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Fatal 
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 Topic: Fatal Vs CJPosted: 31 January 2009 at 7:38pm |
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I think ya rules u wanted were 16 lines, you get a week after i spit, no flips, no crew votes...first to 5 and 3-0 Ko
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Senor Perfecto
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Posted: 03 February 2009 at 11:22am |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 03 February 2009 at 12:41pm |
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What Up Pussy! Didn't expect me to drop first did you!
Waiting on you! two words before i begin this... FUCK YOU! Senor's Writing for me, Hah! what did you think? Flash could get beaten by anybody... NOT JUST A CHINK! My Lyrical Kung Fu Style will leave Fatal baffled and blue Place 'Flash' on his 'Back', with symptoms of Deja Vu Woah, Flash, Fatal don't get angry and be no-showing me now! Quit with the beef, Like Bart Simpson says ' Dont have a cow!' CeeJay goes crazy, when he's tappin these buttons, his lyricisms insane! Watch closely, as he mentally plays Flash, like online video games... This Pro, thinks he can beat me with a Keystyle! I'd Like to see him try... Hit him, hard, knock him down a few notches cos his heads in the sky! After a Lyrical Flash, I'll disrupt his balance and leave him Downed an Out! Cee-Jay will end this destructively like Mayweather in the Hatton bout... I'm simply not on your level? you claim your the best! this you may sway Only good things from Chitown was Common and Kanye... Your "ONLY" Wicked with wordplay! That's not much to boast Near Enough three Title's for Sparta, Yet you haven't come close |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 11 February 2009 at 9:42am |
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Tick Tock!
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 12 February 2009 at 12:32pm |
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1 Week in 15mins Fatal... u wanting an N?
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Kay B
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Posted: 12 February 2009 at 12:49pm |
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Fatal doesn't have net access all the time u know that just check when he was last online to know if he's seen this (i don't know when he was last on, may of been five mins ago for all i know)
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Scotty32
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Posted: 13 February 2009 at 10:32am |
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Since flasher said "one week from my post" i'll assume the same for him.
Since hes got a valid reason i'll leave it in NML till it gets stupid*. * = at my own discretion |
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Fatal
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Posted: 14 February 2009 at 4:35pm |
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Sorry dude, i was barely able to get to a computer today...ill key somethin right now
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Fatal
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Posted: 14 February 2009 at 5:01pm |
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Fuck...mods erase that lol
You done fucked up...Peep tha personals bitch Witness my sickness... I slaughter this bitch for thinkin that he's tight But this fucker still couldnt drop a hot verse taking 4 WEEKS TO PREWRITE! You see im miles above you... Ill leave this wack fuck smacked up an extinguished You're not the worst in ya crew? True... But only cuz rameez barely speaks english Yer outta ya league, bitch... You think you got a chance if ya prewrite ya verses? Cocksucker, ya words wouldnt have a prayer if ya text messaged in churches! Ya need ya leader to fight ya battles... His dick is deep in ya butt crack This faggot cant hold his own....He got his hands full wit Senor's nut sack Motherfucker, Ill knock ya teeth down ya throat an leave ya suckin down tarter Its funny you should mention pussy, when YOURE the one duckin out Sparta! (GTFOH) Im sonnin this dike, tell us what the fuck you've done on this site Oh thats right, You've won ONE battle and proved youre the type to run from a fight This cowards gettin pummeled wit rights and knocked out i promise Ceejay jus cant cut it and bitch i aint talkin bout faulty hydrolics! You never had a chance from tha start...so its time ya face it Im quick to leave CJ dead in tha street like failed missions in San Andreas |
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-XTC-
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 12:37pm |
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omfg.. the whole bar for bar break down but as soon as i hit post the fucking router lost signal.. ffs.. anyways.. it's like this.. C Gay No Balls.. your verse was pretty much filler.. nothing really impressed me.. for someone who talked so much shit I would have expected better from you.. typical noob.. anyways.. your opener was wack.. and it seemed pretty irrelevant.. idk how your tying perfecto into that punch but it came off lame.. 2nd bar was a poor attempt of a name play and word play and came off weak.. 3rd bar was wack as fuck.. and the punch (which isn't even a punch tbh) is irrelevant to your set up.. and being that he never had any intention of ducking you it seemed stupid.. and the fact that he didn't duck you makes you look like an ass.. pure filler.. 4th bar was ok.. attempted play again.. came off weak.. but it was decent.. 5th bar was lame.. 6th bar was ok.. again came off weak.. but another decent punch.. 7th bar was pretty dull.. i saw the idea but you didn't word it enough to make it effective.. Closer was wack.. BUT i don't know what the fuck you are talking about so that could be why i see it that way.. but nonetheless i assume even with an expo it will still come off wack.. so.. fuck it..
Flash Dancer - easily said.. bars 1-6.. fire.. 7th bar.. wasn't feeling.. didn't get what you was trying to say.. Closer.. funny as hell.. and i got the play being CJ from San Andreas..haha.. that was tight.. your verse was pretty much fire bro.. neglecting that one bar i wasn't happy with you absolutely killed it.. for a key.. that shit was bangin son.. no doubt.. props..
Vote; Flashy McAssman
and PS.. u mother fuckers better appreciate that cause thats the 2nd time i fucking broke it down..cunts..
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rapdisup
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 3:47pm |
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first off close battle guys so ima break this down first off .
CJ opener was gud providing its true i aint been active for long so past battles etc are still blind to me i liked the mayweather line it worked well an ya closing line was gud also gud stuff.
