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Zinaii 
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 Topic: zinaii vs kiki spirezPosted: 08 August 2013 at 11:40pm |
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house rules no flip no crew votes due in a hour check
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 08 August 2013 at 11:47pm |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 08 August 2013 at 11:49pm |
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chineck
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Zinaii
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 12:16am |
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i could care less bout "house rules", guess ill raid his spot then
i tailormade a grave to box him, he drop verses everyday and still aint made the top ten! im playin offense, his raps is a waist like where i tuck my hammer leave him in a box, like his picture on the bloodline battle! nobody admires you man, you a bored geek just tryna advance spirez is the man? not! around him, i smell pussy; gynecologist hands! hell win by default, stand up soilder! give him two if he flinch then he gone ima bite u like o block, but it aint lyrics ima clinch my theeth on sayin kikis the best is preposterous, hes a hermaphrodite like baphomet while yall struggle to break him, i figure ki out like a locksmith |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 12:18am |
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Expo's- *'Z' last in the Alphabet. *'Surfin Bird' is the terrible record in Family Guy. *Click on 'Homepage' on his profile, it comes up with porn, one of the links is 'Adult Baby Chat'. *Said- 'My record can't get any worse' in the Call Out thread. *Said he couldn't stop laughin' at Point Blanks GIF in the 'Dougys Ban' thread. First off, you're not a newb that i'll only 'squeeze past', Please.. Even children get taught that Z's last, Weak tracks along with a record worse than 'Surfin' Bird', Cursin' cos it's me, my ego, then Z's lurkin' 3rd, I'm assured- Because the Adult Baby Chat crocked up, Now he can talk to other 'kids' that 'got fucked', 'My record couldn't get worse', wait 'til my laugh's over! Z clearly forgot THIS 'L'.. He's like a bad stoner, Smacked so the freak gets memory loss- Factual blots, Laughin' at Blanks- He'll crease at my actual shots.. |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 12:20am |
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lol....I wanted to post that bloodline pic ki but I couldn't find it hopefully everybody remembers everything else shuld b self explanatory
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 12:23am |
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The battle's in the normal battle archive mate. Probably like on the 2nd page.
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Zinaii
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 12:27am |
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yeeeaaa don't put bloodlines in the tourney archive? pretty smart mods...n e ways heres the link http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/bloodlines-kiki-spirez-vs-ellduduronron_topic25571.html
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Zinaii
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 12:33am |
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uppin detailed votes please
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 9:11am |
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Flow: Kiki.... Zin seemed choppy at points throughout verse
Punches: Kiki..... seemed even on this.. both hit and misses but Kik came more direct Personals: Kik... came good with various angles on this and came stronger when used Complexity: Tie.... nothing really to worth mentioning Creativity: Kiki... was a little more witty with his bars Vote: Kiki... more direct and stronger hitting than Zin in pretty much all aspects. It seems zin came fairly decent in first 4 lines but then fell off after. Decent battle though. |
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Posted: 09 August 2013 at 1:19pm |
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Appreciate your time T.
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 5:18am |
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Good battle... both came with personals and decent punches... the flow thing i think is some times over rated some rappers can fit more syllables in a bar and then go back to a short bar and keep a 'Flow' MGK yelawolf tech nine flow is a very over exadrated thing in text... that being said... ki had a better flow(imo) i think i miss out on some of the snap on ki's punches cause i dont understand British slang.
The multies were good on both accounts... both of you could work on using wp and np a little better.. some of the concepts have been played out for both names.. (not your faults) this was a close vote... KiKi gets my vote though just barely because i felt his punches were research to hit more..
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 5:52am |
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thank u j brenn u explained it perfect....what fun is it if everybody raps the exact same way good vote g
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 6:16am |
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we dropped this battle in less then a hour yall no im not swaying im just stating facts
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 2:24pm |
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Zin: This could verse could have really shined for you. You started off well but you lost that direct approach you had in the first two bars. I thought the kiki in a box line is getting a bit played, as well as the Key/blacksmith lines. I understand that these verses were quick keys so I'll take that into account. With nameplays against simple names like Ki, it's hard to really get an original play, so you'll have to think outside the box on those ones. As far as the gynecologist and o block lines were kind of mehh. I can definitely tell that you are improving. The verse flowed fine too.
Kiki: With the exception of two bars, as with win zin most of the concepts were mehh IMO. The bad stoner, and Alphabet line are too played. The surfin bird line I thought could have been worded better. But the Blanks lines, and especially the 'got fucked' line were crack. Your verse was very direct and had some nice personals in it. And as always you write with that sickly smooth flow. MGVT Kiki - Kiki was more consistent and his better punches outshined Zin's better punches. Taking into account that both verses were quick writtens, I can understand the unoriginally in some of the lines. Good battle guys. Zin keep improving like you are.
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 2:30pm |
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Yea I agree with the others, you're definitely getting better zinaii, you seem to have got multies locked down now and you're getting the right idea on how to include personals and punches, just need to work on your delivery. Opener was solid though
Kiki takes the KO |
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