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AshleyKaos 
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 Topic: Mikey Wrath Vs AshleyKaosPosted: 07 January 2014 at 7:15pm |
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Ten bars 48 hours no flips house rules apply
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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AshleyKaos
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 3:20am |
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Mikeys wrath has no force , like his attempted punchlines and insults
Not two rhyming words in any verse he drops i already won by default Skills the worse ive seen LA's MC's maulin him cuz our instincts primative imma kill this wanna be joke its comical,KOn him faster then andrenalyn He begged and pleaded ak to set up this joust,so eager to be humiliated It Doesnt matter anyway since his 'L's continue to be rapidly accumilating Like some ike mikes this battle to easy its like takin candy from a baby key stylin it up whoopin some ass and im even writin this n im faded.... Look kid theres a reason i gave those expos on you so read what i wrote! even if he do or dont hes still a talentless prick whos a laugh with no hope! bout now his face is red veins coursing wrath blotched face out of anger... your to white for this up in the rap game, ya dont even count as a player Ya stupid nd brainless bouta drop the same disses ive heard before Foo thats shits played out dumfuck noone even uses those anymore Your the definition of a noob its sad the apitamy of the biggest disgrace been beat so many times round lyrical assauly how can ya show ya face? funny how this shits gonna end you runnin tail placed between ya legs When readers go to.place a vote they wont bother to see whatchya said Look mike noobie joke talentless bitch i can name a bucncha shit just get ya lame ass the.fuckk outta here..whatever the hell ya is |
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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MikeyWrath
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 5:51pm |
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Am athletic wit my scripts, olympian Anasthetic Spits, The only fitness Ashley gets is an Epileptic Fit../
Am cookin this beef by raisin a bit heat../ Cuz thats what i do when i smell freshmeat../ Your words will be weak in which ever way you calculate../ Even if your rhymes was a elite rap virus because i'll just CTRL-ALT-DELETE../ You see Ashley got alota talk than Action../ She raps fiction so why pay attention to a bitch in need of complection../ I'll reflect everythin this predominant gay can say../ Send her to South Africa and sponsor her 1dollar a day../ Ashley got skills../ And here she gettin thrills../ Nah! I object completely../ Check It, i'll let the world Ghost Write for her, but she stil fail to beat me../ Its impossible, she angry tryna eat me../ I Ash-Lee own skills am Bruce-Lee to beat her../ Bar for Bar, i'll bury you in your own pool of saliva../ To win this battle you gotta be smart like McGyver../ Your dumb ass is on the road to Self Destruction bitch am your designated driver.... |
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Wrath DaBeast
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Syntax
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 8:32pm |
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My vote goes to mike, I'll analyse him first
"Am athletic wit my scripts, olympian Anasthetic Spits, The only fitness Ashley gets is an Epileptic Fit.." Best line of the whole battle, excellent intro, good punchlines, this line was great, 5 points for that. "Your dumb ass is on the road to Self Destruction bitch am your designated driver" Decent punchline, your rhyming was good leading up to it, although I felt it a bit random. 2 points. "She raps fiction so why pay attention to a bitch in need of complection.." Doesn't make sense at all, what has fiction got to do with the complexity of her rhymes? Moreover I doubt you meant to spell it complection I think you mean "complexion", it was so random I didn't understand whether you were talking of her lyricism or her facial complexion. Minus 1 point "Calculate" and "delete" dont rhyme. Minus 1 point. Overall relatively good, 4 points. Now I'll analyse Ashley: Hardly any of your lyrics rhyme, and the ones that do are mis-spelt/pronounced in order to rhyme or are incredibly simple. Minus 3 points. You don't have any good punchlines, no rhythm. Minus 1 point because I'm kind. You know what I can't analyse anymore this is a rap battle and you can't even seem to rap, and this is on a forum, in real life, I cringe thinking about it. I'm a bit confused on how bars work here... A bar is usually a line, I can see how 2 short lines could form a bar like Mike's "Ashley got skills../ And here she gettin thrills../" but that doesn't mean lines as long as a sentence count as a bar. I guess I'll take it with a pinch of salt and just double the bars I see.Anyway don't try to pretend my vote won't count on some formulated technicality, I've elaborated.
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 9:37pm |
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Stop spamming this battle with bullshit. If you wanna battle eachother use the callout section.
Syntax's vote stands, 1-0 Mikey |
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Syntax
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 9:43pm |
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Have done, sorry.
I just don't enjoy flaming.
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Skillos
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 9:46pm |
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Mikey - had the best line, ( am athletic wit my scripts olympian anathetic spits, only fitness ashley gets is ephinatic fits ) nice structure and nice flow
Ash - didn't see 1 thing that rhymed, self hyper and overall bad flow Mikey definately gmt |
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MikeyWrath
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 10:00pm |
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Uppin votes 2:0
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Wrath DaBeast
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AshleyKaos
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 10:41pm |
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Looooolllllllz these are all hate votes !! newbies are ganging up on me guys lol
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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Rameez
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Posted: 09 January 2014 at 2:23am |
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calm down ashely.. don't see any hate about it.. u need to accept people criticism here.. and elevate from it..
ASHLEY Most of you bars didn't rhyme at all.. so they basically failed.. your punches didn't even land at him.. Mikey.. had nice flow and rhyming throughout the verse.. though his punches were generic also.. they landed more than ashley.. but still mostly fillerish.. VOTE: MikeyWrath.. |
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AshleyKaos
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Posted: 09 January 2014 at 3:49am |
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Now see coming from u its different its just when someone who just signed up a hour before says something like that. thats that harsh it pissed me off but k rameez... u ill listen to
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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Systematic
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Posted: 09 January 2014 at 5:32am |
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tbh i think ashley was good, had sick flow and good personal and word play about mike so my vote goes to Ashley.
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AshleyKaos
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Posted: 09 January 2014 at 5:39am |
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does this vote count ? thnks sys tho ppreciate it
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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AshleyKaos
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Posted: 09 January 2014 at 5:43am |
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this battle is over... now I got to battle zentac.. hehe
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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Scotty32
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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 3:07pm |
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3 KO to Mikey
Ashley - I don't ever wanna see you spamming your battles again. If you have a problem with a vote hit the Report button! |
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