would feel if he put up the North Shields,
the raw deal, all ya team couldn't rock me
stop please! ya couldn't jaw-D with a cocked-knee  (Geordie with a Cockney)
you're not me, I mean, Mark's blatantly his mates bitch
& the way HE takes hits, we should re-name him Craig List
cuz mainly Craigs writtens are at best bog spillage
his life is non-existent cuz he lets COD fillet  (C.O.D fill it)
when he aint causing haddock with Shawn & having dreams
that if he bans him, Cal can run LA magazine
yea, that was obviously fishy, like Nep-tunes and Marks tracks
that spark laughs, & I know it's a harsh fact, but HE CAN'T RAP!!
so when the peNneZ drop, this car-toon will be powerless
he can't clean his act up, with nobody to shower with - so
this is your lesson men, you've seen some http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/pm_message.asp?ID=18916#" rel="nofollow - class
cuz I'm the Alpha, http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/pm_message.asp?ID=18916#" rel="nofollow - bet with N e pen, the Z comes last  (with any pen the Z comes last)
 
 
 
 
Lucky D
 
Tha best of ya crew left..titles gone NE's been de-throned
Neps response to tha Renegades sounded' like a http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/renegayyyyys_topic20197.html" rel="nofollow - chicken de-boned
Yeah we made tha finals with two no-shows get a fuckin' clue
Cal's an unarmed Hamas tha way that http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/let-the-slaughter-begin_topic20191.html%20" rel="nofollow - Jehu's killin' you
Now were killin' too, bet againts us this won't be an easy win
Take'em to tha Big Game leavin' Neppo still checkin' his chin
Bannin' kats for postin' pics but why so serious son
Writin' apologizies next what tha fuck is ya period done! (Bitch)
At war with god fuck that I'm tha devil and I'm hear to expose
Teamed up with tha left overs after bein' turn down by ya foes
How's that make ya feel Nep? like an orphaned child I'm abusin' you
Might choose to win but in this tourny winning ain't choosin' you
Lettin' off a warnin' but Cal I ain't never seen ya final shot
Wanted to battle Orion but a bigger challenge for him was Kos!!!
Now ya both seen my curse more or less this is just a sermon
If it wasn't for Canadians both of you Brits would be speakin' German
Attack LI or my audios or Neeks twisted message from Manc I laugh at ya
All your shit will be played worse than Englands footie out in Africa
I smashed these two fools fuck both these bitches cuz I'm a Man
I just hope Nep doesn't follow me around lookin' for me to ban!!!
 
 

***All tha titles left NE when Renegades re-formed
BigGame KO'd Nep...Nep than follow around and Banned him
Cali asked Jehu to battle with him in tha tourny
Orion turned down Cali..but battled Kos
Nep made a pic ban..then apologized after..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Nep
 
 

I ain't shootin' http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/pm_message.asp?ID=18928#" rel="nofollow - craps , I'm shootin' caps at this funny guy
don't need to make a trip to the Vegas strip to see Lucky Die
you fuckin' mites, Manc gone so long you would think he died
Sweeny Todd this guy, now his guts in steak & kidney pies
you on my hitlist, this guy was in ER, sick, disgusted
And in his current state, I guess I shouldn't lay on the Kidney punches
but fuck it I'll slam him, fuck FaceBook, you ain't Neps buddy
Manc ain't really want D as his partner, he just wanted to get lucky
These titles belong to Nep an Cal, we on the thrones bro,
An' Manc, tell the truth, if it wasn't for me, you'd already have No Showed
you hoes blow, New Era be rippin' these bastards
LI a real crew? Fuck that, tell me, who wouldn't jump ship if we ask 'em
we left 'em at the
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/pm_message.asp?ID=18928#" rel="nofollow - start line, never see these pansies' pass me
Lucky was like, "yo, is this battle too big for us, they called it the Grand Finale"
Lyricist Inc ain't shit, you boy gonna  get murdered
Lucky wants the respect of a boss but what have you done to deseverve it?
I think that they finding, Nep n Cal always come sick when they writing
we like Old
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/pm_message.asp?ID=18928#" rel="nofollow - School Dads, one hand on the belt, they know they in for a hiding
the life sinking inside 'em, I place no one in text above me,
Manc would do better alone, I guess you just Extra, Lucky.

