Spit for Rank: Oniss - Ranked: Ama

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   yo slice the inscision under the vertabre perverted play praying mantis 
straight into the riga mortis emcees distortus with verbs so hugantious
they can't be broke by anyone not even these clon-dykes retaliation
total annihilation destructive cause breath pant pause am still waitin
don't play with law cos you get burnt kid i did and learnt the hard way
god damn it now am in a room full of pirates and about to claim parlay
my marksmenship up to stratch i've had practice now i wanna re-match
blow ye limbs off like this was house of the dead two ye limbs distach
now time to hatch a plan quick as you can ballsistics smoke opponents
am not apart of the army but i know how to file off the gun componets
thats my oniss the verbs i deliver are enough to make an emcee shiver
and like hannibal lecture i be muchin some cianty beans and ye liver
blood flowin from ye wounds faster than a river cut-throat material
battlin down with swiss kings we all imperial chewin down my cereal
intermediate? you need to re rank ye groups delinquants and smart alecs
so we can roll out like soldiers in the field of god man ye barracks
i connect like fusion and neutrons molecules and particles reactions
stop readin my work like you in love there just freestyle attractions...

Edited by Harlem - 29 October 2006 at 3:48pm

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Harlem Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 03 August 2006 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 213 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-10-0 Form: LLLLLL	Topic: Oniss - Ranked: Ama Posted: 29 October 2006 at 3:43pm
	yo slice the inscision under the vertabre perverted play praying mantis straight into the riga mortis emcees distortus with verbs so hugantious they can't be broke by anyone not even these clon-dykes retaliation total annihilation destructive cause breath pant pause am still waitin don't play with law cos you get burnt kid i did and learnt the hard way god damn it now am in a room full of pirates and about to claim parlay my marksmenship up to stratch i've had practice now i wanna re-match blow ye limbs off like this was house of the dead two ye limbs distach now time to hatch a plan quick as you can ballsistics smoke opponents am not apart of the army but i know how to file off the gun componets thats my oniss the verbs i deliver are enough to make an emcee shiver and like hannibal lecture i be muchin some cianty beans and ye liver blood flowin from ye wounds faster than a river cut-throat material battlin down with swiss kings we all imperial chewin down my cereal intermediate? you need to re rank ye groups delinquants and smart alecs so we can roll out like soldiers in the field of god man ye barracks i connect like fusion and neutrons molecules and particles reactions stop readin my work like you in love there just freestyle attractions... Edited by Harlem - 29 October 2006 at 3:48pm

Prophecy Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 16 September 2006 Status: Offline Points: 549 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-7-0 Form: Unknown	Posted: 29 October 2006 at 3:56pm
	Pretty Dope Id say Ama- flow was pretty nice, was feelin the vocab, concepts were nice and the rhymes were pretty good, could have dropped a few multis in it but all an all nice drop, stay active, chewin on my cereal line was funny
	I Fuckin Suck

I-kontinue Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL	Posted: 30 October 2006 at 8:31am
	Low AMA. Stay active... Ideas werent worded as comprehendible as possible, so work on wording...

2smooth Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW	Posted: 30 October 2006 at 11:05am
	yeah, to me it seemed you rhymed words just to rhyme them... idk, wasn't horrible tho... low AMA

Scotty32 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10491 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL	Posted: 30 October 2006 at 3:37pm
	locked on ama
	Great and Glorious Supreme Presidential Leader of the People's Democratic Republic of LA