Fatal gud stuff to wasnt feeling the opener as it made no sense to me as Cj dropped 1st?the line bout rameez was gud liked that,sparta line was ok to but didnt feel much of a punch there,ya piece flowed well but jus wernt feeling all the 'coksucker an bitch stuff felt it was abit forced oh well thats jus my opion gud piece tho.
overall i think CJ jus took this think it overall flowed more an had more relivantce jus giving my opion no hate gud piece from both of ya keep it up!
CJ- gmv
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Fatal
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 4:19pm |
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LMFAO r you serious? First of all how the fuck can u vote when u didnt understand the personals which made up 90% of my verse...You like his mayweather line? Lmao ok...The sparta line wasnt "much of a punch?" U didnt see him in the crew battle thread duckin sparta did u?
Look, can i get a mod in here, cuz this guy doesnt even know how to form a punchline or even what wordplay is...He voted for Cj cuz "he felt" that his verse "flowed better and had more relevance." Lmao more relevance? My verse was all personals wit a few mixes of wordplay...Please dont vote on my battles again, buddy...k thanks If you dont understand a punchline, its simple dont vote... Uppin for knowledgeable voters.... |
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-XTC-
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 4:43pm |
Ok it's not my buisness and shit cause it's not my battle.. but this shit is fuckin ridiculous.. i totally feel where Flash is coming from on this because that's got to be one of the gayest votes i've ever seen.. you obviously didn't read the verses because you have no idea what you just said..
First off.. CJ's opener was completly bullshit.. point blank..
2nd of all.. If you fucking read shit around the site it will catch you up on inactivity from the site.. I would know because I've been inactive for months.. i've just recently got my net back so now i'm going to be around alot more often.. but as I was saying.. read around and you will get caught up.. his fucking opener is refering to the fact that it was said before the dynasty vs xfade crew battle.. CJ was suppose to battle Fatal.. Fatal however mentioned that he only wanted to be apart of it if he was needed.. therefore Sparta become CJ's opponent.. Being that CJ is a complete herb.. he had already wrote a whole verse for Fatal thinking he was hot shit, post his verse, then talk a bunch of shit how Fatal is gonna No Show.. not a psychic but I can vividly see the future of some shit.. So yes Fatal's punch is very relevant and it makes perfect sense.. your just to much of a dumbass to see that..
3rd.. Sparta line wasn't a punch..?? So you obviously didn't read CJ's verse.. he fucking mentions "don't have a cow.." compare the sparta line to the Bart Simpson shit and tell me which one doesn't sound like a punch..
4th.. what would you know about forced lines..?? you have no idea what your talking about..
Last.. You felt CJ flowed better and had more "relivantce.." thats a trip.. you can't even spell the word.. yet you tryed to use it in a sentence to make yourself sound smart.. if you want to use big words..talk to hanGin , Cuba, or Perfect.. I think Orion likes to spice up his long life story posts too..
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Fatal
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 4:46pm |
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Haha...thanks for the breakdown vote Xtc... props
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rapdisup
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 5:59pm |
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boys i aint been active for a while every1 voted on my battles i tried doin the same i see this battle an felt cjs verse i dnt know why i did wrong here an the double expos from both of ya'll? if ya didnt like my vote fair play ask a mod 2 correct me its replys like that that keep newbies not voting if im so wrong it wudnt matter neway as yu will win?its 1-1 according to my vote(if it counts) so like i sed if im wrong so be it the end result will prove it,Sorry if neither of yu liked my vote,but that was my desicion ask a mod 2 clear this up an see if it stands if not fuk it i jus wont bother ne more.
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
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Kay B
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 6:10pm |
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Its not the fact you voted for CJ its the fact your explanations make no sense at all thats all there getting at
...I'll vote on this once i get a chance to read them properly, family guys on atm |
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rapdisup
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 6:13pm |
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Cheers Kay thats a better way of puttin it ill read wat i wrote an read word it if it dnt stand
Peace
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
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Fatal
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 6:36pm |
Exactly...And not jus that, but the fact that you dont understand what personals are or even wordplay for that matter. |
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Posted: 15 February 2009 at 10:41pm |
ok here we go again..
1st.. you just joined last month.. how inactive could you have possibly been.. no excuse..
2nd.. ok.. were not bashing you for voting for CJ.. BUT.. the reasons you voted for him make no logical sense at all..
3rd.. No.. Newbies don't vote because they do not understand what it is they're voting on.. they're not knowledgable enough to understand how to critique a battle.. so therefore they stay quiet.. nobody said you couldn't vote.. but if your going to vote.. explain the vote.. and if your going to explain.. make the explanation logical.. you flat out said you didn't understand Flash's verse so you pretty much gave the verse to CJ.. If you didn't understand.. ASK.. otherwise.. Don't vote.. thats like giving an inference on something you know nothing about.. This is why I would never ask "you" for your opinion on a verse I wrote because "you" wouldn't know what to say because "you" do not understand..
4th.. It's not that we don't want you to vote bro.. just learn the basic concepts of rap first.. then when you understand.. drop reasonable votes.. we want newbies to vote because newbies populate the site.. but at the same time.. make sure you know what your saying man.. thats all..
were not trying to give you a hard time and run you off the site.. even though i know Flash is calling la familia to get the low riders and look for your house so they can get the drive by going.. were just trying to point out that your pretty illiterate and you should pay attention instead of looking up new ways to masturbate.. thats all man..
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rapdisup
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Posted: 16 February 2009 at 7:39am |
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"even though i know Flash is calling la familia to get the low riders and look for your house so they can get the drive by going.."
Lmao kk i get ya point,I aint gunna take up ne more room spaming this so ill jus vote on smaller battles or sumthing this is obviously important for sum reason.
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