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NewBlood 
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Joined: 25 January 2005 Status: Offline Points: 271 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-7 Form: WLNNNN |
 Topic: Flash vs DressToKillPosted: 30 July 2006 at 10:08pm |
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.:Rules:. .:Text:. 5 Bars Min/10 Bars Max No Flips Versus Due One Week Of Check .:Audio:. 3 Minutes Max Tracks Due Two Weeks Of Check .:Final Notes:.
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 30 July 2006 at 10:52pm |
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Check yo
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The original comeback kid
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 01 August 2006 at 3:09pm |
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I guess il drop
Fuck you kid Its easy when I 'write-slash-and-you-die'
Il let ya name speak for itself ya 'life-FLASH-infront-of-your-eyes'
no stopping me deafting myself 'just-doesnt-happen'
Im making him 'sweat bullets' cuz I 'bust-when-im-rapping'
il strip ya 'man hood' so I 'throw-up-balls'
this kid gets no 'help from others' like sex with 'blow-up-dolls'
and im pro thats why my crew 'picked-me-I-reckon'
Il pop then drop ya ass be gone in 'sixty-seconds'(Flash)
and you fake so you dont 'speak' you 'act-out'
get knocked the fuck down ya mind looking like a 'black-out'
no disrespect in this verse its all 'buisness-man'
this kid 'sticks out in rap' like Micheal jackson in 'disney-land'!!
the only difference with him and you is the media 'isnt-a-fan'
your fake like implants im crazy you cannot 'stop-me'
Il take more 'shots' in his direction that california 'paparazii' |
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The original comeback kid
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 04 August 2006 at 3:01pm |
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Jus saw this so this ma check. Ill drop as soon as i can....
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 06 August 2006 at 8:11pm |
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Lets make this interestin n put records on tha line also. WHut u think D? If u win, i get a loss, u get win n vice versa?
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 07 August 2006 at 8:00pm |
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Heres my spit....done deal Info: he 14 "I Smell Pussy, Is That You Josh?" DyNuhSty Yall -1 |
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2smooth
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Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 07 August 2006 at 8:56pm |
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DTK - closer was ok... could've been worded better and had a better effect, but it was ok... seemed forced tho... 2nd bar, wasn't feelin' it... play was there but even that wasnt shit... 3rd bar was an ok concept, but was forced to fucking hell, and just didnt work... 4th bar... wack... you're not pro... sixty seconds is fast, has nothing to do with a flash... idk... just didnt like it... 5th bar was ok, direct and agressive... hit, but not too hard... 6th bar, idk, i can see what you mean but what you said could be interpreted as saying hes GOOD cuz he sticks out, and looses the effect you were looking for... didnt like it, but the play was ok here... yet the 3rd line of that bar was wack and un-needed... closer was weak... flow was better but thats it... overall, didnt feel ya verse much at all... flash - opener was ok... play was forced, coulda dropped the G unit part... was ok tho... 2nd bar...gun plays are kinda weak, and this 1 wasnt clever enough to impress... wasnt feelin' it... 3rd bar was NICE... flow was on point and the play was dope... good shit... 4th bar was ok... forced it for sure... basic play... decent at best... 5th bar again was ok at best... multis led up to a multi-less punch, which hit soft if at all... 6th bar was better... for having the best punch and most personals (and/ or better use of them), i
VOTE: FLASH -2s |
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 11 August 2006 at 7:31pm |
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thx 4 votin and tha feed yo. uppin 1-0
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 13 August 2006 at 2:26pm |
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can we get some votes yall....uppin
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 16 August 2006 at 1:28pm |
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UPPIN yall...
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Fatal
Superior Member
...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 04 September 2006 at 5:11pm |
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fuck man....still uppin
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I-kontinue
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The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 29 September 2006 at 8:49am |
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Thanks for the vote, Smooth... This is the last battle closed... Dynasty takes the crew battle, 5-1.
Edited by I-kontinue - 24 October 2006 at 8:45am |
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