Text Battle Archive: INK vs Wreckless

8 lines due in one hour, as agreed.

What About People With Battles Open? But No Record? Lol.

Straight... biggz vote can be accepted...

Wreckless wrote: I'm here to thrive and bang! First bar in, should I leave him alive or slain?! Wreck thrashing this thug! Now I "bash'em with clubs," leave "T offed" like a driving range!

Wreck-
Look man, I'm cocking the tooly! "This ho's wack" so if ya flow back? I'm dropping ya truly!
I'm slayin a bitch quick, wreck stay in a "sick clique!" Ya wouldn't be "in K" if ya shopping for jewelry

Ya lines are streached more then I am used to seeing from you man. Still this one is pretty decent though, although it does seem a little forced but still a good concept.


You're not gonna fool me! Now this fucking whore dropped yes! Think ya score top Wrecks?
Fuck no! You getting shattered pest, wreck leaves "ink a splattered mess" like a rorschach test

As biggz said I have seen this concept in this bar used on him before as well just worded different. It is a good concept an solid punch but is lacking IMO since I have seen it done before

I floored ock best! My weaponry real, I crush ya corpse, now you're heavily killed!
Get dropped n plugged! Bitch, you're not a thug! Only weapons you "dip in ink" are feathery quills!

This line had a quite a bit of filler in it and the punch wasn't to hard hitting. I liked the concept that you had with it though, I think if you would have worded it differently then it would have been a lot better


The elderly killed! Pussy! You showing no L's? Here's ya first, everyone knows this ho fell!
This clown fakein, I "break ya foundation!" Wreck "smashing down in" like I was bulldozing hotels!

This was a decent closer and had a decent punch with it as well. Little filler but not bad




INK-

Ur Stretchin's pollutin LA, more than 'inhalin fumes of Toxic Fires'
So I'll use "moves to safely Handle Wreck's" Like Cautious Drivers

I liked this opener. Deffinetly set the tone for the verse and has me interested. No filler and straight to the point. Wordplay was nice


He's in Vis! But Point Blank, to them? he's Immeasurably faker.
cause like bein in "Fender benders" this wreck'll never be Major!

Setup line on this bar could have been better in my opinion but the punch was decent.


I loved this line lol. Shit was funny as hell. Setup and punch were both on point.



Got 'no legs to stand on' or 'feets of footage' of ur work Bud.
Like 'videos to the Deaf & blind', Its never seen or heard Of!

This bar was was good but I think that the bar up would have been a better closer. But this was still decent


Overall MVGT- INK. For a more consisant verse and not having as much filler as wreck

Wreck idk if you was trying g a new style or what but for some reason your bars were a decent bit longer the. What I am used to seeing from you. Shit was still decent but just had. ore filler and UK had some harder landed punches.

ALRIGHT,

Wreckless, stop harassing the fucking voters. It's absolutely ridiculous..

Let's keep it to votes only, 2-1 INK

BiGGz wrote: Me n Him n Been on Like 3 Forums Together.. That's It. Lol.

I hear what you saying... but this^^^ alone tells us that he is full of shit and that he knows ya.

Wreckless - The opener was a bit of a stretch name play wise and it didn't come off as smooth either. The rorschach test concept into the splatter ink play was a decent touch but overall the ink blot concept is used way too much against. For someone that hasn't been around it might come off as nice but to me the concept has been used quite a bit now and it loses it's sting after that. Bar 3 was ight, nothing heavyweight but it was okay. Closer was cool with the double name play, play.. Not bad there. I have read much better from you. I felt you wasted away the first two bars and on an overall standpoint you definitely had some irrelevant multi's in there.

INK wins 5-1