[WD#5] The Pew Used For Truth
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Category: Emcee Lounge
Forum Name: Open Mic
Forum Description: This isnt a Battle Board, this is for your Freestyle Verses to be Rated by other members.
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Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 5:05am
Topic: [WD#5] The Pew Used For Truth
Posted By: Neek
Subject: [WD#5] The Pew Used For Truth
Date Posted: 24 July 2016 at 11:50pm
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misanthropic, distant populous is my respite nepotism connected, impish relentless peasants that iconoclast, ossify my presence pro taggin this antagonist, philosophize message christen me transient, bizzy bone infringement osmosis from 'no mad', this solve it so fast conjugal with a pot of gold, still never broke back ------------- #Bananas 
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Posted By: Rutter knows best
Date Posted: 26 July 2016 at 4:24pm
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This wS abut more obscure than the other entries, interesting rhyme schemes and very compact content. I felt the meaning of the words could of been better overall but you came with an interesting technique. Definitely brought something different to table here. ------------- #bananas 
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Posted By: Cuba
Date Posted: 27 July 2016 at 9:03pm
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lol @ broke back...you're always super compact when you do these type of things (WD to pyramid schemes)...the philosophise message bit just sounds dope in my head. I see what Ruts is saying, it does feel like a purely technical exercise for you...almost like you bang it out quick time. Know you're more creative than that so it'd be interesting to see what different directions you could take it in next time. You don't need to be as brutally compact, just my view though. ------------- 
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Posted By: -Que-
Date Posted: 28 July 2016 at 5:32pm
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Neek you crazy muhfukkah lol. In my head I had an old Tribe called Quest beat playin...ha the shit melded perfect. Dug the humor and freestyle ability. ------------- |
Posted By: Droidian
Date Posted: 29 July 2016 at 5:48am
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interestingly, like Que i had a tune going. .but it was the instrumental for queens gets the money. ..and i kept repeating your lines over Jay Elec's hectic progression..and it at least seemed to bring insight. hard to tell, tho. .this drop was reminiscent of some ginsberg pieces... nice -------------  |
Posted By: daydizzle89
Date Posted: 29 July 2016 at 7:45pm
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Wasnt as concise with meaning than the ones i have read through. What stood out is you used less than the prescribed 10 lines. Woah, Its tough to do so especially with the vocabulary that you had to use. This was definitely a flew joint and very very tightly squeezed. Nice work here |
Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 29 July 2016 at 10:09pm
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Damn you Neekski I thought I was taking the piss knocking mine up in twenty mins!!! You done put the 60 second shovel over eveybodys bonce Crazy maybe even deep.....I dun know, me no scuba Peace -------------  |
Posted By: Neek
Date Posted: 29 July 2016 at 10:19pm
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spume, I got you bro. the first two minutes of this interview really helps decode this verse. I am glad that you picked up on the vibe tho. I appreciate that. ------------- #Bananas
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Posted By: spume corrupt
Date Posted: 29 July 2016 at 10:38pm
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Oh dear lmfao I already got this shit on some daily loop shit Should'a seen this coming Double damn you playskools ------------- |