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    Posted: 19 December 2006 at 3:18pm

So who drops first? this is where i give a chance to every1! just in the "1ST"
round, what will go down is whoever is ranked HIGHEST in the match up will drop first then the next rank etc... etc

 
its 10lines each no flipping thou! biting recycling etc
 
 
Everyman In this has to have dropped by WEDS DEC 20TH

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2006 at 3:07pm

I am ranked so high that I might as well spit first twice...

Yo...

�Tec or a different Koncept...?  Either way you're still a bitch,
I'll pick up the bodies of all your alter-egos and fill a ditch,
I KO'ed Junior easily...  Nepenthez ain't worth the effort,
We call this Siamese Raps cos you two can't key your verses separate,
In this tag-battle we have these fags rattled like baby-toys,
They're not a pair of Siamese... just a couple of Ladyboys,
Nepenthez takes Junior's place in a maligned charade,
Cos this herb could never grow or elevate behind the Shade,
We patiently lie and wait for prey...  We operate as hunters,
Se�or sits back and chills to let Demonic moderate your punches...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2006 at 4:41pm
Alter-Ego's?.. Hypocrite..
 
i..Senor or Apollo..! Either way, this wack bitch has done had it..
Cus' he couldnt 'force'a win from those lines' as'a "match fixing drug addict"
Kid, that verse was shakey.. Like its nervous an' boneless
Ya couldn't write'a "dope personal" if you "joined'a datin' service for stoners"
I'll shoot 'Apollo into space', leave him right up with Mars
Cus' like 'fat kid's an' small doors' your always "wide of the mark"
Don't start with that bullshit... I'll leave this sparrow silenced
Same old disses, is ya 'head in vice'? cus' Senor's "narrow minded"
Im blinded by Dem's wackness, you have no clever text son
An' fuck goin' "back to basics"... Cus' you never left them....
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2006 at 4:50pm
Originally posted by Demonic Demonic wrote:

Go check his prfile.... he was on yesterday ... the battles were already set up...explain why he couldnt drop ontime...


Excuse you Mr. know it all, but let me tell you the facts...

I saw this thread on Wednesday. Yesterday. yes, i was on, but do you know what the time was?????? between 1 and 3 AM .... so therefore, i only had one day to write, as the topics were only up on tuesday, and i didnt know the due date.

so i wrote my verse at work on wednesday, expecting to post it at my girls on Wednesday night, but her net was down. nothing i could do... anyway, here it is....

(p.s ... technically you no-showed too, you shoulda posted ya verse wether i posted mine or not after the deadline.)

now stop whinin you little bitch, here it is....

leave Dem�s pants wit a blotch, my stanza rocks you,
Senor couldn�t deliver the goods wearin a santa costume

My style�s in vein you fag, SP has piles an� anal crabs
An� ill burn demonic easily, like satanic pyromaniacs

Senor trembles with fear, kid likes to pretend hes me
A playa? Nah im waving ya game away, like the Nintendo Wii

Im exemplary, dem struggles to write a verse that affects an� knocks
SP an Dem not drawn an easy route here, but Nep an J just connect the dots

My text! It rocks! Siamese raps but we still rip it seperatly
An� dem always falls short when he drops, like midget wresteling






I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 December 2006 at 5:26pm
Quote So who drops first? this is where i give a chance to every1! just in the "1ST"
round, what will go down is whoever is ranked HIGHEST in the match up will drop first then the next rank etc... etc


that might answer your question.

and apparently illa has demonics

why dont you just drop - and stop moanin though (that goes to EVERYONE!)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2006 at 12:19am
I HAVE DROPPED.!!!!!! We are just waitin on Dems verse, god damn.....






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2006 at 5:47am

Demonics...

Wanted him to post it cus its all fucked up an i dont get it lol.. but yeah here it is.

So these nerds endeavoured and now they're aiming for a title,
But XFaders are immortal...  Call us demons homicidal,

We feast on the Web like a spider when it finds a flea trapped,
And expose holes in opponents' verses like it's been capped,
Siamese Raps...?  ...  Ladyboys,

Demonic and Perfecto conjoin to cause chaos,

You're Tec because you bitch then leave...  Admit you do it proudly,
You even sent LiQuid into my crew for personals about me,

You even sent LiQuid into my crew for personals about us,
...doubters,

Next time you battle someone... get your facts straight,

If you don't use personals then why'd you send LiQuiD to spy on us...?

