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    Posted: 29 July 2013 at 12:48am
since i stepped into the hell made by selfish beings,
insecurities ate my soul and the dreams,
they took pleasure from my pain  and named it care,
like selling dope and the lighter to the cancerous fiend,

self destructive destiny,written in the scrolls By the God
people called it paranoia,though they knew that its not,
that's another thing, you crash by turning sharp to the right track,
if someone grabs your neck,telme,wouldn't you fight back?

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*paranoid
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I sort of lost the point you're getting at, but you have skills.

"Self-destructive destiny, written in the scrolls by the God'"

I really liked that line.
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This is one of your better drops, titu! Keep doing shit like this bro.
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thanks guys
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