Since everyone else has ima just post it up lol

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Swifts 'punches' leave us distorted for a second
Where as kay'll rip this rapper before an orphan would a present
This fuckers stupid man, take a look and think here
Tell fatty to go on a di-et, dumbass'd come back with pink hair!
Face facts fat cunt, you bes' believe im sick
I moan i CAN see my ribs, This bastard CAN'T even see his dick..
Dropped a half decent punch, so how much that shit cost?
Ofcourse i got game homie i mean shit, i just handed anuva FIFTH loss*
Check the top 10 you aint there or the vets-list
Why?...U droppin more played bars than level 100  on tetris!
Long to short lines, switchin' up on styles swift
Cause just like ya rankin' one punche'll leave u knocked n dropped 13 miles bitch
Here come's denial which, makes you complain n cry
Pm slick.."Why's kay gone so hard X", "Cause he's insane that's why!
Key'd for this battle an' suddenly had the smallest thought
Let's aDRESS it man..cause
Her's proof that swifts style is http://www.polyvore.com/taylor_swift/celebrity?celebrity=Taylor+Swift" rel="nofollow - stretched long or fallin' short ....

elaborate the vote if you don't mind sir.

'preciate it.

 

Kayb-
punches
present opener- ok
di-et - nice and funny
sick/dick- aaaa fat jokes are cool IF you use a creative punch IMO
cost/5th loss- was coo. but mediocre set up
vetslist/tetris- tetris bar was ok but seems a lil old
swift/13miles bitch- liked the first line but the ranking punch seemed forced and didnt really hit much
cry/thats why- -__- was really plain
closer was clever and best part of the verse

 

Swifty-
punches
kayb toysRus- nice as shit
press/votes line- it hit me on the 2nd read. nice
#battles/86- loved it
eat him/k challenge- nice
Kbs small/kilobits- ill
08- funny when i saw the link
hard dedcision- ok
closer- nice and funny

 

mvgt- SWIFT

just thought he had the better verse and put MUCH thought into each punch using name flips, personals and great structure and flow to the verse

good battle yall n be eazy

better?

Kay-B

*Fifth/Fifty....Game desroyed 50...swift also has 4 losses on his record

*He is 13 (19th) places below me (16th) on the rankings

Swifts 'punches' leave us distorted for a second

Where as kay'll rip this rapper before an orphan would a present

Not a bad start..I thought the orphan line was clever..

This fuckers stupid man, take a look and think here

Tell fatty to go on a di-et, dumbass'd come back with pink hair!

Basically saying he's stupid..ummm not really feeling this one..kinda funny but not really that good

Face facts fat cunt, you bes' believe im sick

I moan i CAN see my ribs, This bastard CAN'T even see his dick..

Again not bad but not really great...clowning him cuz he's fat, but not really making it clever.

Dropped a half decent punch, so how much that shit cost?

Ofcourse i got game homie i mean shit, i just handed anuva FIFTH loss*

This one was good I thought, clever play on words.

Check the top 10 you aint there or the vets-list

Why?...U droppin more played bars than level 100  on tetris!

I thought this one was good, tetris line was funny to me and clever.

Long to short lines, switchin' up on styles swift

Cause just like ya rankin' one punche'll leave u knocked n dropped 13 miles bitch 

Decent name play, and a decent finish up on it.

Here come's denial which, makes you complain n cry

Pm slick.."Why's kay gone so hard X", "Cause he's insane that's why!

Not feeling this one at all, basically a filler line IMO

Key'd for this battle an' suddenly had the smallest thought

Let's aDRESS it man..cause

Her's proof that swifts style is stretched long or fallin' short....

Didn't like the closer...thought it was basically another filler.

Overall not bad, 4 bars that were good. Too many filler lines IMO.  Fat jokes don't really work unless they are clever and I thought they lacked in here.

Swift Styles

Here to serve ya, After this they'll need to Rebirth ya

Ill murder Kay B like the Toys R Us merger

Good start to the verse, liked the finish up more so than the start.

This turn of event put me up against kevin

I'll Press him so hard it'll make the voters forget him

Thought this was a filler line in my opinion, ya drew KB in the tourny so make us forget him, too generic

Get em! Its high time for me slay this prick

And I aint gotta count ya battles to leave ya 86'd!

Clever attack on his battle score, even though its good, thought is was a nice way to go at it

Its mad obvious, Battling aint this dudes talent

Ill eat him up, Like Im all about a K challenge!!

This was good too, nice way of wording the attack

You aint this ill you bitch, Kb's as small as kilobits

Your verse is horrible, there's no need to get that filler flipped

Didn't like this one...KB..KiloBits..I understand where you were going put it didn't really work for me.

Im Rattling a dude Still braggin bout a win from 08 '

And dont need a fortuneteller to forsee his known fate

I don't know about this one either...seemed to be just thrown in there for line count.

Lets see how he feels after all these bars hit him

K, you aint winning cuz this isnt a hard decision *

A attack from something about 2008..doesn't really seem fresh for me.

Im taking this one easy, Making sure that B's off this

Im given you a loss that'll hurt like  these topics!

Decent personal attack in the closer.

**added his link - Slick.

Overall--Opener was a clever way to start, and the closer was a good personal attack.  A few filler bars in there and the 2008 shots to me weren't that good.  And the Kilobits attack, wasn't doing it for me either.

Both had some good lines, and both had some off lines.  I was a toss up for me, because they both had about 4 bars that stood out. But what took it for me was the fact that Swift had a better closer.  Other than that it was pretty even.

Swift GMV

and with that.