Forum LockedCrew Battles: Stalin vs sjaydogg

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    Posted: 14 July 2004 at 4:20pm

RENEGADES vs CHRONIC FILTH CREW

  • 5 bars
  • Votes: no crews, explanation must be more than categories, first to 3
  • sjaydogg spits first
  • No deadlines, just don't take the piss

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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 July 2004 at 5:06pm

and agen, G'luck 2 u both

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 July 2004 at 11:26am

Stalin darlin, leave you so merciless youll be crawlin,
where as im in the driving seat, you be bawling and stalling,
a metaphor for your whore dumbass crew, sticks and stones inside to hurt you
gna break ya' neck Busta, fall into my cluster of Rhymes, hang y'all ona shrine
until you feel weaker and weaker, Stalin run along wit Hitler im a jew n il beat ya
not religious in my time, ill cook you kosher, bake n steam ya, hav a lil feaster
my flow is in time wida beatbox Rahzel, your'a new skool join pay as ya go cartel
then all you hate for jews crew can have a champagne dance
On my wall each Renegade pic is constantly smothered with darts
ATTACK! this is me at you like a shark, listen to the sjaydogg bark cumin from ma heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and im out!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 July 2004 at 9:38am

hurry up stalin, spit bak

peace

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 July 2004 at 9:55am

He lives in the US, so his times online are different to ours... I'll holla at him when I next catch him on MSN.

Good luck both.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 July 2004 at 5:54pm
only 4 bars...

ya styles hollow like a glock wit the tips, no stoppin the hits
U already killed im a prophet wit this, Im 'sonnin' this fool like I 'adopted' this kid
im sicker than retards wit rabies, He was beat before I start to spray these
im armed and crazy, ur verse is more 'empty' than 'starvin' babies
ill inflict ya wit hits, Jaydogg aint 'paper' but im rippin this shit
ya verse is wack so I aint flippin ya spit, ill leave him red like what drips from this bitch
even wit the 'earth' u couldnt 'quake' the site, if u was a thief u couldnt 'take' a life
leave ya 'seein nothin' like i was 'breakin lights', if ya 'penis was a mic' u couldnt 'shake' the mic
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 July 2004 at 7:32pm

Lol haha. ight heres my vote


SJD

Not a bad one from you, had its strong point but had sum weaknesses which held back the verse. Liked the flow u had at sum parts, helped keep it goin on well. Had sum ok multis, but had to read it a second time to really see them in their. Couldnt see much strong wordplay and u was too much like me this me that. But was an oright verse, kept the punches cumin nicely

Stalin

In just 4 bars u had it all, sick as a muh fucker. From the start had constant wordplay tied in with the multis and hits, thought it was a well good verse. Been sittin here tryin to pick out a good bar but they were all good lol. Didnt really need to make it 5 bars, u had everythin in their in 4. Flowed well 2 with the shorter lines at the beginnin.

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Good all round verse from Stalin, much more enjoyed it. Sjay's was cool but didnt have much in it. Not much more 2 say.....

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 July 2004 at 7:48pm
Flow ~ Stalin - both iight
Punches ~ Tie
Multis ~ Stalin - were more syllabled
W/Play ~ Sjay
Complexity ~ None
Humour ~ Stalin - im sicker than retards wit rabies, - lmfao
Vote ~ Stalin


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 July 2004 at 7:54pm
Sjay youre improving - but not really enought o count for anything against this guy

Stalin.. i liked this  you did just enought to beat him.. but it was a high class spit.

all categories fly through to stalin


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 July 2004 at 5:03am

thank you hanging thats all i want to do is improve and mayb in the NEAR future i will give this one more of a match

thanks for the feedback though

WELL DONE STALIN PEACE

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 July 2004 at 11:44am
Lock this. 2-0 Renegades.
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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