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    Posted: 27 April 2018 at 2:03pm
I'm a free man, ainf no tellin' what I felt
Deep end of the sea spans oceans like a belt
Yellin' doesn't help, ain't no comfort in 'at
Ya prollem finna stay yours summers in hat
So summon it back, I mean the iriest eye
From the crack of dawn to the silentest night
Alright. It's a fight for the death innit
'Til life's out of breath wicked grind 'til ya chest gives in
Life only left victims and I've only met prison,
is livin' in cells, lipid wisdom as well
That's fat for the idiot, no pH level
Blind'll hear it in brail this vivid story I tell
Paint a pretty picture pretty gorey as well
I'm hori as hell, a purebreed half cast
As sure as the tale that sure things can't last
Pure stings sharp glass I'm rww urgency packed
Been an outcast. You'd murder me black
Heard of me mandem come from new zeal land
Branded with the brand it's readin' new real rap
You feel. Facts. No word of a lie
Rapper T wtf? Never heard of the guy
Is that a bird in the sky or some sorta plane?
Na student learn it when I come taught the name
I'm sorta ta blame for not getting here sooner
I been caught in a chain takin' dares for dead rulers
Growed ideas and wrecked booers I been rekn the stage
Blessin' the cages I'm a resuscitate
This age inundate-d with page upon page
Of garbage and pent up insane button rage
The sage is my name but I ain't been a herb
The swordsmith, burnin' the church with the word
Cos fuck the system down with big brother

We're 'free'


Off the dome, feed if you want it's whatever

Edited by Rapper T - 27 April 2018 at 2:08pm
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Lord Puente Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 April 2018 at 5:26pm
Oh look another post by you yet the appreciated feed is yet to be presented. Hmmmm strange
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Thanks for being a champ and bum ping the post Gaylord Shitente
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yo this was solid you came with a lot of bars and it seemed like some off the top shit im guessing thats why u called it free. but all in all it was alright you could worked on the flow a little more in my opinion but still the bars were hot

"I'm sorta ta blame for not getting here sooner
I been caught in a chain takin' dares for dead rulers"

that was dope
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Rapper T Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 April 2018 at 1:55am
Cheers for the feed GlockeD, straight off the top with these bars, I'll see about chiselling it cleaner for a project in the future too, liked that bar too man, frees are good for random as metaphors sometimes.
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