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CHAIN
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Topic: Deeper Than RapPosted: 15 April 2009 at 12:22pm |
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Simplicity is beauty, what’s a special effect? My catalogue of realness might be better than sex Sonically so intricate it Beretta-ed the rest In honour of my syndicate that reps to the death Not used to iTunes, just cassettes in the decks Manually inserted, just press or eject When collabos meant crack, but that recipe left The magnetic chemistry ‘tween Redman and Meth Nigga, pause for what? You are hetero, yes? This the ghetto’s finesse the execs can’t suppress Phonetically impaired but that’s the essence of ‘def’ Many levels ahead of the incredibly blessed But check out this mess…of dudes over producing When the older producers impressed us with less Yeah, y’all don’t write, never edited text Digesting my thoughts kept my excrements fresh And that’s that shit that I will never regret… Composing- these arrangements too epic to test Unorthodox approach to threatening vets? No, not to Chain, he couldn’t F with the best If he wasn’t trained to be death in the flesh Too creative for filler that’s injected to stretch Replacing you killers while protecting my neck ‘cause after success the treachery’s next Longevity’s assassin with a S on its chest Fatal to friendships; it’s inequity’s pet And that’s when u find out that checkers ain’t chess ….dumbfounded!! |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 12:29pm |
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Better than anything Ross could come up with, think that this kind of drop is the definition of "real". The iTunes line made me laugh, but not cos it was funny or anything, just cos of how you'd captured like a distant memory from most peoples lives.
Shits good. Keep up pal. |
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Calibra
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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 1:16pm |
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Wow... this was really fucking sick! This was the shit I was talking to you about ages ago, this is what I want! Vocab was crazy and loved the theme of the piece, im sure its how most of us are feeling. One point though... I got the S bro haha
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I-SEE-GRIPS
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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 3:52pm |
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Phonetically impaired but that’s the essence of ‘def’ Many levels ahead of the incredibly blessed
Loved those lines there Chain, this was a dope peice of work man, you know that! Respecta |
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Leeder
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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 9:59pm |
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yeah, dude this was off the CHAIN hhahaha. For real your vocabulary advanced and your mulitis insane. Love your style
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mcwoods
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Posted: 15 April 2009 at 11:37pm |
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average..
every word didn't rhyme, you wrote words i had seen before, my head didn't explode as i read it, i only nodded my head vertically on a tilt of 40 degrees rotation, you didn't graffati it on a wall or become president because of it.. average..
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 12:08am |
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i liked it tbh dunno y why woods werent feelin it? more or less same as ya other pieces gud rhymme skill keep up!
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
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Madeye
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 2:05am |
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...fuckin' ill flow, man.
concepts and punches were solid connections.
Plays is sweet.
I really enjoyed this read from start to finish.
Good shizz, Chain.
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Calibra
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 5:41pm |
For real? Were we reading th same thing?
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mcwoods
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Posted: 16 April 2009 at 10:17pm |
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sigh... hopefully chain is clever enough...
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CHAIN
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Posted: 22 April 2009 at 12:12pm |
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lol, it's all good , woods....i'm clever enough
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Posted: 23 April 2009 at 12:45am |
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Not used to iTunes, just cassettes in the decks Manually inserted, just press or eject That bar was foolish..old school type feel and just plain old dope..doing your thing bud..keep up
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The original comeback kid
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Posted: 23 April 2009 at 1:03am |
seriously tho... that bar was disgustingly sick lol...
this was dope, as usual wit' your open mics...
you got that unique full bar rhyme scheme thing down, an' it's even sicker when you switch it up then come back to it in the next line... keep doin' what you do, son...
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Posted: 26 April 2009 at 3:36am |
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like i said before one of my favorite people to read in open mics...the itunes and cassettes line made me want to keep on reading...i like the way you think of shit to say...the essense of 'def' line was very nice and well worded...
now the dudes over producing and the impressed us with less lines were incredible...dont know the flow you were going for but i could catch it perfectly.. lmao @ chain cant fuck with the best.... great shit man....great drop...i like the creative writing....checkers and chess killed it.... impressed as always
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