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The_Guy 
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 Posted: 12 August 2013 at 12:08am |
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One more vote? or a few more to make this competitive
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Zinaii
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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 6:02pm |
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The_Guy
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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 6:45am |
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upppn....before I head to bed
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Trinity
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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 7:10am |
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you unworthy of a compliment, its curtains for them "rhymes" you spit
and once I "diss guys", you'll be "virtually anonymous!" Not really feeling.. pretty weak opener turn u to damaged goods like dents in a Porsche, i know wat u gone mention of course zinaii "losing record" like a dj with short term memory loss Using personals on self dont seem to work in battles IMO so don't talk street shit we don't believe you guy i sum up his street cred spelling his name; G? U? Y? Um, weak I see fakeness with eagle eyes, u aint come prepared at all so like "R&B groups" from the 90s consider GUY an "ERRAND HAULED!" This so far is best bar from you and its not great at all. leave your career on hault, from the scope i hold; headshot! watch both eyes roll yall thought he had the rap shit on lock? well i just broke guys code! Na man.. weak closer Your verse was half filler and the rest was just some random shit. You need to get personal on your opponent and NOT YOURSELF. Get creative, complex, and ALWAYS aim at your opponent with punches. Upgrade your concepts, be more direct, and personal... You may start winning more battles consistently. Zin's a beast? nah see I've tamed his kind before He couldn't key up hot shit with acid on his keyboard This is very general and played/weak opener See whore, Im bringing destruction, you should of opted out He cares less bout 'house rules', thats before ki locked him out Weak personal, at least an attempt And knocked him out, but he swears he got the hammer like tanks PB gave him a 'BrewZin' from 'shots' and 'bars' and PB shoot off blanks Personal was a little stronger here. Decent I'm climbing the ranks, vividly spitting words that're enlightened And he sits at #83, like he co-signed with Haydn Okay.. Personal on ranking in Text, however, simple/weak.. another attempt Fuck redemption, he's gonna pay back the time I wasted on his crud rhymes Slay him with each one of my bars since he begged for these bloodlines Mediocore closer at another attempt at a personal Judging by your first 2 bars, you were not giving all effort into this battle. You had the personals there, however, executed them in the weakest way possible. Your flow was a little choppy as well. You had attempts at personals from bar 3 and on... and weak hits but was enough to handle Zin's verse who was consistently missing. VOTE: GUY
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The_Guy
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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 7:39am |
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ok cool...preciate the vote trinity...that makes it 5-1 my win...close up mod
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 10:16am |
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Guy gets the win
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