Open Mic: Soul Seeker (To Be Audio)

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    Posted: 09 October 2009 at 6:18pm
http://www.shadowville.com/1019/genres/gangsta-beats/soul-seeker

^^ The beat.

I move mountains I'm a word smith
you never heard this
intense rap rhythm, how I spit it with a purpose
I'm rippin' all them jerks quick,
I'll make a meal of you for starters
an I aint splittin' an orderves dish
I'll eat the whole banquet if I need to
they call me Mr. Intellectually cerebral
I'm evil, my style is alway shakin' dudes
an I'm makin' moves, but you still thinkin' that we equal
you know some say I'm crystal clear
but in reality,
we all know that its you who we see through
I was put on this planet for abusing the people
an violate the masses like your usual creeps do
expectant .......just to be as putrid as these dudes
who could only imagine what it feels like
to spend a day in my life
 goin' through what I've been through
wouldn't last a minute if it was you whose in these shoes
I'll damage ya
other emcees had to carry ya
every verse that I ever spit will break ya barriers
challenge us?
nah my team will straight up embarrass yas
I think its best for both of us if you wake up an vanish bruv
you paint a dry picture when you write,
so maybe next time you should try an shake up the canister


I know, it looks a mess, but when I flow it, its crazy. Should be a good track. Another 32 bars to be added on, no hook.


Edited by NepentheZ - 09 October 2009 at 6:20pm






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I like it, sounds like if you get the right delivery on it, it could be a real sick audio.
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as an audio..it would came out dope.
beat's definetly suitin' to the lyrics..
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Cuba Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 October 2009 at 1:15pm
Interesting though...seems like you kind of switched your style to adapt it to audio, would like to hear it coz this beat sounds pretty sick and I think this'll sound awesome
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