 
Cal
 
No remorse...

Ya verses are worthless, http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rd-1-manc-lucky-d-vs-alcatraz-teknikal007_topic20137.html" rel="nofollow - no show and a http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rd-2-manc-luckyd-vs-big-game-j504_topic20241.html" rel="nofollow - BG ban seein' ya through
So in reality Nep's done more for your tag team than either of you
LuckyD was never ill but we saw him get a little sick
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/gettin-some-head-freestyle-ft-j-sass_topic19483.html" rel="nofollow - When he watched his own members rep a different clique   (NLEI)
Ask Sick, Sass & Stalin, his ego met with a loss
When ya the original crew claimed you were never the boss  (Remeber tinychat Lucky?)
They'd have rode for me over you, I'm killin' ya resistance
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/238/luckydpm.jpg" rel="nofollow - And pretend you've never asked for my lyrical assistance   (Not the 1st time)
Now look at ya crew... Manc? He'll be the end of ya
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/pm_message.asp?ID=18919#" rel="nofollow - set
http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/ill-rapdisup-no-beef_topic20364.html" rel="nofollow - He'll backstab his own to team to be a friend of the Vets   (Neek ain't even like you)
Won't get a shred of respect, you been missing out facts
Cause we know a lyricist's ink ain't shit without Rap
You ain't think about that, this battle's over now fag
But first, here's some shit you ain't know about Manc
PM'd Chain bout an Open, so Chain sent him a verse
You saw what he wrote and you expected the worst
2 months went and past, shit you must be a fag
And the very first
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/pm_message.asp?ID=18919#" rel="nofollow - person who's ducked a collab...
...that you asked for! So you deserve this, bitch
Claim you uninspired, but dropped 4 verses since! (Ask Chain)

Now give me my motherfucking belt!
 
 
 
 
 
 
good luck ladies.. Vote please 


Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 07 October 2010 at 8:03pm
Where is Lucky D's verse?

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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Capture
Date Posted: 07 October 2010 at 8:48pm
Under the part that says "Lucky D"

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Lyrically Force Niggaz To Spit It Like Masturbation.....The Next Generation


Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 07 October 2010 at 10:30pm
Honestly, it's not there for me. I see 3 verses. Manc, mine then Cal.

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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 07 October 2010 at 10:32pm
That's coz you can't see him, son

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Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 07 October 2010 at 10:39pm
I see it.


Posted By: Woneduh.
Date Posted: 07 October 2010 at 11:07pm
This was like difficult to judge..

Manc forced punches and pure shit... some bars hit hard like one or two..
Then Lucky D get's on and destroys it,.. ill punches, and decent personals..

Then we have Nep... psh.... he wrote a alright verse, still weak for the most part..
A lot of bars hit hard.. and he had a few good punches..

Then cal. This is verse the battle is won..
Cal get's on a destroys lucky and makes manc and his partner nep look like shit..
Good personals, ill flow sick punches..

The votes for Nep & Cal..




Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 07 October 2010 at 11:39pm
It's actually FUBAR'd on my screen to be honest...Neps, maybe if you scroll right, can you see it?

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Posted By: Kosmosis
Date Posted: 08 October 2010 at 12:27am

man this was a hot battle! i need more time to digest it...when i get done with my responsibilities i will come back and break it down and vote, if it is not already decided...props to all!!!!



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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.



Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 08 October 2010 at 1:04am
Yeah Cubes, if I scroll right, it's there :D

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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 08 October 2010 at 3:42am
Uppin'


Posted By: Kosmosis
Date Posted: 08 October 2010 at 1:59pm
the entity votes:
 
ok i must first say that i read and re read and re read this battle, and even check links..nep that craps link does not allow us to see it.
 
now i believe all gentleman made proper war, and this was a close battle, i will simply say what i liked and disliked about each verse....and we will go from there..
 
manc-
cons- lots of english references...which made ALOT of work to verify slang, lingo, black and white color schemes for a yank like me....just saying man...i already have a job lol...also the cod fillets was kinda forced, and thats not just becuase i am a cod fan i promise....fill it...fill "ay" is how we yanks pronounce..unsure as to how you brits do...so maybe it works for yall, but not us...sorry...it was good in theory
 
pros- all that english stuff worked! and fit! your wordplay was ridiculous! the cocked knee...and omg that nep wordplay at the end was ridiculous!  i read that and was like "man how come i never thougth of that!!?"  yao ming?   all in all excellent verse~! i was very impressed~~!
 
 
Lucky D
 
pros - well sir, your verse was ok...i liked how you showed jehu "blasting" cal...even though i though jehu was kinda wack....and i was loving how you brought the truth of how O would battle moi ( and get his bitch ass served~) but wouldnt battle cal...ouch!!!! especially cuz cal hates me, that was a stinger!!! well done~!
 
cons -  aside from my line, which didnt really flow!!!! (wtf!!!) nothing really stood out, i wanted blood, carnage, mayhem..i feel like you kinda softened up some of the blows, and your mid to end of your verse with the exception of my line, didnt really do it for me, it would be good enough to win a regular battle, but this is the finals...just my honest opinion...no beef...
 
 
NepentheZ
 
pros - you have a ruthless streak in you, and are not afraid to spit on your opponent after you urinate on him, if you catch my drift....that vegas line was raw (especially since i am eagerly waiting for fallout new vegas on the ps3 to come out this month, which made the line resonate even harder into my soul!)   you did pretty good here!!! your disses were all pretty consistent, and some what hard!
 
Cons -  to be honest man, i felt like you destroyed lucky, but let manc ride, ya feel me?  let the mans kidneys go...he couldnt help that! its kinda like i was told in my orion battle...just hitting the same punch over and over again.....one punch would have been fine...but it seemed like you had nothing to say about him! 
 
Calibra
 
or may i call you mark lol ?
 
pros-  i must say that even though we have had beef in the past, i like the heck out of this verse!  i like how you big upped your team mate, i also like how you essentially proved how bitch made and shady your opponents past actions had been, and manc you my boy and all, but cal exposed that shit about rapdisup yao ming!? and whether it was a fake personal or not, that was the kind of ruthlessness that is needed for a final!!
 
cons - as much as i hate to say it, i didnt see a whole lot bad, about your verse, it was pretty solid man...you know nitpicking stuff...like add some more multis but really, you did fine...ruthless man.
 
 
the verdict
 
i think mancs verse was the best, and his nep name play absolutely floored me and kicked me in the ball sac....i think lucky dropped the ball.....i think nep did ok, but kinda let manc slide, but did better then lucky....i think cal dropped solid, maybe not as awesome as manc with the skill and wordplay, but certaintly ruthless enough to hang, and outshine lucky.
 
so although i think mancs verse was the best, both nep and cal did well enough together to beat their opponents! i feel like nep and cal were a more HOMOgenous mixture (rofl!!! get it!) and did well enough in this TAG BATTLE to claim victory! no hate guys i love you all anally....take it or leave it!
 
mvgt - craig and mark.
 
 


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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.



Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 08 October 2010 at 2:52pm
There shouldn't be any links at all in my verse. Stalin fucked up. :)

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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Kosmosis
Date Posted: 08 October 2010 at 2:57pm
oh...well then that makes sense.....curse you stalin....curse you!!!!

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Receiving backhanded compliments from Orion since 11-28-13.



Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 08 October 2010 at 3:29pm
I didnt... for some reason those green links appear inalot of shit.. I never put em there


Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 08 October 2010 at 11:04pm
Nice one for the vote and breakdown Kos :-)

Uppin' for votes


Posted By: Lucky D
Date Posted: 09 October 2010 at 9:17pm
Thx for votin' Kos...and personally I think Wonduh/BG/Evil/NaughtShawn/ whoever else he is vote is kinda weak  IMO

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Posted By: Capture
Date Posted: 09 October 2010 at 9:45pm
MVGT : Luck and Manc
 
Luck basically called out everything you guys would say.
And the personal Cal had about a no-show for a collab because Manc forgot, how is that even a personal?
 
Structure:NE
Personals:LI
Punches:LI
Wordplay/Nameplay: LI
Aggressiveness:NE
Predictable:NE
 
MVGT: LI


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Lyrically Force Niggaz To Spit It Like Masturbation.....The Next Generation


Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 09 October 2010 at 11:47pm
Thanks for the vote Cap

Uppin lads Approve


Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 1:05am
A guy in LI votes for the 2 guys form LI. And has "Predictable" as a category. Manc didn't forget a collab either, he ducked it. Even read the verses dude?

OK.


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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 1:14am
C'mon now lol
I see you talking about Woneduh undoubtedly being BG, who is BANNED FOR LIFE, but his vote is acceptable?

How do you duck a collab? Come to think of it, why would anyone duck a collab? lol
I forgot he had sent me his verse, that's all

Don't start swaying and trying to defend the fact your partner totally wasted 2 bars on a personal about somebody not collabing lol

Your verse without Cals verse was enough to rival what both me and Lucky had, and I've already told you that - so lets just let the votes come in fairly without getting all defensive about it eh




Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 1:27am
I agree, Stalin should take in to consideration Woneduh's vote. 

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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 1:28am
I agree with both of you.
 
I'm no mod, but since Nep has been sayin Woneduh is BG then I wouldn't count his vote. Since nobody has said anything about it, it's being left to ride?
 
also, Cap needs to explain his vote better. I think in blind drops, people deserve props for busting the other crew by predicting what they'll say, but I don't think it can qualify as a catagory.
 
no hate for any of you guys, I thought yall all had good verses here.


Posted By: NepentheZ
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 1:28am
Oops, can't edit posts :

But dude, if the vote was the other way 'round, would you accept "Predictable" as a voting category? 


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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...


Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 1:41am
No, you're right - I wouldn't consider it a fair category, but it aint like thats the ONLY category he based his vote on. There were others there, and ya gotta admit - he was right about saying that Lucky would predict what would be said.

But if Caps vote needs to be explained, I'm sure he'll explain it more.

And I agree that Woneduhs vote is iffy


Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 1:44am
I think I can help with this whole pan/pam thing....


you guys are all really rad. and it was a dope battle. the end.

sidenote: i'd vote, but I usually get disqualified so i'll save my opinion.


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#Bananas


Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 2:32am
hmmmm.......intresting.................



*Q goes to the calculator*




uhhh......huh.



yep..........


hmmm.................



I see....................................*Q scratches his head*......uh....huh




once again ....intresting............




Well.....Shit is wayyyyyyy to long to give a play by play but I understand how important this battle is to both parties involved.

Manc/D- After reading your drops twice I have come to a conclusion that Lucky IMO didn't have much weight to his verse.Manc clearly outshined and that makes it difficult cuz that leaves Manc carrying the bag.But Lucky did have a few strikes that hit :
Take'em to tha Big Game leavin' Neppo still checkin' his chin
and
Wanted to battle Orion but a bigger challenge for him was Kos!!!

^^which werent hard hits at all.....sadly to say once again it leaves Manc ,the better battler, hangin.

Nep/Cal- Although I really despise you sphincter products....I have found you both to be pretty consistant.My difficult decision is going to be whether both of your drops have enough power to beat Mancs.

hmmm...........

I'm reading all three and I have come to a decision ......I believe that Nepansie and Cali-bra have proven that togehter they make up the perfect drag queen.LOL!!...Naw but really tho.....uh..........really they do!!!
rotflmao......okay okay! But real talk......Manc ..you my niggah fasho and I know that Lucky Dumm did his best, but you were battling two at once cuz his held no weight imo. Had there been another consistant emcee things would be different.But for now my vote goes to  Nep and Calibra.

