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Vib.Klean
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Topic: Zinali vs vib kleanPosted: 14 September 2013 at 2:21am |
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ight here we go 10 lines asap ready when u are cuz
30 mins starts when we both say check |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:23am |
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Vib.Klean
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:26am |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:49am |
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bitch u gettin no respect, he likes dicks to poke his neck, yall dont believe?
before he fall to his knees and swallow sum seeds, he gets caressed by cock; u know hard on his sleeve? thats a double entendre cuz u known for showin female traits when he threatens people all i "hear is air" like my ears up to a seashell; wait his bars full of more filler then decayed theeth, yal think dudes authentic? fuck half an hour, to murk u all i needed was a new york minute all he talk about is toting pistols and how he let the hammers go off somebody please tell this white boy that guns is banned in new york we dont believe u put guns to people, so stop the hard image and since vib thinks his klean i had to mop the floor wit him |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:50am |
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*hes known for his rants he wears his heart on his sleeve. hard on his sleeve caressed by cock
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Vib.Klean
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:57am |
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im high, everything i said stoned, but after ur dead ill leave ur bitch head boned
The bitch stay next to me whenever i lay down like a bed phone this is bad news, why did you do this z?usually, im not the one to sing songs at euologies, but its like im singing a lullably, cuz u give me the lulz, so bye, ima give u the 'Zzz'! denied joining his crew so he madder yall....watch as all them rappers fall your team better speed up, time for some adderall i knew a noob whore i could take advantage when i said respond in thirty minutes but didnt expect to give your mom a facial , the way this is a dirty finish leave it to me to be cocky, fuck u unless im gettin funds from you got niggas really thinkin i'm conceited the way i S.O.N.N.E.D. ya crew |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 3:00am |
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good shit mane.....bump for votes
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Vib.Klean
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 3:05am |
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knew a noob whore would want to fuck wit klean i said respond in thirty minutes
but didnt expect to give your mom a facial , the way this is a dirty finish***** |
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Orion-TheHunter
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:28am |
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both flows of ya flows was on point,thumbs up for.....kinda liked vib.klean's better.
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Zinaii
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 11:16am |
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Get the fuk outta this thread and dont come back
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Zinaii
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 11:55am |
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0-0
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Orion-TheHunter
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:13pm |
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lmao...ayd ayd take it easy or you myt want to settle it out on the battle ground.
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Zinaii
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:21pm |
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no i dont wanna "settle it on the battleground". This battle aint meant for noobs to vote on. And were not about to start a back and forth here and spam the thread. But your vote was shitty and therefore doesnt count.
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Orion-TheHunter
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:27pm |
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ayt ayt.......whatever, might be a noob, but lyrically....im an assassin.....
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Orion-TheHunter
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:31pm |
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"and since vib thinks his klean i had to mop the floor wit him"...hahahaa!! like this line of yours....
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Vib.Klean
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 1:16pm |
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Votes?
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levy420
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 1:50pm |
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House rules i cant vote so bumping for votes
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Vib.Klean
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 1:59pm |
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Vote idc who does unless its an obv troll
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levy420
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:32pm |
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Aight ill do a breakdown later gotta give it anotjer read undecided after the first read
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 4:01pm |
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iight here is the breakdown....
Zin:
bitch u gettin no respect, he likes dicks to poke his neck, yall dont believe?
before he fall to his knees and swallow sum seeds, he gets caressed by cock; u know hard on his sleeve? LOL The wording was odd, but the flow was nice. I saw where you were goin wit this - 3/5
thats a double entendre cuz u known for showin female traits when he threatens people all i "hear is air" like my ears up to a seashell; wait decent - 3/5
his bars full of more filler then decayed theeth, yal think dudes authentic? fuck half an hour, to murk u all i needed was a new york minute 2/5
all he talk about is toting pistols and how he let the hammers go off somebody please tell this white boy that guns is banned in new york No real punchline here - 1/5
we dont believe u put guns to people, so stop the hard image and since vib thinks his klean i had to mop the floor wit him nice ending - 3.5/5 overall - 12.5
Vib:
im high, everything i said stoned, but after ur dead ill leave ur bitch head boned Nah - wasnt really feelin this one - 2/5
this is bad news, why did you do this z?usually, im not the one to sing songs at euologies, but its like im singing a lullably, cuz u give me the lulz, so bye, ima give u the 'Zzz'! The wording was way off to me here, the punchline was flat - 1/5
denied joining his crew so he madder yall....watch as all them rappers fall your team better speed up, time for some adderall more of a statement here - 2/5
i knew a noob whore i could take advantage when i said respond in thirty minutes but didnt expect to give your mom a facial , the way this is a dirty finish this was decent, flowed well - 3/5
leave it to me to be cocky, fuck u unless im gettin funds from you got niggas really thinkin i'm conceited the way i S.O.N.N.E.D. ya crew ok ending - 2.5/5
overall - 10.5
This battle was close, but I just think how sloppy vib's verse was hurt him. Wording was off a few times that made the punchline weak. Zin had some decent concepts and more jabs connected.
MVGT -Zin |
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