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    Posted: 30 October 2003 at 7:58pm

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Tournament winner? Only cuz I wasnt in it, no matter whut u say...
U cant even spell 'tournament', and u prolly bought ya lyrics on E-Bay...
ILLA? Than a 2 yr old perhaps..
I'll step all over you like hop-scotch...
Ecliptiks tearin this cat into more pieces than Korean Chop-Shops...
Ya verse'll be wack, gay attempts at punches, thats whut it consists of...
Weak as fuck, and besides sayin my name, the rest of the shit sucks!
Wannabe thug in ya avy, and you certainly dont live up to your name...
Dork, I'm smashing ya ribs and ya bifocals, breaking both ya frames!...
You're a newbie, I got 10 times more wins than you on my record man...
Ya lines are wack... the world's seen better shit in David Blaines pants!...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 3:22am

yo my shit 'locked' and u aint got da key....and clip if u do open da  door to 'success'.....all u'll see me

i made 'ill' power hence da phrase 'will' power...and as far as clips reign goes....he got bout......'1' hour

 fuck these faggots.....who do mo bendin ova than a game ov 'pool'.....

and i took mayhems 'koncept'!! and 'graf-feeted' all ova sketch wid dis cat called 'rule'

yo u say i 'suck'......u cumin wid teen 'grammer'.....i loosen up every 1 ov ya screws.....like my words were a 'spanner'

'I' can be a magician to u.......i'll blast raps at ya 'temple'......explore ya mind......and draw ya.....a rap 'stensil'

yo 'clit'  keep my name outta ya 'mouth'.....damn?!? dis guys head so 'BIG'......

he lives in da 'north'.....but his postcode is 'south'

yo u just got 'scratched' cus u just a 'itch'.......and u were a baseball in my hand.........but i just tossed and 'pitched'



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 12:10pm
Dope battle.. ILLA u really impressed me man, loads of great similes, loved the pool one, and the spanner one. the personal about the names was cool aswell. Clip came really intense tho, good combination of complexity, raw personals and comedy. that david blaine line! really funny. the one about his verse being wack apart from sayin your name.. really felt that. e-bay was great too. overall i think u had a better flow and a more consistant verse cuz i loved all ya lines. i really felt some of ILLAs but sum other ones werent as good.

vote = clip

loads of props to both emcees.. dopeness
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 12:30pm

Probably the best battle i've seen on this battle so far. great lines from both. Ecliptik had all good lines, that bifocal one was nice, feelin the personals and the closer about blaine aswell. flowed well with nice use of multis. punches worded and flipped very well, and a great verse overall. Same for ILLA, he had some really nice ideas, like the pool line, opening lines was good too. ILLA had more filler than clip tho, and the flow was more choppy. so clips verse was better.

vote goes to Ecliptik

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 1:07pm

all am sayin is WOT THE FUCK WAS THAT CLIP?

either that was WAY to advanced for me... so "appired" like crap

or it WAS crap!

or have you not posted yet and you was just SAYIN that!

either way it was shit man, not wot i expect from the "Great Chaos"! i couldnt say ANY flow at all it was as if it was just a normal post, not a battle verse!

but i think ILLAs was pretty good from him,

normally i see good lines trailing off to a peice of crap

but this one was pretty good i think

my fav line from ILLA is:

Originally posted by ILLA ILLA wrote:

and i took mayhems 'koncept'!! and 'graf-feeted' all ova sketch wid dis cat called 'rule'

sorry i got nuttin to quote from Clip - very VERY disappointed!

anyway vote: Clip

haha am just playin wit cha, i aint dickrydin anyway my vote goes to ILLA

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 3:39pm
^ Eh? Do u have difficulty spotting a rhyme scheme?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 8:37pm

my vote goes to......

:ILLA

clip, you doin ya thang, but that just didnt sound right?!?*(especially when u cam wit dat newbie shit, maan take a look again),ILLAs flow wus more wut catchy and i just simply liked it,...

WUDUP PEEPS, keed dem votes comin!!!

P.S. fav line:*

and i took mayhems 'koncept'!! and 'graf-feeted' all ova sketch wid dis cat called 'rule'..

