Lyrical Warfare: A3: G-Pfeif vs Insomnia

First to three EXPLAINED votes wins (explanations to be judged by me), 3-0 is a KO

No minimum, and a maximum of 8 bars

Crew Votes ALLOWED

Flips/feeding PERMITTED

Drop whenever you like (first or second, doesn't matter)

Deadline: 29th OCTOBER - MIDNIGHT (GMT (which is forum time+5) - NO EXCEPTIONS

SEE TOURNAMENT RULES THREAD FOR FULL LIST OF RULES.

Good luck.

4-eyed-spit: a verse from a nerd with glasses....4-eyes...he also has a structure of four by four lines in 4 .........ooooo you get it.....

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What the fuck`s with your "structure" -this was a "4-eyed-spit**",
this nerd talkin shit behind my back just cus he posted befor-I-did,
the only time you on "top of LA" - is when you stomp ya "ball-cap,"
and when the "theme is Stupidity" - is the only time "you all-that",
you dont run shit up in here - you dont even know what elite-is,
you aint g-pfeif no more - like the pic in ya sig you now a greek-bitch,
I thought we talkin like men: "I have a girldfriend-thats-hot"-tempt me!,
but I guess thats ya boi in ya sig cus ya gender-spot`s-empty(LMAO!!),
when it comes to "fuckin you up" I prolly take a "sex-lord-throne"(NO HOMO),
bitch - nobody cares bout you - even ya text-form`s-UNKNOWN!

nice spit.. uppin

Duno how 2 call this 1...both werent that nice really

Insomnia's drop was very much in contrast, his opener was gay...wasnt even dissin his opponent really (like, so wah if his structure is 4lines and so wah if he posted b4 u)...next 2 lines was decent, but I mean 'top of LA' is pretty basic wordplay tho I thought the theme is stupidty was a pretty dope punch...next 2 lines was weak agen...agen, next two lines werent that nice, multi was off...and his gender isnt empty - it says male  and even if it wasnt that isnt a diss...u wudda needed 2 word the line differently if u wanted the punch 2 work...fukin u up is a played out diss as well, but u worked it nicely so that was coo, finisher was hard...good line right there, made me laf

I mean, G didnt really bring much, I liked the insomnia 2 sleep line but im guessin thats bin done b4 vs. him and it wasnt that creative (i wudda went with 'im ending insomnia like sleeping tablets' but wah can ya do)...you had some coo multis in there - in the sense that they were effortless and flowed nice (in contrast 2 Insomnia's longer 1 that he attempted)...punches was basic tho, and the majority of your rhymes were as well...started off particulary weak but progressed in terms of dissin and punchin...liked the Nelly line and the "i think i hear ya fans callin" part, coz that was a pretty creative diss

If I was gona vote on the best punchlines then Insomnia wud take this, simply coz he had a cuple of lines in his verse that were really well constructed and hit hard, however...its a battle verse, nah a punchline competition...and wen u compare the verses G's had a more fundamentally sound structure (in terms of rhyme scheme and flow) which he combined with dissin throughout - tho obviously he wasnt as hard as Insomnia all the time he did had some nice punches and concentrated on dissin more than Insomnia who only had 3/4 lines I wud call nice or anywhere near effective

Vote = G-Pfeif

just to sort the gender shit.....he didnt have it yesterday when I was writtin.....so G-Pfief be a man and admit that you put ya gender in the second you saw my spit.......


pc

yeah.. ill admit i did.. i dint know it was on keep private.. that was a good line...

man FW... just cuz you the "Punchin machine" you think if a person has one good punch they win... whateva

1-2 uppin

FLOW: Insomnia
PUNCHES: Insomnia
MULTIS: G-Pfeif
IMAGINATION: EVEN
WORDPLAY: Insomnia
STRUCTURE: EVEN
ENJOYMENT: Insomnia

I came into this battle actually pulling for G-Pfeif, as he hasn't battled regularly in awhile, and I like his style in most cases, but in this case, Insomnia pretty much held it down. The LA/ballcap line was dope as hell. My one nig gripe was the 4 line structure bit, which really went nowhere in my mind... Nice battle both.

Winner: Insomnia