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R1-B2 - Noxious v Acuity

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Category: Tournament Boards
Forum Name: Blaze the Speakers
Forum Description: Tournament by: Scotty32, Winner: ILLA
URL: http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=6070
Printed Date: 27 March 2026 at 4:43am


Topic: R1-B2 - Noxious v Acuity
Posted By: Scotty32
Subject: R1-B2 - Noxious v Acuity
Date Posted: 05 June 2005 at 10:38am
Minimum Length (Time): 2mins
Maximum Length (Time): 3mins
first to 5 votes wins or 3 KO
dickride votes are not allowed
crew votes are not allowed
biting is not allowed
Votes must be Fully explained
Checkin Deadline: 11th June 2005
Post Deadline: 15th June 2005



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Posted By: Noxious
Date Posted: 05 June 2005 at 11:05am
Chizzeck...


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Posted By: Acuity
Date Posted: 05 June 2005 at 11:08am
checkin in........and jesus at the deadlines being 2weeks away almost, why so long?

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Posted By: Noxious
Date Posted: 05 June 2005 at 11:10am
Cuz im Lazy.

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Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:01pm
http://lyricalassault.co.uk/upload/site/tourny/blaze_the_speakers/R1-B5%20%28Noxious%29%20Acuity%20Diss.mp3 - - Acuitys Audio File

you may now vote.

Note: to download right click with the mouse on the link and select "Save File As..."

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Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:21pm
Beat selections were wack...

the coughing on the beat was stupid, and the fo fo part was gay. Nox, your first couple of bars had a sick ass flow. Your flow improved by a lot, so you win that category. Delivery was better, but not by too much, cause Acuity kept punchig non stop, with a kinda 'agressively subdued' style.

On punches this was close... some punches from both missed. However, Nox spent a LOT of track time talking shit, while Ac had more punches, and overall, came with a bit better personals (UK artists but all western influences) and funnier punches.


Acuity wins by 2 hairs...


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Posted By: Louie
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:23pm

jehu sed it all if u want me to expalin i wud just copy n paste

well put jehu

vote: a



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Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:24pm
lazy fuck, lol

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Posted By: Noxious
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:25pm
Minimum Length (Time): 2mins
Maximum Length (Time): 3mins
first to 5 votes wins or 3 KO
dickride votes are not allowed
crew votes are not allowed
biting is not allowed
Votes must be Fully explained
Checkin Deadline: 11th June 2005
Post Deadline: 15th June 2005

An' since we've never really got along... dont vote.

0 - 1.


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Posted By: BRIGGZY
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:27pm

Nox...Beat is Cool Played out now tho...Flow is Decent kept it consistant..the intro was tooooo long tho..Lyrics were Cool..emotion was str8...Delivery was Cool

OVerall- 7/10

Acunity...Beat is Ass aint feelin it..Flow was ok pritty consistant..Emotion needs mad work kept the same tone of voise all the way through..Delivery is OK at best..Lyrics were cool..hurd a couple played lines

overall- 6.5/10

Vote- Noxious.. Close shit..But i personally fought Ac's verse got boring..



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Posted By: Louie
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:27pm

wht u about didnt get along... chat shit u KID



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all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....


Posted By: Noxious
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:28pm


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Posted By: Louie
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:32pm

clip u put effort in it showed i ditn big u up for tht, dat is the only fing wrong wiv my vote

ur flow is better, beat is shit. u fought u wer sumthin u aint on this track n dat goes against not beign real n is a big contricdtion ta urself n ta even battle. however ur punches wer funny and on point.

acuity: flow is gud.cud be better but u i can hear it coming thru, ur punches wer jus abotu better than clipz n thats the main reasons why u took this

like jehu sed close very close

vote:a



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all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....


Posted By: -Orion-
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:38pm

Nox... the coughing was funny, lmao... The fo fo bit tho, lol, you need to have the right voice to do that, and u don't... You came in quite hyped with the flow, sounded good... as it went on you muffled a bit too much tho... In general you had a lot of filler, like, really... and then punches like the old games thing which are played as hell... I dunno why Briggz said ya delivery and emotion were cool/straight, they weren't, well u could say "straight" MAYBE, but in general you lacked energy, I know u weren't well and that's kinda why, but then leavin' it till tha last day, those are the sorta things that can go wrong... Lyrically nothing really stood out, it was almost all poor or filler, and I TOLD you this as u were writing it and I even told u to scrap it but you ain't listen, you got lazy, and it shows...

Acuity... London boi, repprazent haha... I like ya voice man, feel it a lot... ya delivery did get a lil boring after a while 'cuz you spat for longer than anyone else so far with no real breakdown or switchup or pause or nothin'... but I dunno why people sayin' you ain't got emotion 'cuz you actually do - compared to ya opponent at least - like u put stress in ya punchlines which is what's crucial and what a lot of people have lacked so far... Flow-wise tho u fell off... Dunno what it is, maybe it's partly ya line-length or maybe it was the beat but it just seemed too all over tha place at times, u weren't hittin' the snare enough, BUT ya rhythm was nice and a good amount of ur lyrics came thru nice with some clarity too...

Nox I know I been encouraging u a lot lately and u gotta keep at it but u weren't on-point enough here... Ya lacked emotion in ya lines and your lines had way too much filler/played shit, tho ya flow and clarity was improved a lot... Ac, some good inventive punches, some I've heard before but none real real played out... nice rhythm and enunciation in ya shit but flow and clarity lacked at times which made this pretty close, but...

VOTE: Acuity



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Posted By: Noxious
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:41pm
Thanx every1

Lock it... Props a...

Ac... Goodluck on gettin merked by Omerta... lmao

WuN


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Posted By: King Jehu
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:44pm
I love it when I read someone's work in progress and tell them shit about it and they ignore it like I don't know what the fuck I'm talking about. This is why I don't like giving advice. 

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Posted By: Scotty32
Date Posted: 15 June 2005 at 3:44pm
briggzy's votes disallowed since its a crew vote

3KO - locked


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