Vengeance: R2-B3) Sparta vs UNLM

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Edited by Scotty32 - 18 January 2008 at 12:11pm

Sparta -

Fuck this Venomous rookie, if he steps he'll get dropped
I'm leaving this weak-rhyming kid in more of a mess than his socks
haha, decent opener
I'll put your rep to a stop, it's clear this bitch might choke
Only in the quarters through his pussy crew's dick-ride votes
funny cuz im sure alot of ppl were thinkin it...could been worded better tho, again, decent
Yeah, ya text sucks son, this kid couldn't step up
No fuckin way you beat Stalin son, that shit was a set-up
again, coulda been worded better....kinda weak as is
I mean comeon, it's plain to see this bitch isn't near me
See I'm makin ya 9-11 look worse, like conspiracy theories
haha, this was cool...though 9/11's been used alot, it was relevant...liked it
You ain;t having a pro, this kid wants to spar me?
See I'll screw your 16's with ease like drunk bitches at parties
ehh....didn't like this...weak but not horrible
Yeah, I won't fuckin stop till your rep is plastered
I mean, this piece of shit's the only time your lines ain't gettin' answered (questions...)
he got a response in that which detracts from the punch a lil....but the idea of the line was good, and it was worded pretty well
This kid won't fit with the tension
'Cos the way I'm putting a stop to your Vengeance, just call me Witness Protection (oh!)
ehh...a lil indirect....but it was ight
This is what LA expected, when this bitch is droppin'
'Cos this ain't the first fuckin time a Lil Chris is flopping...
haha, had to look up who he was (which maybe made it funnier?)...but decent closer

UNLM -

Fake king fell off rein sting him with a hell of pain, he's a prick
Mix this bitch up, cause it's common to see "sparta" taken for a dick!*
ive never been a fan of the "mix it up" lines, cuz u kinda give urself too much freedom with the ppl's names....but being wat it is, this was a decent opener (though i dont see how u would mix somone up BECAUSE he's often mistaken for a dick?)
Your not sick, harming ya with insominia so watch his fuckin face fall
I'ma throw "SP" out for vengeance like strict umpires in baseball!*
hmm...seems like u just thought that SP means starting pitcher and tried to force a punch....wasnt bad, but starting pitchers dont usually get thrown out that often...decent punch though
Hope is down since last time I came dope to this clown, it's true
Though I'm STILL the "Underdog" so I'll take out S and put through U*
its good enuf as is, but the play itself good have had more "umph" if worded better, i.e. what does superman having an S have to do with u taking out S? did you USED to be superman but now ur just underdog?
He reeking n' 'sneaking with his garbage' but i'll handle it no doubt
Cause Spartans with their trash always get knocked the fuck out!
hahahahahahha @ the video...its not a "real" or even popular video though, so not sure how well it works for the punch...definitely made me laugh tho
Sit n' pout after i beat this ass vet, I mean he doesn't pass a threat
Since by his sig we can tell sparta always misses with shots on the net
funny thing is, rameez used this concpt i believe...obviously with less accurate grammar, but same reference...of course u put ur own lil twist on it tho....id say this is a good bar
I'll suffocate sparta in his own "whine" like I had his mother's consent
Ya on descent,
Cause like sparta profusely sweats, he "stinks" since he lost the accent*
ehh...the first line was a nice setup...but the second was worded weirdly and the play doesnt make much sense (his accent affected his text? did he start losing battles right after)
So "spa stick" to choking like kids with down syndrome, I'm not messin
You got no substance, ya fucking "A" game is in question!*
haha, not sure what the link's supposed to show...but i liked the punch nontheless
I'ma bombard this retard as we can see this loss is in motion
You know Spar will "snap under pressure" like stormy nights in the ocean!
clever...not sure bout the wordin...but it was nice play/punch....pretty good closer

damn...close
sparta took the flow, UNLM's verse was more complex...in terms of humor, i'd say its bout even...strength of punches is, again, pretty even, but id say UNLM has a very slight edge...sparta took pesonals....
hmm...gotta re-read em
sparta had better concepts that weren't used as well as they could have been...UNLM had pretty good concepts that were used very well for what they were...i think UNLM had the stronger verse....sooo...i think i gotta go with UNLM in this one...

Vote: UNLM
very close battle guys, good luck

Sparta - Decent way to open up..Nothing to special but decent none the less..tbh I wasnt feeling the next bar because there was only one crew vote that was casted for him..3rd bar seemed like filler honestly..no real hit..4th was dope..the play was nice and I was feeling this because it incorperated a personal too..5th bar like Bolo said wasnt good really..ive seen this done and I think ive wrote a similar concept?very played..6th decent little punch..seemed like a bit of a reach though..7th was dope..original and came nicely off the tounge...Closer was pretty good..nice little research done..

UNLM - Tbh I wasnt feeling the opener at all..2nd bar was Nice..I play baseball myself so I understand it hehe..good play..3rd was a decent play..alright hit..4th nice..Made me laugh actually nice job..5th pretty decent the play itself was alright at best..6th Dope A game bar..This was real nice..clever..Decent closer..alright play..

To sum everything up Sparta only had 2 standout bars to me..the verse seemed really inconsistent and well imo he could of came harder..UNLM although didnt hit me with any "wow" bars did stay fairly consistent falling off very little..So my votes gotta go to UNLM..He just applied himself more to this battle..

iunno...this battle was pretty close...both brought good punches and what not...lets see

sparta, I was really impressed with the aggresiveness of the verse...punches were delievered and landed hard.  flow was good...A nice tourney verse

UNML, Your verse was good as well...Punches were cool...flow was terrible tho...it really made this hard to read

Based solely on that, I vote sparta...

(I could give a more in depth vote later, headed to class now tho)

Voters were you at..stop sleepin

This has been open for 9 days Scotty...