 











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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2006 at 7:46am
Perfecto,

Flawless flow as always, first line really nice, second one even better, smooth flowing and a hard hit, ladyboys punch hilarious, next one keeping it up nicely too, and the closer was a pretty smooth transition with a nice set-up too. Multies on point throughout, nice hits, internal rhymes added depth to it too. Probably one of the best 10-liners I've ever seen. 9.5/10

Junior Shade,

Nice opener, good setup, was feeling the play a bit but could have been better, next line picked it up a bit, the play was nice, don't think ive seen it anywhere before so nice one, next one wasn't too hot tbh but the setup was smooth, next one good punch (sparrow?:S, lol) good play too, closer was probably your best bar, nice funny hit. Nice verse, but not the best I've seen from you tbh. 8/10

Nepenthez,

Not a bad opener, alright setup but the two didn't seem to be linked but w/e, was a nice bar, ncie internals in the next one but the satan stuffs been done before so wasnt feeling that line too much, next one was a really funny play,  loved it, great bar, bit of a streched one for your 4th bar, but the punch was okay I suppose, nice setup in ya closer but wasnt feeling the play to be honest. Multies on point here too, flowign stretched at times, and some really nice lines such as the Wii one slightly offset by some not-too-good ones. 7.5/10

Demonic,

Err...I see what ILLA means abotu not quite getting it, but I'll vote on it nonetheless...how I saw it was the nerd bar as an opener, but it wan't to good, was no real punch in it, feasting one was ooookay I suppose, Tec line picked yuor verse up a bit and the liquid punch was really nice, and yuor closer (I think...) was your nicest bar I thought, as it flips JS's non-usage of personals nicely. Overall, not really that nice a verse TBH, poor flow and nto really any multies, but a couple of alright hits in there. 5/10

SP/D- 14.5
JS/N- 15.5

Ended up pretty close, probably due to a really nice Perfecto verse, and he could have taken it on his own, but it seems that two good verses overcame one outstanding one and a sub-par one.

v. Junior Shade/NepentheZ
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2006 at 9:57am
Demonic, keep my name out of your shit. I didn't come to XFade to spy on shit, considering it's a OPEN forum so that anyone can fuckin see it... Retard.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2006 at 10:14am
Nep/Junior - You both came dope..Junior killed the first verse with a killer play in each line and Nep also came strait with plays n punches..I found that both of you did good but not letting your partner down with a shitty verse Good job..
 
Senior/Demonic-Senior of course killed his verse was dope as hell..but I found demonic just let that whole verse go to waste by not matching it with one of his own...The web play was nice but thats about it,,bringing Liquid into this battle was kinda useless to you because the personal isnt true..so anyways killer verse from senior decent from demonic..
 
Junior/Nep Gmv for 2 killer verses instead of just one..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 December 2006 at 5:12am
Thats not my verse... oh lordy


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 December 2006 at 5:16am

Nep an J's Tec-nique is mad weak Sen & D aint phased,
We in'a craze smackin these fags leaveing out for Dayz,
Neps lost it, admit it ya rhymes are weak an ya humours tackie,
Coz even ya own tag partner mistook ya bull shit for Mackie!*
An Jr ya said it dude ... Open your eyes next time Fag,
As you do it alot... You may aswel assume you otta the tag,**
Nep live to ya sig boy coz your never gettin over Rook,
Ya both weak, getting Liquid to look for personals ya'll shook,***
Sen & D bringing X-Fade to life and taking this title,
J & Nep are done ... Are rhymes are homicidAL

*Nep was pissing about...Jr assumed it was mackie...
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***As soon as Liquid got in with X-Fade and talked a lil ... He left... for Jr



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 December 2006 at 5:17am
weather i can post that now...

as i sent illa the wrong notepadThumbs Down

Senor can prove that ... That part was just diff concepts and personals... my bad... that was done on time though^


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 December 2006 at 11:07am
Originally posted by Demonic Demonic wrote:

Nep an J's Tec-nique is mad weak Sen & D aint phased,
We in'a craze smackin these fags leaveing out for Dayz,
Neps lost it, admit it ya rhymes are weak an ya humours tackie,
Coz even ya own tag partner mistook ya bull shit for Mackie!*
An Jr ya said it dude ... Open your eyes next time Fag,
As you do it alot... You may aswel assume you otta the tag,**
Nep live to ya sig boy coz your never gettin over Rook,
Ya both weak, getting Liquid to look for personals ya'll shook,***
Sen & D bringing X-Fade to life and taking this title,
J & Nep are done ... Are rhymes are homicidAL

*Nep was pissing about...Jr assumed it was mackie...
**^^
***As soon as Liquid got in with X-Fade and talked a lil ... He left... for Jr

 
 
Ok, sence  you said my name AGAIN I have to say somthing. I respect Senor, but.. I gotta shut you up..
 
1. First things first.. I did not come to fucking spy.
2. Who hasn't joined then left ya wack ass crew?
3. The most important.. Fuck You! Sheep Lover!!
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 December 2006 at 11:23am
I saw the verses in this order...

Senor
Nep
Jr
Dem

That makes it hard for me, but here goes...
Senor, my favorite verse with a mixture of lyrical elements such as wordplay and personals. Was feelin the way you worded.. A humorous style which adds to the effectiveness of you punches...
9/10

Nep, a very consistent drop here... Liked the was you worded your shit also. Punches landed well, but you lacked personals... Weakened ya verse a bit.. Wordplay was overall good, but some did hit harder than others.
8/10

JS, seen better from you, but this was still a nice drop for the average person... The wordplay you use is cool, but only to an extent. I feel it gets very repetitive in some of your drops... Need to mix it up a bit more IMO and be less formulaic with it.. The dope personal/stoner line stood out to me though.. Nice
7.5/10

Dem, Nice attempt among high caliber battlers, but there was a level shift from their verses to yours.. The ideas were okay, but the wording needed work in my opinion.. Nice to see you included personals... the ones you used had potential, but werent preseted as effectively as they could have...
6/10

SP/Dem= 15
JS/Nep= 15.5

Decent battle here overall, and pretty damn close when the points added up for me, which is what I expected. My overall vote goes to JS and Nep due to the fact this is a tag team tourney and I feel they came stronger as a team.

v/ JS/Nep
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 December 2006 at 11:26am
LMFAO at Demonic "J's Tec-niq" lmao.. You really need to hook up with'a life or just accept you & Senor are wrong lmao.. I mean even Scottys stopped that..
 