DAMMMMM, lol

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 8:41pm

 we all know you an clip are on each others dicks

and i can normally see how it'd be

but i dont get clips AT ALL!

thats sumfin i'd expect from a newbie

am sorry... am just honest, i say wots on my mind, i dont pretend i love stuff i think sucks (hense the reason i got called gay in high school for not finding britney spears or buffy the vampire slayer fit... they aint my type!)

maybe people do genuinly like Clips but i didnt..... thats the whole point in voting.... people like different things so will vote for differnet verses

unless sumone was SOOOO wack was up agaist clip (on a good day)

like if i battled clip i'd get no votes as am sure id be totally shit
(no that isnt a call out)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 8:54pm
We aint on each others dicks. Theres a difference between being crew and good friends than kids riding each other. If you dont get the verse, and cant understand the wordplay or rhyme scheme, you shouldnt be voting. simple. you cant just vote for the more simplistic shit cuz you understand it. the point in voting is to analyze who had better multis/wordplay/vocab/punches and vote on that. sure everyone has a personal preference of what is better, but u gotta take everything in consideration. i aint tryin to bitch, the vote counts, i'm just saying, if u dont get something, stay out of the thread. i'm happy to explain to u whut multis, wordplay, metas, alliteration etc are, and explain the different kinds of rhymes schemes are, but i'm sure you dont want to "lower" yourself to takin lessons from me, expessially since i am "disloyal" (lmao)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 8:56pm
Sorry 2-2 didnt see Blazes vote. (Seriously this site has some very mentally challenged voters. Ah well) Up for more votes

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 8:57pm
Hold up.. shes in their crew. And crew votes certainly dont count. Too suspect since its a crew battle....
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 9:25pm
Considering the apparent controversy round this battle I wont vote.
Since I was in Clips crew on LA...
*Coughs* Eclip clearly won *Cough*
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 9:35pm

first off

clip i would take lessons off ya..... but to be honest am that shit i doubt it'd make any difference, and am sorry but from where i am it looked like it was just a normal post... not a battle verse

and yeah yours does count Adiktid cose ya aint in his crew on this site (yet)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 November 2003 at 9:51pm

A normal post? Did you not see the bits where the words rhymed?

 

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Tournament winner? Only cuz I wasnt in it, no matter whut u say...
U cant even spell 'tournament', and u prolly bought ya lyrics on E-Bay...
-Nice personal about the Tournament thing.. and the E-bay jab was nice. +2

ILLA? Than a 2 yr old perhaps.. I'll step all over you like hop-scotch...
Ecliptiks tearin this cat into more pieces than Korean Chop-Shops...
-Again a nice personal and some good similes. +2
Ya verse'll be wack, gay attempts at punches, thats whut it consists of...
Weak as fuck, and besides sayin my name, the rest of the shit sucks!
-Lovin the witty arrogance there. Good multi too. +1
Wannabe thug in ya avy, and you certainly dont live up to your name...
Dork, I'm smashing ya ribs and ya bifocals, breaking both ya frames!...
-Best bar so far. Likin the personal and the wordplay. +3
You're a newbie, I got 10 times more wins than you on my record man...
Ya lines are wack... the world's seen better shit in David Blaines pants!...
-Humorous closer. Feelin that. +2

Score: 10

yo my shit 'locked' and u aint got da key....and clip if u do open da  door to 'success'.....all u'll see me
i made 'ill' power hence da phrase 'will' power...and as far as clips reign goes....he got bout......'1' hour
-First line was aight, quite a good concept. 2nd wasn�t as good tho. +1
fuck these faggots.....who do mo bendin ova than a game ov 'pool'.....
and i took mayhems 'koncept'!! and 'graf-feeted' all ova sketch wid dis cat called 'rule'
-Dope bar. Like the pool meta and the use of names in the 2nd line. +3
yo u say i 'suck'......u cumin wid teen 'grammer'.....i loosen up every 1 ov ya screws.....like my words were a 'spanner'
'I' can be a magician to u.......i'll blast raps at ya 'temple'......explore ya mind......and draw ya.....a rap 'stensil'
-Nice wordplay in 1st line. In the 2nd you didn�t connect the 3 concepts so it didn�t hit. +1
yo 'clit'  keep my name outta ya 'mouth'.....damn?!? dis guys head so 'BIG'......
he lives in da 'north'.....but his postcode is 'south'
-(I know this isn�t the end of the bar but if I divide it properly u get less points as theres less bits of me breaking it down) This is just pure filler, not very impressive. +0
yo u just got 'scratched' cus u just a 'itch'.......and u were a baseball in my hand.........but i just tossed and 'pitched'
-Decent similes, if somewhat basic. +2

Score: 7

Overall:
Clip had the more consistant, complex and hard hitting verse, therefore he gets my vote.

Vote - Ecliptik

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 November 2003 at 11:20am

*fones clip-ryderz anonomous* ADIKTID picks up da fone..........and clip u aint shit if we ever have another battle i gon tear u into pieces.....



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 November 2003 at 11:55am
If this battle was posted up on any decent site, I would have KO'd you long ago. So stfu and be glad you at least got one vote kid

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 November 2003 at 12:47pm

emceeforums.com/Eclip v/s ILLA
There we go. A site where no one knows me or you. And the voting commences...


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