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mcwoods 
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 Topic: .Posted: 20 January 2008 at 8:26pm |
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im a savage, never been average, big money, bundle cabbage
call me the one without the seatbelt, im the one who does the damage you better than me (hahahaha) you slay me bitch, im so paid and im rich so much do’ I fuckin “throw away whips”, like the end of slavery…shit my punches hard, n’ im so nice you cant better this cause my words “make the cake” like thoughtful icing messages im on the cake like candles, but produce 100 times the heat your rhymes are for a beat, but mine are the rhymes to beat im inclined to defeat the devil, ive got 5 times the power see ya “spits fall along way, short” like midgets drooling off the Eiffel tower im like psychos at the post office, ill be raping ya letters I call my accountants the paperclips…… they keep all my paper together |
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sparta
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..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
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Posted: 20 January 2008 at 8:30pm |
That line was quality, the rest was poor. Don;t talk about money so much, and if you do, make it original... |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 20 January 2008 at 8:32pm |
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thanks man, yeah that was the one that made me right the rest lol
for the usa peeps, there was an ad campaign about wearing seatbelts, and the main message was a paramedic talking about how the 3 people in the car accident died, "the one without the seatbelt done the damage" etc. |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 20 January 2008 at 8:50pm |
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Woods Aint 'Making Paper' Unless We In A Mill...Hehe Not big on the money shit..you seem to be using the cake/candle plays alot which I find really repetative..but anyways like Sparta quote the seatbelt line was nice..keep up
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The original comeback kid
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mcwoods
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Posted: 20 January 2008 at 8:51pm |
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lol nice mill lines, think that bettered my verse lol.
thanks for feed |
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