Open Mic: Analysis

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   I'm a chameleon with the flow, king of the domain
Trained to cause pain the game will never be the same
Cause I fucked him up lyrically, lol, I'm jus messin'
But I can guarantee ya didnt flinch ya the suggestion
Guessin and vexin' cause my syllabuls didnt match
But dont care bout policeman and criminals they didnt catch
Criminals they let off the latch, and people they survaillin
Just cause your caught up doesnt mean its amazin
Just means its a little plaything made for a rat
Crafted in a laboratory where theories start from scratch
Its in the metropolis of my mind, contains states and cities
Can't keep up with the deeper meanin well thats a pitty
Cause Im explicitly witty, complicity gritty, completely grimey
Way down in the dirt so that the predator couldnt find me (any movie buffs?)
Terminator with the language, carryin lyrical rifles
Crafting vast works of art like that Tower at Eifel
Bossin' the street fighter's too like I was M-Bison
Samurai sword cuttin through every emcee Im slicin'
Partial cannon for a tongue, spittin sub-atomic energy
Channellin chi exponentially, oh so typical tendancy
Give it time my children, you might catch up eventually
Put together poison, you might equal me potentially
Prolly shouldnt mention me in verses or scriptures
I flow magically like elixer's, ill rip ya, get the picture?
I'm the Louvre I've got the bigger picture and the art
Don't start, I'm too dark in the heart, blow you all apart
Like Napoleon Bonaparte, I stay commanding armies
Ya bland and smarmy and how can ya stanza's harm me
And now I've grown tired of rhyming so I cease and desist
I'm killin the open mic which emcee is goin to assist?

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Cuba Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Cuba Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Analysis Posted: 11 September 2005 at 4:17pm
	I'm a chameleon with the flow, king of the domain Trained to cause pain the game will never be the same Cause I fucked him up lyrically, lol, I'm jus messin' But I can guarantee ya didnt flinch ya the suggestion Guessin and vexin' cause my syllabuls didnt match But dont care bout policeman and criminals they didnt catch Criminals they let off the latch, and people they survaillin Just cause your caught up doesnt mean its amazin Just means its a little plaything made for a rat Crafted in a laboratory where theories start from scratch Its in the metropolis of my mind, contains states and cities Can't keep up with the deeper meanin well thats a pitty Cause Im explicitly witty, complicity gritty, completely grimey Way down in the dirt so that the predator couldnt find me (any movie buffs?) Terminator with the language, carryin lyrical rifles Crafting vast works of art like that Tower at Eifel Bossin' the street fighter's too like I was M-Bison Samurai sword cuttin through every emcee Im slicin' Partial cannon for a tongue, spittin sub-atomic energy Channellin chi exponentially, oh so typical tendancy Give it time my children, you might catch up eventually Put together poison, you might equal me potentially Prolly shouldnt mention me in verses or scriptures I flow magically like elixer's, ill rip ya, get the picture? I'm the Louvre I've got the bigger picture and the art Don't start, I'm too dark in the heart, blow you all apart Like Napoleon Bonaparte, I stay commanding armies Ya bland and smarmy and how can ya stanza's harm me And now I've grown tired of rhyming so I cease and desist I'm killin the open mic which emcee is goin to assist?


GhettoMike Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 142 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote GhettoMike Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 September 2005 at 9:26pm
	well.. it had nice flow, but it was boring to me, needed to up the vocab and rhyme scheme (did i spell that right). i guess truthfully id give this a 7.5/10.. sry, wasnt feeling it. \/ \/ edited \/ \/ i re-read it and realized i based too much on the begining, wich yeah i wasnt really feeling, but the end was alot better then the begining, prolly around the midway point i was liking it, ended strong and had creativeness and no.. forget jehu ass Edited by GhettoMike

King Jehu Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote King Jehu Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 September 2005 at 9:31pm
	He's not sure he spelled scheme right... so ignore him. This shit was tight as hell, as always, very lyrical and it's something you have to read into to be able to understand it all. It's not your basic, wack,"what u see is what u get" type shits... Keep it up, Ice, you is the troof.
	Insert something rappy here

Cuba Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Cuba Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 14 September 2005 at 9:09am
	lol...7.5 isnt bad for somethin he isnt feelin thanks guys


Demonic Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member X Fade II Joined: 06 August 2004 Location: Cardiff Status: Offline Points: 3463 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-4-0 Form: LLWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Demonic Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 14 September 2005 at 10:20am
	was one or two lines that i wasnt to sure on. But the verse o its self was very nice enjoyed the level of it really, Vocab was high , Flow was tight , verse as a hole was pretty nice Feelin it alot


Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Stalin Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 15 September 2005 at 4:39am
	u always consistant in droppin hot open mics, Ice flow was very good, agree wit J on this not bein the typical "what u see is what u get" shit, the multis in the first couple bars were hot for real, but after that the content made up for not usin as many multis editactually readin over it again...the multis were very consistant all the way thruedit very lyrical like J said Fav. Lines... Cause Im explicitly witty, complicity gritty, completely grimey Way down in the dirt so that the predator couldnt find me Terminator with the language, carryin lyrical rifles Crafting vast works of art like that Tower at Eifel Partial cannon for a tongue, spittin sub-atomic energy Channellin chi exponentially, oh so typical tendancy Prolly shouldnt mention me in verses or scriptures I flow magically like elixer's, ill rip ya, get the picture? Like Napoleon Bonaparte, I stay commanding armies Ya bland and smarmy and how can ya stanza's harm me as u can tell..i was feelin almost all of it, only a couple lines I wasnt really feelin that seemed like filler...peace Edited by Stalin

Krayzie Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 11 September 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 59 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Krayzie Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 15 September 2005 at 8:56am
	2me,it felt lke u made it "drag-on"(n i aint talkn bout dude from ruff ryders).it was lyrical though n good vocab wise.6ish/10
	ThAt NiGga KraYzIe...AsK Ya BiTch AbOUt Me

Cuba Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Cuba Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 September 2005 at 7:21pm
	Appreciate the opinions