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Zinaii 
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 Topic: zinaii vs young chefPosted: 05 May 2014 at 1:42am |
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4 bars 1 hour no flips
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YoungChef
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Posted: 05 May 2014 at 2:04am |
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I don't know much about you so I guess I'll guess
Probably rap about greasing the Mitchell and Ness Or how you killed that guy and put two in his chest then found out later he was wearing a vest Give it a rest High-school all over again you failing the test Battle rap is an art, it's grimey at it's best call me Davinci I won't settle for less Z-I-N-A... Fuck it, I can't even read your name. |
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Zinaii
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Posted: 05 May 2014 at 2:08am |
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[/C] A noob itching to lose; when it comes to war he antsy/
But I'm quick to school a "young chef like Gordon ramsey He "hails kitchens"; but his product never excites ur taste buds/ But me? All of my " punches nail", like fights in gay clubs/ I'm precise when angered; but before we battled I was just fine U answered my call out and I said; yc? Like depressed blinds/ ruin ya rep? Fine; just know u never dealt hits better I got chef scared of my presence; health inspector [/C] |
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eastrenegade
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Posted: 05 May 2014 at 2:14am |
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youngchef: you didnt hit him with anything, your punches were pretty generic, which makes them weak, I was expecting a personal or something. You need to work on build up to your punches and dissing the guy your going against, it makes punches stronger, your flow wasnt bad though
Zinaii: the gay clubs line had me lol great punches and metas, flow was on point too. strong opener, but felt the closer could of been stronger. Overall great verse. Vote: Zinaii |
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cickcat
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Posted: 05 May 2014 at 2:22am |
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Zinaii: First and last bars were the bomb-diggity, actually made me chuckle. 2nd bar had a reference so it's ok, third idk if I get it - is it like yc = "why see"? Young Chef: 2nd bar was the best as far as punches go. Props for keeping same rhyme but if it impeded your punches (which I'm guessing it did) it wasn't worth it. I've only been on this site a little while but the one most important thing I've learned is that for these guys punches (meaning jokes that conclude the bars) are the cake and rhymes are the icing. You can have a cake without icing but icing without cake won't win any awards. MVGT: Zinaii
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ferrinheight
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Posted: 05 May 2014 at 9:11am |
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@youngchef: seems like you could have put more effort into your pl's. your first bar did not make much sense to me. you did rhyme each bar, however you gotta entertain the 'crowd'. @ zinaii: your first bar was great but you kinda dropped off after that. I believe in your 3rd bar where you said "yc?" it was meant to read like "why see" and is also the two capital letters of 'Y'oung'C'hefs name(correct?). regardless if it makes you laugh, you gotta make the 'crowd' laugh to get the W.
vote goes to Zinaii as he hit harder, made me laugh(in a good way), and had better content
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YoungChef
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Posted: 06 May 2014 at 9:02am |
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I will take the advice to heart. I'm just having a hard time finding things to play off of. The name didn't give me much, but I got you guys next battle, be ready.
That Ramsey bar killed, good battle zinaii. |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 09 May 2014 at 7:13pm |
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3 KO to Zin
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