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Form: LLLWLW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2013 at 7:27am
MVGT Que 6-3

Que your rhyme was deeper with far more wordplay ... your ellipses ... were ... a ... little ... over ... the top though. Were you thinking when you typed ... those? One could be used dramatically but just use spaces I'f you want a word to stand out?

Zin you called him bro in your rhyme and you said faggot 3 times, could you have been more creative? The ends of your sentences rhyme good but the start and middles miss rhymes meaning your sentences are like word word word word rhyme, word, word, word, word, rhyme and more rhymes would battle rhyme better iykwim
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Form: NNWLNL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 December 2013 at 7:39pm
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