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   This is the first verse of a song i'm doin with hopes of makin it audio be harash lol its called callin card and the styles a bit strange but i think it flows well Peace 
 
(Hook) 
I kick in the door leave blood on the matress
Scatteres limbs on the floor kid gets chopped up by hatchets
Stick the knife in the back leavin all life devoured
Gotta lasarate the kneck bytch thats my callin card
 
 
As darkness decends on the corner of my brain the voices demand killin
From the seed line of Cain we came the fallen angles children
Ready to take blood every savage killin a work of art a sculpture
Faceless coarpses in the mudd gettin circuled by the vultures 
Just victums of human culture
 
Its animal instinct bascially i stay equiped with a scaple and rip saw
To tackle any problem thats facein me rubber gloves on each paw
An solvents so nobody tracin me fuck it I say on top of the food pyrmiad
So pigs aint lyibail to be chasin me shit i swipe at swine with blades
 
And stab em with knifes so blunt I really gotta force it into the rib cage
A murderous sage when its war i wage i open ya chest 
Snippin your main vains with wire snips leave you slowly bleedin to death
And weasin for breath while i'm hackin the limbs pushin the blade back an
forth cuttin the bone an breakin the skin
 
Survioul chances are slim i'm a professional check my murder methods
I studied Manson, Bunday, Jack the Ripper and Hannibal hit styles been tryed and tested 
to much of my time has been invested in leavin bodies layed up in chalk
 i'd sooner spray the heat for weeks than see a victum walk and talk


Edited by Red-Star - 15 September 2006 at 9:29am

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Red-Star Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 28 August 2006 Location: Ireland Status: Offline Points: 186 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Red-Star Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Need a rank Posted: 15 September 2006 at 9:26am
	This is the first verse of a song i'm doin with hopes of makin it audio be harash lol its called callin card and the styles a bit strange but i think it flows well Peace (Hook) I kick in the door leave blood on the matress Scatteres limbs on the floor kid gets chopped up by hatchets Stick the knife in the back leavin all life devoured Gotta lasarate the kneck bytch thats my callin card As darkness decends on the corner of my brain the voices demand killin From the seed line of Cain we came the fallen angles children Ready to take blood every savage killin a work of art a sculpture Faceless coarpses in the mudd gettin circuled by the vultures Just victums of human culture Its animal instinct bascially i stay equiped with a scaple and rip saw To tackle any problem thats facein me rubber gloves on each paw An solvents so nobody tracin me fuck it I say on top of the food pyrmiad So pigs aint lyibail to be chasin me shit i swipe at swine with blades And stab em with knifes so blunt I really gotta force it into the rib cage A murderous sage when its war i wage i open ya chest Snippin your main vains with wire snips leave you slowly bleedin to death And weasin for breath while i'm hackin the limbs pushin the blade back an forth cuttin the bone an breakin the skin Survioul chances are slim i'm a professional check my murder methods I studied Manson, Bunday, Jack the Ripper and Hannibal hit styles been tryed and tested to much of my time has been invested in leavin bodies layed up in chalk i'd sooner spray the heat for weeks than see a victum walk and talk Edited by Red-Star - 15 September 2006 at 9:29am
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Red-Star Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 28 August 2006 Location: Ireland Status: Offline Points: 186 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Red-Star Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 15 September 2006 at 9:30am
	once again excusse the spellin lol
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Red-Star Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 28 August 2006 Location: Ireland Status: Offline Points: 186 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLWLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Red-Star Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 September 2006 at 8:16pm
	what does aguy gotta do to get ranked around here?
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ILLSTARRR Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote ILLSTARRR Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 17 September 2006 at 8:43pm
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	high nov

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	ok im not a judge but in my opinion high nov bro You had a decent flow but it was all just simple rhyming man, no real wordplay going on and the attempted multis were simple, not alot of vocab going on and the concept was kinda plain U got good potential though man
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