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The Law 
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
 Topic: CFC Round 1: spume corrupt vs TituPosted: 06 January 2014 at 11:18am |
 Round One - 16 Emcees 6 Bars/12 lines per battler Due Jan 11, 2014 by 11:59 Est Time 3-0KO or First to 5 Crew Votes Allowed Participant Votes Allowed Verses are to be sent to me No Free-posting or talking in your battle thread (Verses and Votes ONLY!!) If there is a problem, pm myself or a mod Failure to abide by the rules will result in warning and disqualification! Good luck everyone.. - Graphics made by J-Brenn.
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 10 January 2014 at 10:41pm |
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Titu Spume is "freely falling", he couldn't figure the situation's "gravity", Cuz He tried to "wind me up" but failed like parachutes stuck in the trees, You are not on my level....my lines pierce sharper than "fangs" and "spumes" couldn't be "corrupt" if he's "Goblin" from "spider man", My blows will "shut" his mouth-like fist full of "lomotill pills", Cuz dude proved him an "asshole", HE CLAIMED HE "SPITs FILTH", Spume can with this "clash of the cash"?...a fact; It sounds joke, How can he take "double V's" (w) when a bitch left his ass broke..?!! We see him voting for "LI".... after one or another day, SPUME ADMITS HES A "FAGGOT"; HE THINKS "CREW VOTES ARE GAY!" T mudered this clown and exposed the truth ; he sucks.. And satisfies his soul by saying "its just MY STARS ARE FUCKED" Expos. 1st bar- he tried to "wind me up" just before the battle in the search of ammo but failed. Gravity/feely falling/wind me up play. Reference 2nd-Goblin used to have a bomb which releases "spumes" in spiderman 1. We all know how he died. 3rd- lomotill are pills for loose motions. His OM title-"Spit Filth" Reference 4th-double Vs (w) / V- slang for pussy/girl. He said in his OM that he worked hard to get money for a bitch but she took it away and ditched em. Name of the torney- clash of the CASH" 5-he made a thread about "crew votes are gay".He had voted for LI several times. 6- his om title- "starts are fucked"/ hes got tha bad luck. |
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 10 January 2014 at 10:42pm |
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Spume Corrupt He couldnt touch fresh shit with his hand in the fucking bog ironically this Pakistani ain't cooking up nothing HOT Punch thru that weak chest......Yes this bitch gonna slide like Gemma Collins on Splash.... I'll bruise tits; in a dive He's gone out with a crash BANG like a holy mans bombing trip couldn't get C.F.C cash in hand if he was Roman Abromovich Talentless trash is some common shit, all his battles are soft plus reading his lame OM's....It's more Hassle than Hof!........x x x Tits need'a stop bringin the same garbage, admit when its over Heres the story! "That Restless Mr T's" still bumping shit from October My lines got this slumdogs family fucked.... wailing tears for ages cos Corrupt just done denied the cunts a whole years wage$$ |
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U.N.L.M.
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Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 11 January 2014 at 1:29am |
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Titu: Good opener, but it's a bit of a reach to say he tried to "wind you up" as he posted one comment...Still, decent opener as is...2nd bar was good, but that setup was pretty poor IMO...3rd bar had the potential to be dope but the wording is all fucked...Setup was too complicated for such a weird concept ( "mouth-like fist" )...The punch I think is supposed to read "cause dude proved he's an asshole..he claimed he spits filth"...Anyway, it's a tight punch...I'd rather you have a setup that connects more closely to that than the random pill concept...4th bar, again was a good punch but the wording in the setup is messed up as well...5th bar, again was a good punch/personal but the setup was written awkwardly ("after one or another day")...Closer was decent...Overall- you had some tight personals and punches...I think your grammar really let you down this time...your verse just wasn't as clean and well-worded as I've seen in other verses from you...Still, it was a good drop...but it could've been much better I think. Spume: I gotta say right off the bat...this verse was tight...I thought the opener was a bit tame, but that second bar picked it right back up with a dope concept...The Abromovich bar was hot as hell, probably best tournament related punch anyone will come up with...OM/Hof bar was a solid punch after that...bumpin shit from october was pretty funny...That closer, though...was pretty heavy...I think you should've added an expo in case people don't get it/remember the controversy over the child actors in Slumdog Millionaire and their payments...Also, titu is from Pakistan and the movie is based in India...Still, I think you pulled it off well enough...Anyway, real good verse from you here. Overall: This was a really good battle, I think maybe the best one I've read (so far) in the tournament mainly because of the personals and real attempts at some heavier punches...I think Spume, with his wording, really took this battle...Titu brought some heavy hitters but the wording dragged a couple bars down...Anyway, good showing and good battle here. V/Spume
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Shankley
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Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 11 January 2014 at 2:03am |
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Titu: That 1st bary I didnt really like it... it didnt rhyme for me and didnt reall see anything of worth. The 2nd bar was nice but a bit of a reach. 3rd bar nice personal attempt and the om ref was good. 4th bar good punch and a nice personal. 5th bar nice punch but weird set up. 6th bar was o.k but again weird wording IMO not a bad verse bur I have seen better from you.
Spume: 1st bar was funny man shit had me chuckling. 2 nd bar was funnier and the splash ref was quality :E 3rd bar this is the bar of the battle dope concept and the best tourny bar I have read congrats 4 th bar nice Hasselhoff bar worked it well. 5th bar an his OM ref was funny as all hell well done 6th bar this is a close 2nd for best bar of the battle IMO when I saw it I had to laugh out loud literally it was awesome. Overall was a good battle 2 good writers with some nice concepts but Spume edged this with 3rd and 6th bars but his overall verse was better. MVGT Spume Corrupt |
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H4ZE
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Joined: 13 July 2013 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1859 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-6-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 11 January 2014 at 3:04pm |
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titu:
Bar 1-decent opener here. Bar 2-set up couldve been executed better but other then that its pretty good Bar 3-nice personal,couldve been worded better Bar 4-a decent punch but again it couldve been worded better Bar 5-nice punch here, set up seemed a bit awkward though Bar 6-pretty decent close but again with the weird wording Spume corrupt: Bar 1-haha nice punch here,nicely exicuted. Bar 2-lmao shit had me laughing out loud,dope punch. Bar 3-amazing bar here, dope concept. Bar 4-haha, nice bar here to. Bar 5-good shit here, pretty funny. Bar 6-lol. Nice closer. This is a really close battle from two good writers but.... Mvgt spume corrupt for better wording and better executed punches. But props to both for the dope verses
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 11 January 2014 at 5:46pm |
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3-0 KO
spume corrupt advances to the quarter finals.
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