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    Posted: 08 July 2004 at 9:02am
Begginers Basics!
 
WORDPLAY:

Wordplay is baically the linking of words and using them in a clever way to diss and punch your opponent, Here is an example:
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I battered this bitch A-Clipz..left him shattered in eight~Bitz..//
This fool couldnt shake me if he had epileptic fits..//

This wack fool counlt fight his way out of a paper bag..//
An when i see his mom..ima spar a bout an box this slag..//

This is a very very simple example!

MULTIS:

Multis are when you use 3 or more rhymeing words in a single line/bar or start the next line with a simlar sounding word/phrase, Heres an example:
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I battered this bitch A-Clipz..left him shattered in eight~Bitz..//
This fool couldnt shake me if he had epileptic fits..//





STRUCTURE:

Try to get you lines/bars roughly the same length, Here is an example:
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texttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttext//
texttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttext//

texttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttext//
texttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttexttext//


SYLLABLE:

You want your syllables around the same. (stay around 12-15 syllables per line/bar).

For example (Not to do):
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kidnapp yo girl and b!tch slapp that ho like Im a pimp/
cause you a wimp/

*See how it's uneven and dont flow smoothly/

RHYME SCHEMES:

Try not to rhymes words that are similar in sound or obviously sound/written. alike.
And dont use basic words, try to expand your vocaburlary.

For example (Not to do):
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To me you ain't nothin but a snitch/
Now I realize that youare a bitch/

sn-itch
b-itch

*You can obviously infer that those two words sound alike and spell alike.
*Instead rhyme words that are not obviously alike.
*You dont always have to, but most of the time you should, if you dont want you rhymes to sound basic.

DISSES (PERSONALS)


When you diss somebody you want to make it personal.
What that means it, say a diss you can only say to that person.
When in a battle flow is important, but it all comes down to the diss.
For Examples:

Lets say a textcee named "DVD" is battling a textcee named "MC Murder"

DVD (not to do):


your mommas a bitch/
cause she suck dick/

*not only is that played out and basic, you can say that to anybody.
It can be directed at anyone.

DVD (what to do):

(His name is MC Murder, what can you say about him personally)

1) What could MC stand for?
2) What can I say about Murder?

sayin u roll on 22's, & roll with other stars/
when it fact "MC" stands for your mother's car/

you say you murder, like you commit homicide/
if I were in your shoes, I'll commit suicide/

*See I used his own name against him.
*I could have used that diss against others, but it's more effective when you use it against a textcee that have the name "Murder".

MC Murder:

(what could he say about DVD)

1) again!!! what could dvd stand for?
2) how can I use his name against him?
3) How can I use his rhymes aagainst him?
(When you go last it's a advantage because you get to say the last word, and you get to use there own rhymes against them.)

Example:

This cat is wack, I think I'll beat him with ease/
His name DVD, like he got a new found sexual disease/

Use his rhymes against him:

Example:

my mom's car? beat you again like covered up re-cycle/
Im not like you, I dont borrow my Lil brothers bicycle/

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when you are in an actual battle, you can diss there clothes or their looks, race, gender, hair, shoes, voice.

But this is textcee we can see each other. so be creative and look at their profile.
Use their name, country, their quotes, occupation. and use it against them.

I hope this will help some of them members who are just starting to net battle!

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Nice... but you have to show the Battle -Vs- Me... ?

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this is a good idea for a topic.. i recommend all rooks to come in here and look...
<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v313/G-Pfeif/SuckaMCTo-DoList.png" />

"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City"

"Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks"
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Dam stright, I be looking here for a REfreash.....good shit to know, but it's still your way, but we can all learn and take some very good as\dvise from this.

Thanks XXplosive

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thanx XXplosive im a newbie so il take ya advice and try and use it but i aint makin no promises        &nbs p;  coz er dat aint neva bin ma strongpoint ;)

thanx once agen

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no problem!

hope you stay active and enjoy been part of Lyrical Assault!

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dat was good cheers xx im tryina elevate atm lol
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