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• No crew votes
• Votes in groups are best out of 5
• Votes must be explained SUFFICIENTLY with key battle criteria explained - tournament moderator will ensure all votes are explained
• To stop new members coming in to vote for their friends. To vote, you will have to apply (there will be a thread), and hanGing will say either yes or no. Most of the time it will be yes, but there are cases where people may try and cheat
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• Groups: max 8 bars
• There will be no first or second to drop. You can drop whenever you want, as long as it's before the deadline.
• No flips/feeding
• All verses will be checked for biting/recycling, so don't even try it - it's not worth it
• There will be a tourny discussion thread, but in addition to this "spam" won't be deleted from battles, so non-verse/vote posts are allowed, as long as they're relevant and non-hateful
• Scoring. 1 point for a loss , 2 for a win and 3 for a whitewash.
• No verse posted = -5 points.
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"Sicker Than Thou"

Lol Ur Opener Punch Has Be Used! I Think ILLA Used It...

Ur Jus A One Way Fool Lol Bitin Bitin Bitin Ur Gonna Get Merked LMAO...

Sup...Lol Sorry Man...I Noticed The "Played Punches" And Y Uve Lost 43 Lol...
...ANY MO' FO' WHO VOTES AGAINST ME FOR STRUCTURE OR MULTIES IS A WEAK DICKRYDIN FUCK...

...Lets Kick This Shit...

I'll Kill~This~Freak Drill~This~Geek leave his FUTURE lookin "Very Bleak" Frank aint iLL~He's~Weak I'll smash his Cheek 'N' leave his FACE~A BLOODY LEAK.../1
He's on~a HOT Streak if U make his Losses WIN'S! 'N' he's only got~a "Sting" in~his Step if he's Walking~On~Pin's, Frank's so FAT I dunno which one of his Chin's to be Hittin.../2
He's~a "400 Pounder" that still couldent MOVE~A~CROWD if he "Stage Dived", He was Deprived of Air~At~Birth cuz this bitch is so Ugly I shoved him back up 'N' asked for~a Re-Birth.../3
I'll Berrie him Alive in tha Earth so he can be Apart~Of~The~Underground I'll Pound him of the "Floor" so he's Bound to be Bouncing~Of~Tha~Walls.../4
This Joke~Falls Down Every "Gap" he leaves in his Lyrics 'N' if I "Shouted Down" his structure it would Echo back like Halls.../5
Franks ONLY got tha Balls~To~Battle~Me if he's Lickin Mine! NOW hows it "Feel" to be lookin down~a "Real Nine", Ur~a Joke 'N' ya rhymes are spongey like ive Stripped~Ya~Spine.../6

No Need For Any More...

One...........................

Tough one to call, both started well and tailed off...I liked most of Franks lines but there is somethin up with the flow that I jus cant put my finger on, maybe the vocab a little basic or something, prolly not....try and make sure ya lines are about the same length tho Frank, that'll help you out...TeC started nice as well, liked his rhyme scheme and flow and he had some nice punches...flow kinda messed up at points (maybe it jus coz Im listenin 2 Joe Budden)....but I felt like he worded his concepts a little better than Frank so took this

Vote = TeC (I liked the mya line and the inter line tho Frank, try and up ya multis and sort ya line length out and you'll be on the way)

PEace

Tec wrote: Noticed The "Played Punches" And Y Uve Lost 43 Lol...

That's pretty out of order. The only real played punch there is the vampire bit, and as an ex-biter, you're askin' for it anyway.

Tec wrote: ...ANY MO' FO' WHO VOTES AGAINST ME FOR STRUCTURE OR MULTIES IS A WEAK DICKRYDIN FUCK...

Why? How would that make them dickryders? First of all, you had better multis than him anyway, but that's part a verse, not essential to win but it plays a part, and your structure is messed, which messes your flow, so people can't vote against you for that?

Frank... nice verse, funny, flow was OK, rhymes were basic, wordplay brought in to all ya punches, a lot of it quite original.

Tec... bad flow... some nice rhymes at times, and for someone that took a shot at him for played punches, you had losses/wins, rebirth and underground lines which have been done plenty...

Tec definitely had a more complex verse vocab-wise, and had some pretty good wordplay, complex rhyme scheme but complex isn't always good if it fucks the cohesion of the verse up, which it did for me... Frank came clean and simple, didn't try anything different but brought original wordplay and more personals, which gave him better punching power, his structure got him better flow... so ironically, Tec, the thing keepin' you IN this battle was the complex rhyme scheme/multis and vocab, even tho you said to people not to vote on multis...

Tec, you shoulda filled out ya eight bars, because you thought as his verse was simple it was wack, you're wrong. It dissed, with original concepts and personals. Big words and gore don't kill a battle, which is why Hanging has losses on his record. Frank wins.

VOTE: Frank White

i simply enjoyed frank whites verse alot more, infact i was fuckin surprised at the elvation, ok style wise it was poor, but he did the essentials to win a battle, Nice punches at times and constanly attacking and getting at tec, the break bars was aiight, computer hacker was pretty nice, all in all solid shit, tec, your shit was aight, good style and slightly better flow and structure, stylistically your better, but i dont think you came hard enough period, u need to get more at him....keep at it tho..

vote-frank white

flow: frank (tecs structure cost him this cat...cuz his multies woulda helped take the cat)

punches: frank

personals: frank

multies: tec (some nice ones...some SHITTY ones...but still more than frank

wordplay: none really of any quality in this battle...so id give it to TEC if forced

opener: frank (like i say in any battle...starting a verse with "ill kill you this way" type lyrics is very unskilled. finishing a battle like that is wack too. always start off with a personal, or a nice punch)

closer: frank (bad breath shit was hilarious. haha that shit was dope

vote: frank white. overall better diss...anybody could be like tec and put out 12 lines of "ill do this to you. then cut this off. and then youll be like this" type ish...dont mean they skilled, just rap illiterate