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Lynchology420
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Topic: [text] Lynchology420 vs E.V.P (1-5)Posted: 06 November 2014 at 9:39am |
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"I have seen this, I have done this,you.. do not want this"
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Lynchology420
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Posted: 06 November 2014 at 9:53am |
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With no inspiration,dope rhymes,expectation,
Let this martyr beat himself, like 1900's Flagellation, Getting drawn & quartered with remains displayed effectively, So in over your head, my words'll scalp you like a Cherokee, Put this baby in the corner, like an old backstreet abortionist, Tongue in knots,stuck to the spot,fold quicker than contortionists, I Scratch claw bite,in an uphill fight til' the right to be here is proved, While you got a specialist doctors appointment tommorrow to have the last 4 bars surgically removed, Truth be told, let it be known, proclaim right from here to Yokohama, Your style's too used, like some tattered ass shoes that you rent at the Bowlarama. |
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E.V.P.
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Posted: 09 November 2014 at 5:20pm |
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This fiend is crazy for an “L”, but on 420, this herb’d get smoked out. Like homeless drunk dying, “you took shots n spit” til a ‘Redcoat’ smothered ya.
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Lynchology420
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Posted: 11 November 2014 at 5:54am |
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Upping begrudgingly haha
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"I have seen this, I have done this,you.. do not want this"
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 12 November 2014 at 8:05pm |
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Both you guys have dropped verses that could be used pretty much on anyone
That's just not great battlefield material to start Find a way to attach a verse to the opponent...that's how it's done I gotta give this to lynch only cos it was nicer to read vote 420 |
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 23 November 2014 at 3:18pm |
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Very indirect battle except for e.v.p first line about the L and 420. Lynch you had a good flow going but wasn't much punch there. E.v.p I feel you were more lyrical and had better structure in my opinion. The day you guys actual aim at each other you both will be problems.
MVGT: E.V.P. |
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I can only fall off in space...
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sage
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Posted: 29 November 2014 at 7:51pm |
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I felt this was a generic battle nothing personal both verses flowed well and nothing special stood out from both but I delt like EVP landed more punches than Lyn but I liked EVP's closer abd the 4rd bar of Lyn was also good
this is a pretty close one but Imma go with EVP for better flow and read. |
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ch3kkgame
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Posted: 30 November 2014 at 1:31am |
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How I see it...
Lyn - Your verse wasnt bad, it just wasnt a direct shot at your opponent that is what mainly took away from your overall verse. Not a bad verse at all. Good drop and keep em coming. E.V.P - Your verse wasnt bad either, but what wont it for you is that your verse was a bit more tailored for your opponent than his was for you. You did have some decent lines here. Overall good drop. Keep it up. I look forward to future drops from both of you. MVGT - E.V.P for a cleaner, smoother, and more direct verse.
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Phrixus
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Posted: 30 November 2014 at 1:57am |
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Lynch- I'll start with what I like with you. Your flow is on point, so does your rhyme scheme but your bars and punchlines...man miss me with the smart shit really. Your punches wasn't direct at all. It seems more like an open mic rather than a battle
E.V.P- Your bars and punchlines was slightly better but I dont feel your flow. The insane man and hangman line really fucked up the flow. MVGT- E.V.P for actually making this battle sound like one. Both of you have something in store but try to make a battle seem like one.
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 30 November 2014 at 2:12am |
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I have to agree with the majority of the feedback. Lynch you wrote some okay and some nice lines but it wasn't tailored towards your opponent. Its not that, personal are everything but you both came with decent verses. Flow, wording, multi's were strong and your format was mostly done well. Take a little time to gather some material to work with about your opponent and you'll do alright.
E.v.p - Like said above you came with some a decent bars but overall you should of been more direct. Your style is a bit choppy but your punches mostly come through. Needs just a little tweeking.
Two decent writers, average battle but for a better punches and aproach e.v.p |
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#bananas
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Shankley
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Posted: 30 November 2014 at 3:54am |
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EVP Wins 5-1
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