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AshleyKaos
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Topic: Fuck My Blood LinePosted: 22 March 2026 at 12:14am |
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........Honestly im Fuckin Pissed, Everything i missed ................ All the effort you didn't give ? What this really is ? You just a little kid, You just play pretend Acting like everything's alright You sick in the head, i think you lost your fucking mind ! Cant tell me why you run and hide, Then cry sayin you really tried ! Dont sit there and fucking lie Sayin you loved me, Sayin you loved your wife You Know wrong from right, So How do you sleep at night ? Chorus Tell me who do you think you really are ? Never broke me, Yea you made a piece of art ! I aint got no broken fucking heart, You played victim from the start Made me a monster so now Imma play the part !!! That's all cap, ill never really get it Despite all that, i try to show forgiveness Fuck that, cuz apologies im never gonna get em' So fuck you and all the fucking tension ! Holdin back the pain i never mention You an actor, but you ain't Mel Gibson ! 2 years old when i put you on the shit list ... Every image that i have to live with... You make me sick, you make me wanna vomit Cause when you said you were being honest Every word was just another empty promise I hope you got what you really wanted Told me you don't know what caused this? All this hate that i be Harborin ? Bitch please, you know where it started You know exactly where i got it Regardless of whatever you want to call it ! Chorus Tell me who do you think you really are ? Never broke me, Yea you made a piece of art ! I ain't got no broken fucking heart, You played victim from the start Made me a monster so now Imma play the part !!! YOU NEVER WERE A FATHER Told me that i was the problem, When it's your soul that's fuckin Rotton Your Scum that dwell at the bottom........ ( Your a Fuckin Piece of Shit ) You regret your life but act like it was mine Actin like your mistakes were what i left behind Your either stupid or just fucking blind I guess for you it's out of sight, out of mind Fuck you for every time i cried Every night i asked god why..... I had to let it go, I don't know how i did it I guess its cuz i Prayed to god, I begged him to lift it I guess he really listened Nowadays don't give a fuck bout your friendship Don't give a fuck about how this ended Every time you talk its some bitch shit Wont even hear your name mentioned in a sentence This all shit that you have to live with cuz my turn is fuckin finished Now tell me whos the one that wins This ? |
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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JBrenn
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Posted: 22 March 2026 at 5:42pm |
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"Cause when you said you were being honest Every word was just another empty promise" Whoa...... AK first off welcome back! secondly this is what ive missed a real emotional piece a drop that sounded like it was theroputic to write. Also I could feel the beat you wrote this to the whole way through. I feel like the last verse was just raw thought and emotion less planned out less structured more just raw "How do i feel right now" type shit. It gives a nice close to the drop. Over all I really liked this I can see what your message is and feel your emotions throughout the whole thing. Good work AK! |
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Corleone
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Posted: 23 March 2026 at 11:25am |
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This was tight.. props..
- Cor
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