Text Battle Archive: $n00z-vs-Envy

I'm married to music, but it seems that you must've divorced rap
So I'll start by 'walkin all over you' soon as you step thru the 'doorMatt' *
No more slack, you're trash, nothin new, I've handled others
Put em in bags, so aint nothin for me to Can-a-nada **
U LITerally loss to N8ball?! I know punches! when u throw em their missin
No one listens to you, like choosin my spokens over ya writtens ***
I'm the 'symbol for hot', when using 'kelvin' I'm 'K'
Envy would P on himself jus thinkin bout "Swingin My Way" ****
I'm raw, you "Bath Salts" cause you 'aint dope yet'
So dont ever think you're 'fire' when you 'cant even smoke yet' *****

 

*-his real name's Matt

**-spelled his location Cananada/Can-a-nother

***-He lost to N8Ball( aka LIT on SpokensVsWrittens )

****-Envy nameplay , swing/fight >> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QWMIlfbXpE0

*****-He's 17, dont know bout there but in the US u have to be 18 to buy cigarettes

 

later mane!

sorry my formats a little bit different to youres, didnt even see that you replied when i started wrting haha any ways good luck man.

Nice little battle.

Two very different styles here, and for me, they both worked. One better than the other though.

Envy has a nice rhyme scheme, but with poor structure. I just aint a fan of how the bars are set up. Also, there were some lines that were just filler. It almost seemed  that he was just rhyming at times. He did throw a couple of punches though. Some were played, like the Rover line. Well actually that is the only potetial direct swing I see that was aimed at Snooz, and it really wasn't too damaging. Like i said, Envy has a good flow and rhyme scheme, but after taking a closer look, there are really no punches involoved. More self glorifying.

Snooz had good structure in his verse. The lines were of equal lenght and not at all stretched. I'm not a fan of the colors though ... but..who cares. He swung on every bar, not that all of them hit though. The opener with the Matt name to me is a played concept. Mat/Matt is an original with the rap battles against cats named Matt. He could have been more creative here. Now the second bar on the other hand was very original and creative. I personally didn't need the expo. I understood it as soon a s Iread it. I bet Envy thinks twice about clownin where he's from the next time. It blew up right in his face. No hate Envy ....jus sayin. The next 2 bars went right over my head. The closer was comical and a nice hit and personal.

 Your verse also has a good flow and rhyme scheme,

Snooz definitelt took this from my perception. He just threw some good hitd that landed.

 

Envy, you should work on attacking your opponent more. But good rhyming.

Good Battle

 

MVGT: Snooz

So I'm guessing by $n00z's expos, you  both know of each other pretty well from another site, right? The main difference here that I see is that $n00z came direct with his punches and Envy did not.  Envy, I see you got some rhyming skills but for a battle, you really gotta hit your opponent, especially if he's hitting you. $n00z, you just completely covered your bases on this cause you had good plays on his name, where he's from, who's beaten him up and even his age (that's sound fundamentals in snaps right there, fam).

Oh well then - nice muthafeckin battle lads 

$n00z - Opener was tight! LOL. Loved the wordplay there. Nice and simple but very effective.
lol @ the Cananada line - I postted that also when I seen his info. Obviously a typo on Envys behalf - but good shit for pickin on it and noticing it - and I liked the trash/put em in bags connection too.
I loved the way you used the Kp & Envy line. Its actually one of my fave "summer tracks" of all time and I love the way it cuts from a fast garage beat back to the slow hiphop beat. Mint track! Anywayz - Im not sposed to be voting on that...... lol
The closer was funny lol. Not too hard of a hit compared to the rest of the plays - but it still did the job cuz it werent like it was totally irrellevant to the rest of the verse. Good stuff.

Envy - I'm not gonna break your verse down, simply because, there were no quotable personals to pick on. Your verse was really really decent - dont get me wrong - but your style was completely different and the punches although nice - were'nt very relevant to your opponent.
Your use of multis was extremely clever, and there were plenty of em. But I feel like $n00z was a lot more clever with his verse - and he hit at you a lot with personals and well thought out word play.
Like I said - I really liked your verse - but I cant help thinking that if you would have dug up a bit of dirt on him, it woulda gone a long way to gettin you closer to that win.

For that reason and for the fact that $n00z out-classed Envy with wordplay - flawless flows and nice hard hitting personals. MVGT $n00z

Good battle lads - I enjoyed reading this a lot

Locked.