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Rapper T
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Topic: FreePosted: 27 April 2018 at 2:03pm |
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I'm a free man, ainf no tellin' what I felt
Deep end of the sea spans oceans like a belt Yellin' doesn't help, ain't no comfort in 'at Ya prollem finna stay yours summers in hat So summon it back, I mean the iriest eye From the crack of dawn to the silentest night Alright. It's a fight for the death innit 'Til life's out of breath wicked grind 'til ya chest gives in Life only left victims and I've only met prison, is livin' in cells, lipid wisdom as well That's fat for the idiot, no pH level Blind'll hear it in brail this vivid story I tell Paint a pretty picture pretty gorey as well I'm hori as hell, a purebreed half cast As sure as the tale that sure things can't last Pure stings sharp glass I'm rww urgency packed Been an outcast. You'd murder me black Heard of me mandem come from new zeal land Branded with the brand it's readin' new real rap You feel. Facts. No word of a lie Rapper T wtf? Never heard of the guy Is that a bird in the sky or some sorta plane? Na student learn it when I come taught the name I'm sorta ta blame for not getting here sooner I been caught in a chain takin' dares for dead rulers Growed ideas and wrecked booers I been rekn the stage Blessin' the cages I'm a resuscitate This age inundate-d with page upon page Of garbage and pent up insane button rage The sage is my name but I ain't been a herb The swordsmith, burnin' the church with the word Cos fuck the system down with big brother We're 'free' Off the dome, feed if you want it's whatever Edited by Rapper T - 27 April 2018 at 2:08pm |
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Lord Puente
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Posted: 27 April 2018 at 5:26pm |
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Oh look another post by you yet the appreciated feed is yet to be presented. Hmmmm strange
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Rapper T
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Posted: 27 April 2018 at 9:23pm |
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Thanks for being a champ and bum ping the post Gaylord Shitente
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GlockeD
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Posted: 28 April 2018 at 12:37am |
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yo this was solid you came with a lot of bars and it seemed like some off the top shit im guessing thats why u called it free. but all in all it was alright you could worked on the flow a little more in my opinion but still the bars were hot
"I'm sorta ta blame for not getting here sooner I been caught in a chain takin' dares for dead rulers" that was dope |
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Posted: 30 April 2018 at 1:55am |
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Cheers for the feed GlockeD, straight off the top with these bars, I'll see about chiselling it cleaner for a project in the future too, liked that bar too man, frees are good for random as metaphors sometimes.
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