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Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 2:52am
Nice one for the breakdown & vote -Que- ... & thanks for reading them

So, If thats including Woneduh vote, I make it 3-1 ...... unless Caps vote has to be explained more

C'mon lads - come with ya votes


Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 10 October 2010 at 4:40pm
Originally posted by Capture Capture wrote:

Luck basically called out everything you guys would say.
And the personal Cal had about a no-show for a collab because Manc forgot, how is that even a personal?

So I should have used those bars to tell people what Manc & Lucky were going to say instead? Ok, I just thought this was a battle, not who has the better Crystal Ball.

Good battle btw lads.


Posted By: J504
Date Posted: 11 October 2010 at 5:14am
Man, this thing needs to be voted on, This is the Finale for fuck's sake. Dead 


Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 12 October 2010 at 5:58pm
Does Woneduhs vote count or not? If so, it's 3-1 so we've won. If his doesn't count then I make it 2-0 due to the nature of Capture's vote. So what's the deal?


Posted By: CHAIN
Date Posted: 12 October 2010 at 6:19pm
y'all can analize the shit out of my vote if u want...disqualify it even, its all good

Originally posted by Stalin Stalin wrote:



Quotables

Manc

you're not me, I mean, Mark's blatantly his mates bitch

& the way HE takes hits, we should re-name him Craig List

he can't clean his act up, with nobody to shower with   lol

Lucky D
 
Now ya both seen my curse more or less this is just a sermon
If it wasn't for Canadians both of you Brits would be speakin' German

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Nep
 
you on my hitlist, this guy was in ER, sick, disgusted
And in his current state, I guess I shouldn't lay on the Kidney punches

Manc ain't really want D as his partner, he just wanted to get lucky

you hoes blow, New Era be rippin' these bastards
LI a real crew? Fuck that, tell me, who wouldn't jump ship if we ask 'em


Cal

Ya verses are worthless, http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rd-1-manc-lucky-d-vs-alcatraz-teknikal007_topic20137.html" rel="nofollow - no show and a http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rd-2-manc-luckyd-vs-big-game-j504_topic20241.html" rel="nofollow - BG ban seein' ya through
So in reality Nep's done more for your tag team than either of you

LuckyD was never ill but we saw him get a little sick
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/gettin-some-head-freestyle-ft-j-sass_topic19483.html" rel="nofollow - When he watched his own members rep a different clique   (NLEI)

Won't get a shred of respect, you been missing out facts
Cause we know a lyricist's ink ain't shit without Rap

 



i thought nep & cal had alot more quotable lines, and manc's verse was ill but i think his references went over my head, yes, he explained it, but i like to catch shit immediately, makes the punch harder, but thats not his fault, 'cause his verse was serious, lucky d had some cool lines too but i felt like a lot of those lines were just minor hits, no K.O's , except for the german line, that actually made me lol

nep& cal also had more polished verses, imo

so mgvt : to new era, lol

yeah i'm a new era head so feel free to hate on my vote, but it is what it is, i'm being honest
 



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+Sick-Witted+


Posted By: Manc
Date Posted: 14 October 2010 at 10:36pm
CHAIN, thanks for taking the time to break it down and vote.

I'm disappointed that a lot of people steered away from this. I seen A LOT of different members reading it but not voting. That's bollocks, and the main reason people aint battling as much now.

Anyways, surely the 5 days is up now - so that makes Cal & Nep the winners.
Congrats lads & a good battle Clap




Posted By: Calibra
Date Posted: 14 October 2010 at 10:47pm
No offence to Stalin, but if he hadn't let it drag I think people would've been more interested, it's dragged on for so long people stoppedcaring... when this was started Big Game was still a member on his original username lol

Good battle though guys.


Posted By: Stalin
Date Posted: 17 October 2010 at 5:29pm
Nep and Cal win this battle.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by Calibra Calibra wrote:

No offence to Stalin, but if he hadn't let it drag
 
 
 
You were the last one to give me a verse...



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