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DressToKill 
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
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 Topic: .....Posted: 19 February 2007 at 5:55pm |
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Get A Clue,Point Dressed Will Leave Ya Bruised
Blank Couldnt Get 'Checked Out' If He Was A Hotel Room!
You Wack Kid,Cant Even Claim Ya Nice!
Wrote About 150 Words On The Last Year,But Did Nothin Wit His Life*
Got No Chance At Rap,Venemous Should Loose Yah
He Couldnt 'Get Into The Game' If It Was A 1st Person Shooter!
Calling Yaself Ill?HAH Me And You Cant Even Compare Dude
I Leave Point More 'Cut off' Then Britney Spears Hair Dues!**
You Aint Even Comparable Ya Rhymes Even Com-Plex
You Could Fuckin Wear Womens Clothes N Not 'Cross Dress'
Expos : *Wrote a thing before he birthday going over the last year of his life...no real major events
**Britney spears cut all her mo fucking hair off...wordplay
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NepentheZ
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... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
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Posted: 19 February 2007 at 8:27pm |
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Ama still, didnt like ya punches either.
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Point Blank
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Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
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Posted: 20 February 2007 at 10:22am |
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To Be Honest This Was One Of Your Weaker Verses :( Wrong Choice Of Verse In My Opinion. Ama
An Ye...Ill Post Tonight Probably |
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DressToKill
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Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6876 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
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Posted: 20 February 2007 at 4:52pm |
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Fuck It...I Dont Care Anymore..
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The original comeback kid
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mcwoods
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Joined: 04 December 2006 Status: Offline Points: 4204 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 42-51-0 Form: LLLLWW |
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Posted: 20 February 2007 at 5:26pm |
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I-kontinue
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The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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Posted: 16 March 2007 at 1:53am |
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Not close to Pro... Your style still has a lot of developing to do... You've elevated since you reached here, but keep reading "respected" heads and writing... Seems like you stuck at this one level you're at... Wordplay should be simple, yet effective... without being played... Which is the hard thing, and you don't seem to have fully grasped that yet... Same rank: AMA
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