1-2 Punch League: [1-2] X-centrik vs Spume Corrupt [wk16]
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    Posted: 14 December 2016 at 1:57am
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Form: WLWLLL 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 December 2016 at 11:45pm
I could cripple this cunt, just chilling, I'd still put a dagger in his back
So after I Kill him, the only Trick that stands up is his vanishing Act...

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Form: LWWLWL 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote X-centrik Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 December 2016 at 9:38pm
Shit am so sorry ...was caught up with work and completely forgot about this . Anyways , here's a quick one.

Every punch a failed attempt,always see corrupt plot,a rough drop/
Think police shootings , ull never see "bars", just "shots" when "corrupt cop" /
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Hello.

People have been binned for dropping this late. But not up to me, so I'll vote anyway...

Spoom: wordy but nice bar. Good aggression and nameplay and nice rhyming.
+1 for inclusion of the word cunt. Always.

Inkytrick: basic structure ok, but content seemed all over the place.
Feel you tried to put too much in and didn't quite carry it off.
Could use more of a focused concept.

If needed ... MFVGT Spooooooom.
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