Spit for Rank: 123399 is back?

Gimme The Loot (MID remix):
Criminology, psychology/
They taken every class and couldn't follow me/
Come and see, a side of me/
Not meant to be seen by human eyes/
Radio rhymes faded like Hy-flys/
Nothin but drive-bys and wide eyes/
Children's lullabys are now the sound of clips slides/
Confide your crying eyes and realize/
That you may never again see the sun rise/
Death consumes us, our loved ones lose us/
We wait patiently and wonder when death will choose us/
Beg no forgiveness, cause it�s the cream that moves us/
Just live your life and remember theres no one to trust/
No ones just, so don�t fuss, cause havin a weapons a must/
Bein alives trendy, but when you gone outta style/
All you gets a fuckin wreathe and your murderers smile/
Vile shit goin down behind you back/
Whether you got a mansion in beverly hills, or you�re a hobo on the tracks/
People always want to take whats yours/
They take your jewelry, your money, even your dirty ass drawers/
This is life, ain't no use runnin from it/
Just learn to play the game before someone puts butterflys in ya stomach/
Most rappers have rhymes strong as an iron lung child/
Thats why I get paid for this sick-shit style/
I see dollar signs like a banker when you went-in-there-with-C-notes/
Then I sit back and direct the action like I was Quentin Tarantino/

killer multis

just add some punches, ya flow is tight, keep it up

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isnt this forum for the 3 judges? 

Open Mic is for feedback - this is for 3 people to tell you what your ranked 

fuck wot he says, hes a n00b wot does he know

but that stops the person posting the verse to say anyfin, and it stops people from POSTING their verse in the first place

or didnt you think of that?

I actually thought exactly the same thing when I saw XX had sed that...silly child

or once a week ..... well thats wot illmatic rule say