Weak ass...
 
 
Lock this up, 3-0 KO...
 
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 December 2006 at 12:53pm
That cant be a ko ... only posted my damm verse after 2 votesThumbs Down


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 December 2006 at 12:56pm
Originally posted by sprta sp�rta wrote:

Perfecto,

Flawless flow as always, first line really nice, second one even better, smooth flowing and a hard hit, ladyboys punch hilarious, next one keeping it up nicely too, and the closer was a pretty smooth transition with a nice set-up too. Multies on point throughout, nice hits, internal rhymes added depth to it too. Probably one of the best 10-liners I've ever seen. 9.5/10

Junior Shade,

Nice opener, good setup, was feeling the play a bit but could have been better, next line picked it up a bit, the play was nice, don't think ive seen it anywhere before so nice one, next one wasn't too hot tbh but the setup was smooth, next one good punch (sparrow?:S, lol) good play too, closer was probably your best bar, nice funny hit. Nice verse, but not the best I've seen from you tbh. 8/10

Nepenthez,

Not a bad opener, alright setup but the two didn't seem to be linked but w/e, was a nice bar, ncie internals in the next one but the satan stuffs been done before so wasnt feeling that line too much, next one was a really funny play,  loved it, great bar, bit of a streched one for your 4th bar, but the punch was okay I suppose, nice setup in ya closer but wasnt feeling the play to be honest. Multies on point here too, flowign stretched at times, and some really nice lines such as the Wii one slightly offset by some not-too-good ones. 7.5/10

Demonic,

Err...I see what ILLA means abotu not quite getting it, but I'll vote on it nonetheless...how I saw it was the nerd bar as an opener, but it wan't to good, was no real punch in it, feasting one was ooookay I suppose, Tec line picked yuor verse up a bit and the liquid punch was really nice, and yuor closer (I think...) was your nicest bar I thought, as it flips JS's non-usage of personals nicely. Overall, not really that nice a verse TBH, poor flow and nto really any multies, but a couple of alright hits in there. 5/10

SP/D- 14.5
JS/N- 15.5

Ended up pretty close, probably due to a really nice Perfecto verse, and he could have taken it on his own, but it seems that two good verses overcame one outstanding one and a sub-par one.

v. Junior Shade/NepentheZ
 
Originally posted by DressToKill DressToKill wrote:

Nep/Junior - You both came dope..Junior killed the first verse with a killer play in each line and Nep also came strait with plays n punches..I found that both of you did good but not letting your partner down with a shitty verse Good job..
 
Senior/Demonic-Senior of course killed his verse was dope as hell..but I found demonic just let that whole verse go to waste by not matching it with one of his own...The web play was nice but thats about it,,bringing Liquid into this battle was kinda useless to you because the personal isnt true..so anyways killer verse from senior decent from demonic..
 
Junior/Nep Gmv for 2 killer verses instead of just one..
 
Originally posted by I-kontinue I-kontinue wrote:

I saw the verses in this order...

Senor
Nep
Jr
Dem

That makes it hard for me, but here goes...
Senor, my favorite verse with a mixture of lyrical elements such as wordplay and personals. Was feelin the way you worded.. A humorous style which adds to the effectiveness of you punches...
9/10

Nep, a very consistent drop here... Liked the was you worded your shit also. Punches landed well, but you lacked personals... Weakened ya verse a bit.. Wordplay was overall good, but some did hit harder than others.
8/10

JS, seen better from you, but this was still a nice drop for the average person... The wordplay you use is cool, but only to an extent. I feel it gets very repetitive in some of your drops... Need to mix it up a bit more IMO and be less formulaic with it.. The dope personal/stoner line stood out to me though.. Nice
7.5/10

Dem, Nice attempt among high caliber battlers, but there was a level shift from their verses to yours.. The ideas were okay, but the wording needed work in my opinion.. Nice to see you included personals... the ones you used had potential, but werent preseted as effectively as they could have...
6/10

SP/Dem= 15
JS/Nep= 15.5

Decent battle here overall, and pretty damn close when the points added up for me, which is what I expected. My overall vote goes to JS and Nep due to the fact this is a tag team tourney and I feel they came stronger as a team.

v/ JS/Nep
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 December 2006 at 1:07pm
But they voted on concepts... wasnt even my verse dumb ass...

I had it done ontime...

Scotty seen some... an Senor seen most...

i just sent illa the wrong notepad... and as i wernt on to correct it...

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