rd2: Steven T. Guidry vs Slick
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Forum Name: Rebirth 2012
Forum Description: New Tournament for Lyrical Assault, Rebirth 2012
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:43am
Topic: rd2: Steven T. Guidry vs Slick
Posted By: -XTC-
Subject: rd2: Steven T. Guidry vs Slick
Date Posted: 18 February 2012 at 10:52pm
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RULES
BEST OF LUCK TO YOU FELLAS. ------------- "See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
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Posted By: -XTC-
Date Posted: 18 February 2012 at 10:55pm
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-czech-
------------- "See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
Posted By: Steven T. Guidry
Date Posted: 19 February 2012 at 3:44pm
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I am not going to pm you my verse, conflict of interest. I will post it up here. Hope you ok with that. ------------- NLIE's new recruit |
Posted By: -XTC-
Date Posted: 19 February 2012 at 6:09pm
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well I wasn't expecting you to lol.
------------- "See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
Posted By: Steven T. Guidry
Date Posted: 19 February 2012 at 8:49pm
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alright bruv. good luck see you in two weeks ------------- NLIE's new recruit |
Posted By: Steven T. Guidry
Date Posted: 03 March 2012 at 2:21am
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Stevie aint even
needing 16 to crush this lame poser, Bitch how you get
KO’d by RAM? ß
THAT SHIT is game over. I claim your son aint
yours and that your bitch Juan-ed beside you And let me remind
you: you get to be a vet, when the vets co-sign you This lame thinks he
is untouchable…cuz he been on the site for a minute? When this fake
wouldn’t have a punch if his arm had Tourettes in it So he has gotta
resort to changing rules as a form of self encouragement You cheating bitch. How the hell you going to battle and mod in the
same tournament? Shady bitch stacking
brackets, proof of your faggot tactics, But Steve builds
death like a carpenter of caskets Easy to murder ya,
you got more no shows than IKON’s furniture Easily disturbing ya,
serving curb kicks to this little pricks jaw curvature You lose cuz you
suck. Then make fuck you threads to cast blame? Instead of seeing how
every one of your verses has the same rhyme scheme? (that’s lame.) So call J5 Kosmosis,
duck Manc, duck Ram, cheat, bitch, and stand for every thing I hate While I sit back and
win when I ask you to prove you’ve actually sold real estate. Bitch. ------------- NLIE's new recruit |
Posted By: -XTC-
Date Posted: 03 March 2012 at 4:07am
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He sucks so bad he needs the whole to 2 weeks To 'Process' another flop like Memphis Bleek Cause beyond this geek lies an emotional bitch Obviously why his girl left this pussy for dick.. I'll slaughter this prick.. Cause i'm not sympathetic How can you show sympathy to someone simply pathetic With an angry man fetish.. try'd to get me http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=22242&title=xtc-is-mad" rel="nofollow - flaring. . No surprise your 29 and http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=22106&title=steven-guidry-intro" rel="nofollow - STILL LIVING WITH YOUR PARENTS!!.. Now i'ma make this apparent.. Ya try'd to tell me go practice.. http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=22341&title=therapeutic-word-association-blue" rel="nofollow - "Thick spic dick.." Bitch.. YOU rhyme like a faggot.. There's no doubt about it.. It's obvious you see, He's glad Juan wasn't black cause we've got http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=22364&title=an-experiment" rel="nofollow - humongous meat.. You're just a fuckin geek with a lot of built aggression I guess that's why he http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=22341&title=therapeutic-word-association-blue" rel="nofollow - masturbates to relieve his stressful tension Therapeutic sessions try to help him overcome.. ..A life he once lived.. with an easy fuckin slut.. bitch.. ------------- "See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 03 March 2012 at 11:03am
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Hmmm... "Steven" - Some of the lines were a bit too long & some of the rhymes were a bit tenuous - most were simple - however, you got some decent punches in there, using decent personals on him...I liked that tourettes line, didn't like the 'builds death' one so much...overall, it was a bit 'in between' for me...there wasn't anything amazing in there, and some of it was a bit hyperextended...think it would've been a good verse overall had some of your punches been a bit choppier...best two examples of that were the rhyme scheme & modding the tournament, both had potential to be very solid, but were just 'ok' because they didn't get to the point quick enough...good setup lines in both of those though. So yeah, I'd say it was a borderline solid verse...could have been more fluid in places & you had a couple of fillerish punches (jaw curvature) & one's that weren't as good as they could've been coz they were stretched...apart from that it was good, just a shame you didn't bring it all together. XTC - Your opener definitely showcased you fluidity advantage, liked the style of running across the first line into the second...however, as a punch it would've been better if you weren't dropping the same time as him, that kind of punch is much better if you drop straight away on the battle I always think...plus I didn't like how you've had basic rhymes in your first four lines...emotional bitch was a good setup, but the end punch is a bit blah...next punch was ok, decent idea but again I didn't really think it came off for you...I get the idea, and it's true enough...but I think you need to be going at him harder than that. Next punch was good, nice personal & connection with the setup line as well...better, but still a simple rhyme...at least you had the 29/surprise rhyme in there as well which added a bit to it...next punch was decent, good idea but again I felt like you could've thrown that harder in his face (and if you're going to call someone out for using one syllable rhymes you should make more effort to demonstrate a more advanced rhyme scheme yourself!!!)...so yeah, while it still landed it was a bit like the opener where it lost some of the impact for me...you need to be consistently throwing multis at him to maximise the impact of that punch! Juan punch, didn't like it at all...geek filler was good, but the punch was ehhh...closer was decent For me, felt like you've missed a relatively easy opportunity to progress here...Kos left the door open for you, all you really had to do with drop a few heavy punches, with a decent rhyme scheme and make sure you didn't miss any punches and you were through the door...but for me you didn't deliver that, you brought a simple rhyme scheme (really not much between you & Kos there)...had a couple of punches that I felt you could've done better with (similar to Kos, but at least his were because he stretched the line...you just didn't execute them properly)...plus you tailed off towards the end when you hadn't done the job properly. Therefore, it makes it a hard one to call...read it twice now and still not really sure which way to call it. Re-reading it you can see that Kos has a solid first half to his verse & then tails off a bit with the carpenter (though I really liked the way the filler line on that flowed) towards curvature, then he closes it out with two decent lines...whereas going back through XTC's I can see that he dips in the middle (pussy for dick to simply pathetic - though the second was still ok) before having a better bar & then tailing off again right towards the end... Since I've got to pick, I'll go with "Stevie" aka definitely not Kos. I think it was there for XTC to win but he didn't bring enough strength in his punches consistently...therefore even though Kos tailed off in part of his verse, it wasn't fatal like it perhaps could have been against a stronger verse. Felt he punched more & harder in the verse and in the end, that's what got him the win. Vote = "Steven" ------------- 
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Posted By: Steven T. Guidry
Date Posted: 03 March 2012 at 4:04pm
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Thanks for the feed man, I appreciate it. props to xtc too. ------------- NLIE's new recruit |
Posted By: -XTC-
Date Posted: 03 March 2012 at 8:37pm
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Am I missing something about Kos here
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Posted By: hanGing
Date Posted: 03 March 2012 at 11:49pm
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Nope - not a thing. Lock this one X. Thanks .
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Posted By: Rameez
Date Posted: 04 March 2012 at 12:03am
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lol this was close battle though ------------- 
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Posted By: -XTC-
Date Posted: 04 March 2012 at 1:15am
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locked ------------- "See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |