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Josh reached the final, this is
how this fools classed..
..Remember the day http://https/encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTRIv3V4dkt4bfoF7ctafu_pKZg9Qyr0F5u_ho3VMBveB78WSf8" rel="nofollow - DTK said he iz-'ard n we ALL laughed
(Couldn’t open the link) Not a bad
opener though, decent flow to it. 5/10
Boardin' the boat with Kay, ya
gettin' abused n punched
'DTK', once a gang tag,
now http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=DTK" rel="nofollow - coincidentally used by punks ?
Alright flow to this again, the
punch is a bit weak in the way it’s worded. It’s just like ‘Yeah he’s a punk’
and whilst clever in set up, isn’t the most hard hitting of insults, especially
with how you had it worded here. 5/10
Kay's under no stress now, no
pressure time to impress clown
Like haggling with shop
assistants, I'm knocking the dress down
Few grammar errors which fucked
with the flow, but I worked it out in my head to make sense so wont mark you
down for it, just be aware of how things look when written in the future. It’s
a unique play, and had some intelligence behind it. 8/10
Still up there, u ain't lost YET,
you've NEVER dropped vets
An' like http://i2.mirror.co.uk/3am/celebrity-news/article164608.ece/ALTERNATES/s615b/Rex_REID_FOR_3AM_1017921F.jpg" rel="nofollow - Alex Reid , the strength's been sent to cross-dress
Good flow, wasn’t feeling the
punch though. 5/10
Confidence'll be your weakness,
this tough-guys broken
Like a dolphin, echo's of
the past, left him http://factspy.net/dolphins-sleep-with-one-eye-open/" rel="nofollow - sleepin'
with an eye open
Ehhhh I get what you were doing,
it just didn’t come off as stinging though. 4/10
His prides broken, Reminiscent of
our past meetings
An' dress has ONLY JUST
improved, since http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/kay-b-vs-dresstokill_topic9128_page2.html?KW=kay+dress" rel="nofollow - his .. http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/kay-b-vs-dresstokill-topical_topic9977.html?KW=kay+dress" rel="nofollow - last... http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/dresstokill-vs-kay_topic13071_page2.html?KW=kay+dress" rel="nofollow - beatings
I think your wording undoes you
again here, you’re trying to poke fun at him by saying he hasn’t improved much.
But the way you’ve done it doesn’t really do that, it’s more like you’re just
saying it to say it like ‘Yeah, he’s only gotten a little better’ it doesn’t
really come off as attacking. 5/10
All three from before i even
improved with my writing
DESPERATE FOR A CHEAP WIN,
this kid even http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/kay-b-vs-dresstokill_topic9128_page1.html" rel="nofollow - accused
me of BITING (ha)
Yeah, not bad. 7/10
Don't worry for the loss, mum
still thinks ur
best in her heart
But Ima let the voters pull
on the thread n watch dress fall apart..
People use too many ‘dress’ plays
on DTK, to the point they get boring to see in battles. It’s annoying because
you did it once in a good way, but you’ve come at it again in a weaker way.
Shame to see that, it really killed the end of your verse. 4/10
Kay B total: 43/80
You're like a bitch with big lips,
it ain't hard to spot that you suck!
The only time you come close-in battles is when you're
locking em up! (closing)
Good idea, bad wording. Shoulda
been ‘Only time you’re close-in’ and then it’d have been good. 4/10
Kay can't compete! This aint a
fucking battle for 1st place..
He couldn't have this tourney in
the bag http://imgur.com/a/cqXnF" rel="nofollow - if it was
stocked at his work place! *
This was so-so, the flow was good
but it’s not the hardest of punches. 6/10
I'm crushing this herbs face! He's
a topicalist so his battles are lacking heat
Even he admitted that every punch
he http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/semifinals-kay-b-vs-mcwoods_topic16348.html" rel="nofollow - tries
to rap is WEAK!
You’ve got good ammo, but you used
it poorly. If someone admits they can’t put together a good punch, you need to
do so much more with it than you did. It’s the kind of info that’s a 1 bar body
bag if done right, and you just didn’t pull it off at all. 4/10
I'll leave this cat deceased, A
good Kay battle verse is a rare find!
Your rhyming skills have
deteriorated worse than your fucking http://imgur.com/Ij9pNQC" rel="nofollow - hair line!
Christ, a hairline punch line?
Wow. I can’t believe you’d use something like that in a final. Look at the
picture man, he’s sitting on a dudes lap lol. That’s so easy to clown him on,
yet you focus on the hair for God knows what reason. 4/10
Want me to prove he's out dated?
Kay, we all know that your raps flop!
LI only hired ya for topical
expertise, now you're useless in that spot!*
Heh, again you’re not coming at
the angle hard enough. (also what is with this simple rhyme schemes you’ve got
going on? Raps flop/that spot…smh my dude) 4/10.
I've been hungry for a title, so
i'll start by consuming his bars
Kay coudn't manage to find a way
to Drop D if he was tuning guitars!!
It’s an alright idea I guess,
nothing too amazing though. 5/10
Key in the bomb coordinates, Your
Dynasties over..Ikon ensured that
I'll toss K and LI around with an L to KILL him with pure rap!
Yes, if you take the letters K L I
and L and mix them you can spell Kill. Let’s see if I can achieve something
similar here ‘P A I S P O D I T N D E’. 4/10
No one thinks this cats hot! Just
a poetry head that drops boredom..
The only people moved by your posts http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/trizzy-tre-call-out_topic25331_post273201.html?KW=#273201" rel="nofollow - dropped
in the wrong forum!
Heh. 5/10
DTK total: 36/80
MVGT Kay B
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