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    Posted: 22 October 2004 at 9:00am
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    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 10:39pm

    What are you,a large dog figurine of shit,because thats what your name has simply stated//

    I'll cut out ur "shit" from ya stomach,so you don't "waste" "time",being "constapated"//*

    Ima leave this "bag of wrinkles",under the "sun","stiff" transiently like he's "se-DATE-ted"//**

    Bigg "swank" dogg,i'd stop ya "barking" if i where you,because ur heads a lil "dilated"//***

    Remit and "desert" ya crew,you call yaself a "renegade" to tha game,but ur "apostatical" and played//****

    I would consider, swtitching ur sig,because ur about as foney as the dollar note you made//

    Lets "Berry" tha hatchet,in "six days",because ur simply to "nice" like a "fruit sundae"//*****

    My name says im a generated symphony of bones,amonsgt a machine of this modern day//

    Im jus going to laugh at the pathetic comment you make,because they are simply all gay//

    a "Elevated" member,having his "dignity" and "excellence",by a newbie taken away//******

    everybody take a look at the bad guy,and then say hello to my lil friend//

    It's a shame ya avatar is make believe,cuz thsi is real and ur losing again//

    i'll commit a crime by drawing up a chalk outline of an oversized mut//

    then impale the the bollocks of ya face,so u can take ru face from outta ya butt//

    is this an involuntary train of seemingly real fancies passing through ya mind in ya sleep//

    nah! this is the undyingness in infurtlity of the havoc i transmit by a holografic beat//

    *shit is poo and it stinks-stank,waste is also shit,but u can waste time and he seems he waiting for me to drop, and he is hesitating to drop shit-constapated

    **he is old well older than me so he will hav wrinkles,old people are usually stiff and can hardly move liek they are sedated,i used the sun because it burns u,when things get burnt they turn black or darker neway and i put DATES dates are a wrinkles stiff typr of fruit

    ***swank means bigg headed and dilated is when sumthing gets bigger if u got a bigg head u will do alot of talking liek a bigg headed dog barking

    ****desert and apostical are to with leaving,and a he is in tha crew renegades so after this ima make him leave tha site and the renegades lolol not

    *****berry is a fruit every1 knows that,i dropped this on monday so in six days it will be sunday, but he is too soft to even drop so he is liek a fruit sundae

    ******elevated dignity and excellence are to do with being superior he is a superior member

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 October 2004 at 1:53pm

    Good Luck.
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    Man, this bitch must be jokin'when he came at Stank with that wack shit
    That's the worst play on my name since frank started jumpin' on my dick
    I punch wack cats hard, straight makin' their rubber necks fold
    The alphabet's old, I'll beat silly you with binary and hex codes
    Analyze my style like Joan Rivers, leave carpets red from your blown liver
    Slapped this bitch in the face with my dick - it just made his throat quiver
    My lines deliver, but this cat's more prepacked than Di Giorno pizza
    This Dogg beat ya, sweet dreams, cuz knock-out land's where my foes meet ya
    I'll win this shit just horsin' around, I'm LA's resident Seabiscuit -
    Nobody thinks your spit's for real, like SymBion's lyrics and slit wrists...
    Your only handicap is your vocab, is "undyingness" even a word in english?
    Half the words in that verse were made up, even Dr. Suess couldn't distinguish...
    I won't even fill the quota of rhymes, shit - one line sufficiently dissed ya
    This is the end for this bitch in the tourney, like he journeyed with Diddy and Twista...


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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 October 2004 at 11:26am
    damn u may have well have thrown me in an incubator with my body satuarted in bacteria cuz i got kizziled lol nice battle tho dawg
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 October 2004 at 2:46pm
    Okey not alot to say....

    x-rayotic verse seem to simple....its seems he just put some big words in it to make it more complex....punches were hittin weak...

    Stank came with complexity.....came with hard punches...nice multies.....humor.....


    Ma vote: Stank dogg..
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 October 2004 at 3:34pm
    X-Rayotic - had some good vocab but the lines were too long and didnt flow too well for me, and the punches couldve been alot harder

    BSD - decent flow, had some wordplay in there, nice hard punches

    vote - BSD
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 October 2004 at 7:17am

    X-your verse was rather simple again though u did have some nice vocab but lacked on punches and due to your structure there was no flow

    Bsd-you came quick but hard wordplay was good flow was nice and hit much harder than x
    VOTE-BSD



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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 October 2004 at 9:39am

    BSD wins by KO

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    BSD: 3
    X-Ray: 1

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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