Text Battle Archive: zinaii vs que

Nope! we goin at least 8 ....the little bar battles aint really worth it. Agree to the terms and tuesday ...naw....I be done went MIA already. Start cookin now. Lets drop between today or tomorrow.

he said i wanted attention; but im in it for the love of the sport
u here to socialize, approaching guys like wats up wit u boi?

Que you autistic loser faggot; this bitch? a used up has been
bruise him smash him, so now im bout to be "on q" like ki when dude be acting

u foolish! time to learn acceptin zin wasnt a wise move, buck fiftys, stuck in the side too
think twice before u mess wit me, its like cheating on s.a.t's fuckin wit "I" "Q'

hes pmed me like 15 times, the first msg i was annoyed then, you prolly got a boyfriend
bitching over who goes first, you might as well have said i cant touch u, guess its ur poise zin

u been here since 2010, but its sad cuz you barely battle, while u incoherently chatter
so a lucky winning streak im sposed to bring out chariots faggot? afta i "whip ya head boi" ill cherry it faggot

turning leaves red when your limbs getting severed off, culdnt stop the bleeding wit menopause
do i got a cannon? duh any last wishes? then i answer "ques bec" and call

im top dawg, every battle i progress and move forward to, abuse all the crews
ques a gangsta? thats a oxymoron cuz you a schoolboy q tryna confuse more dudes

ur names que bro, but u not spanish, unfamiliar with a peso
i had to break him down, get rid of the unecessary shit for this "k" o

lol @ ur #4 expo

This was a good battle, annd is pretty damb close as well.
good job nukkkas


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ur names que bro, but u not spanish, unfamiliar with a peso
i had to break him down, get rid of the unecessary shit for this "k" o
^ Your closing line was tight and worded in a well chosen way , was also the punch hit your opponent..measurably

im top dawg, every battle i progress and move forward to, abuse all the crews
* if a you really need the filler for a punch tthat coudnt be written without one, dont choose a line bout self hypin'

I think you had good structure and rhyming some metophors in there and your punches were good, your flow i was done wwell in couplet bars keyish but more entricate than key style.

QUE-
You gettin Locker bombed! Virgin! Even ya Steady Bitch wants ta Block Her Thong!
You dont excite her like a Jock wit Charm! You hype her!!.. Like Whistles from a Soccer Mom!
ok mmsbye its just my personal opinio but this line was just stupid as fuck lol i dont know why but it killed the fllow alot more than i would have though it would have... trippy lol

i think you do the lengthy multi- metaphor type style well. shit was hella sick as fuck and rhymming i think as far as delivery and flow yours was more complex and both different well done styles but yours i think was better, but you werent very aggresive. This kind of seemed more freestle type verse then battle erse but here mabye thats just mme.


WITHH THAT **MVGT-ZINAII

Hoho fxck naah its quite obvious... Que was sick, each line had a punch. The rhymin was awesome so was the flow.. Zinaii hardluck.
Que killed it*

ok if your not voting dont just post random shit in here. and ash top dawg is the rap group schoolboy q is in and floss thank u for droppn a real vote brotha its up to que to counts ash's vote so its 1-0 or 1-1 i dnt even fuckn know anymore

Zin: i liked the aggression i liked your opener thought that was a good way to start and it set the tone for the whole verse which i thought you executed nicely with some creative concepts and well executed punches. You did good on this verse.

he said i wanted attention; but im in it for the love of the sport
u here to socialize, approaching guys like wats up wit u boi?

he said i wanted attention; but im in it for the love of the sport
u here to socialize, approaching guys like wats up wit u boi?
ok opener didn't seem too funny

zin:

he said i wanted attention; but im in it for the love of the sport
u here to socialize, approaching guys like wats up wit u boi?

I kinda like this bar because although it's not a knock out hit, it's still quite comical. For me seeing Que as I do, this hits the nail on the head here.

Que you autistic loser faggot; this bitch? a used up has been
bruise him smash him, so now im bout to be "on q" like ki when dude be acting

I'm not really feeling this bar for means of execution. I think the concept was stretched.

u foolish! time to learn acceptin zin wasnt a wise move, buck fiftys, stuck in the side too
think twice before u mess wit me, its like cheating on s.a.t's fuckin wit "I" "Q'

Yea, i think this was really forced. I think I would have thrown this one out. I see the internal and shit, but still the concept itself lacks.

hes pmed me like 15 times, the first msg i was annoyed then, you prolly got a boyfriend
bitching over who goes first, you might as well have said i cant touch u, guess its ur poise zin

This was a good idea but the wording was awkward.

u been here since 2010, but its sad cuz you barely battle, while u incoherently chatter
so a lucky winning streak im sposed to bring out chariots faggot? afta i "whip ya head boi" ill cherry it faggot

This seems more like filler. And the bar seems really stretched.

turning leaves red when your limbs getting severed off, culdnt stop the bleeding wit menopause
do i got a cannon? duh any last wishes? then i answer "ques bec" and call

I really like the concpet here, but the execution was poor. This could have been dope imo.

im top dawg, every battle i progress and move forward to, abuse all the crews
ques a gangsta? thats a oxymoron cuz you a schoolboy q tryna confuse more dudes

eh, I aint feelin this.

ur names que bro, but u not spanish, unfamiliar with a peso
i had to break him down, get rid of the unecessary shit for this "k" o

this missed also



Que


Que'll make you a serial Hostage! Screamin while ya Bones Breaken!
Syn! You gonna have ta recruit Liam Neeson! Cuz You bout to watch this Hoe get Taken!

first off: a serial hostage? Is that someone who is taken for hostage a lot?
I don't think this bar hit. You tried to make it relevant by callin him hostage. Now I understand why you forced that awkward moment in the set up.

No Rumor! You a forum slut!  Givin up the "W"omb like a Fly Hoe!
Keek Fucked! So did Point Blank,Phillip and The other Guys that I know!!

This missed. So he ya named some people who beat him. Kinda sounds like you are bregging about something somebody else did. set up wasn't awful.

Aint shit new! You failed Syn crew! I rip thru chicks like Horror flicks-n-Ginsu's! 
You even tried  Gore Porn and  Failed to put the Squeeze on the TIT too!!/TITU

again, bragging about somebody elses doings. not feeling this strategy.

You Pathetic Sap! Imma hang you by your halter top wit spaghetti straps!
I ain't big on Strippers-n-Gun Play .....but don't just Talk outcho Ass....Let it Clap!

very gay.

You gettin Locker bombed! Virgin! Even ya Steady Bitch wants ta Block Her Thong!
You dont excite her like a Jock wit Charm! You hype her!!.. Like Whistles from a Soccer Mom!!

this is some really indirect shit. totally irrelevant. You know better than to bring fake ass girlfriend and mom bars into a battle.

You Sweet Fuck! SILENCE!! You got Starburst Eyes and a Heart of Caramel!
after two L Rounds wit Art! Get the Picture!!  you gettin Kicked of the Carousel!!

and again you decide to brag about somebody elses doings.

My formula's different! I rape shit! I exploit your style like i'm Perverted Sin!
You "Insert Word Play" ...."Insert Punch"...Only to Drop and Get Inserted IN !!

this was kinda corny.

Off my Nutsack! ..Got me Draggin my Balls! ....Z!!...let go of my Pubics!
Piccalo caliber emcee ta fued wit as I Gohan you this L and leave ya roof split!

very corny.

I'm in my Element! Commanding Syn! ...Iron/I run Metal!! Get extinct!
The only time you'll get Galvanized is if Z...fucks wit INC!!

naah


Overall: okay first; very weird battle. It states it's a 5 bar battle, so zin drops 8, and to top it off, Que drops 9? very confused. But this was not too exciting for me.
For the content: I really like zins first bar and think he pinpointed his opponent very well with that one. I think that zin had some really good concepts that fell short. But he did bring the concepts and that shows his creativity. I just think he should work on executing them better. Que didn't really come with too many clever concepts though imo. He used at least 3 bars on bragging about other peoples accomplishments and then to top it off, he throws his crew in the mix for the closer. He also had a few corny concepts in there such as the Dragon Balls. I think that zin had a better verse here overall.

V: Zin